My first trip towards the Galapagos My first trip to the Galapagos

At may of 2015, my wife and I took a vacations. At may of 2015, my wife and I took a vacation.

you took 1 vacation.

At mIn / during May of 2015, my wife and I took a vacations. In / during May of 2015, my wife and I took a vacation.

The chosen destination was Galapagos, in my country Ecuador. The chosen destination was Galapagos, in my country Ecuador.

The chosen destination was/ the destination we chose was the Galapagos, in my country Ecuador. The chosen destination / the destination we chose was the Galapagos, in my country Ecuador.

It sounds more natural to include "we," as in "The destination we chose..."

I hadve never traveled to Galapagos before, so I hadwas a bit afraid, because it was my first trip on an airplane. I have never traveled to Galapagos before, so I was a bit afraid, because it was my first trip on an airplane.

when describing emotions, use 'be' verbs like 'am' or 'was'

I had never traveled to the Galapagos, so I hadwas a bit afraid, because it was my first trip on an airplane. I had never traveled to the Galapagos, so I was a bit afraid, because it was my first trip on an airplane.

When we were inreached Galapagos, everything was so much expensive, however the beaches and landscapes were the most beautiful ones I have ever seen. When we reached Galapagos, everything was so expensive, however the beaches and landscapes were the most beautiful ones I have ever seen.

When we were in the Galapagos, everything was so much expensive, h. However, the beaches and landscapes were the most beautiful one II have ever seen. When we were in the Galapagos, everything was so expensive. However, the beaches and landscapes were the most beautiful I have ever seen.

Separate the sentences with a ";" or a "."

I remember a lot of things, for example the marinesea lions, the Chinesse Beaches, and the Tortuga Bay, but the most amazing place was the Junco Mountain. I remember a lot of things, for example the sea lions, the Chinese Beaches, and the Tortuga Bay, but the most amazing place was the Junco Mountain.

I will always will remember the freshness of its air, it was thea unique ocasion when I felt clean breathfeeling to breath in such fresh air. I will always remember the freshness of its air, it was a unique feeling to breath in such fresh air.

its much more idiomatic to describe clean air as 'fresh'

I always will remember the freshness of its air, it. This was thea unique occasion when I felt clean breath. I always will remember the freshness of its air. This was a unique occasion when I felt clean breath.

I hope some day I can to travel with my childrens and my parents, I would likethink they will also enjoy this fantastic place. I hope some day I can travel with my children and my parents, I think they will also enjoy this fantastic place.

I hope some day I can to travel some day with my childrens and my parents,. I would like they willfor them to enjoy this fantastic place. I hope I can travel some day with my children and my parents. I would like for them to enjoy this fantastic place.