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Be an official, go to school and run business. If let you choose one, which one would you like to choose? I also don’t know how to choose them, but I can share with you guys some of my points.
Being an official definitely is not a bad thing, especially in China. But it seems no matter what position you have, you would never be satisfied with it and you would think you should have a higher position. If you don’t, you probably feel dissatisfied and complain a lot. Going to school is really a tough thing and many people hate it. But no matter what grates they get, few people are dissatisfied with it. For instance, others were admitted to Peking university but you aren’t, do you complain? Or do others get a high score but you don’t, do you complain? Run business is also hard work, doing the same business and someone becomes a millionaire while someone gets broken. Do the brokers complain? Generally they are not. Different occupations have different characteristics. The key is which occupations suit you enough, then you can do it.

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Sept. 7, 2020

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Be an official, go to school and run business.


Be an official, go to school and, or run a business. Be an official, go to school, or run a business.

If these are separate choices, "or" is more appropriate.

If let you choose one, which one would you like to choose?


If let you chooseyou had to pick one, which one would you like to choose? If you had to pick one, which one would you like to choose?

I also don’t know how to choose them, but I can share with you guys some of my points.


I also don’t know how to choose between them, but I can share with you guys some of my pointsthinking. I also don’t know how to choose between them, but I can share with you guys some of my thinking.

Being an official definitely is not a bad thing, especially in China.


Being an official is definitely is not a bad thing, especially in China. Being an official is definitely not a bad thing, especially in China.

But it seems no matter what position you have, you would never be satisfied with it and you would think you should have a higher position.


But it seems that no matter what position you have, you would never be satisfied with it and you would think you should have a higher positione. But it seems that no matter what position you have, you would never be satisfied with it and you would think you should have a higher one.

If you don’t, you probably feel dissatisfied and complain a lot.


If you don’t, you get one, you will probably feel dissatisfied and complain a lot. If you don’t get one, you will probably feel dissatisfied and complain a lot.

Going to school is really a tough thing and many people hate it.


Going to school however is really a tough thing and many people hate it. Going to school however is really a tough thing and many people hate it.

But no matter what grates they get, few people are dissatisfied with it.


But no matter what gratdes they get, there will also be a few people who are dissatisfied with it. But no matter what grades they get, there will also be a few people who are dissatisfied with it.

Your sentence emphasizes that most people will be satisfied. My correction changes the focus back towards the people who will be dissatisfied - I am guessing that this is what you intended.

For instance, others were admitted to Peking university but you aren’t, do you complain?


For instance, if others were admitted to Peking university but you aweren't, wouldo you complain? For instance, if others were admitted to Peking university but you weren't, would you complain?

Or do others get a high score but you don’t, do you complain?


Or doif others get a higher score but you don’tthan you, do you complain? Or if others get a higher score than you, do you complain?

Run business is also hard work, doing the same business and someone becomes a millionaire while someone gets broken.


RunFinally, running a business is also hard work, doing the same. Many people have similar businesses, and someoneoften one person becomes a millionaire while someone gets brokenthe others gets bankrupted. Finally, running a business is also hard work. Many people have similar businesses, and often one person becomes a millionaire while the others gets bankrupted.

"bankrupt" = "go broke" (if that's what you meant)

Do the brokers complain?


Do the broker ones complain? Do the broke ones complain?

"brokers" means something else.

Generally they are not.


Generally they aredo not. Generally they do not.

Different occupations have different characteristics.


The key is which occupations suit you enough, then you can do it.


The key is to find which occupations suit you enough, then you can do it. The key is to find which occupations suit you enough, then you can do it.

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