Sept. 26, 2022
Today is Monday in Hongkong, and the weather is foggy. I completed a lot things done and feel like the time is flashing soon. Actually I have a lot things still need to be done like writing this eassy. Also, the most important thing is I am unsure whether I am crushing on a girl.
I cannot stop myself to thinking this girl. She likes driving horse and spend much time on studying. I guess she has a goal, which is to has married wtih someone and born some kids. She said I am her crush, but actually everytime I send messages to her, she replys indifferently.
I am really confused, could somebody come to tell me why?
Write something about my day
Today is Monday in Hongkong, and the weather is foggy. Today is Monday in Hongkong, and the weather is foggy.
More natural to say "it is foggy"
I completed a lot things done and feel like the time is flashing soonby.
I completed a lot things done and feel like time is flashing by.
Either:
-I completed a lot of things
or
-I got a lot of things done
Either one works.
Actually I have a lot things that still need to be done like writing this eassay.
Actually I have a lot things that still need to be done like writing this essay.
Also, the most important thing is I am unsure about is whether I have am crushing on a girl.
Also, the most important thing is I am unsure about is whether I have a crush on a girl.
the expression is "to have a crush". "To crush"="to squish, break"
I cannot stop myself tofrom thinking about this girl.
I cannot stop myself from thinking about this girl.
She likes drivding horses and spends much of her time on studying.
She likes riding horses and spends much of her time studying.
I guess she has a goal, which is to has married wtihto someone and bornhave some kids.
I guess she has a goal, which is to has married to someone and have some kids.
She said I am her crush, but actually every time I send messages to her, she replysies with indifferentlyce.
She said I am her crush, but actually every time I send messages to her, she replies with indifference.
"with indifference" is more natural
I am really confused, could somebody come to tell me why?
I am really confused, could somebody tell me why?
or: could somebody come and tell me why?
Feedback
Great work--and good luck with your crush!
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I wrote something about my day
Today is Monday in Hongkong, and the weather is foggy.
Today is Monday in Hongkong and the weather is foggy.
I completed a lot things done and feel like the time is flashing soonby.
I completed a lot things and feel like the time is flashing by.
Actually I have a lot things that still need to be done, like writing this eassay.
Actually I have a lot things that still need to be done, like writing this essay.
Also, the most important thing is that I am unsure whether I have am crushing on a girl.
Also, the most important thing is that I am unsure whether I have a crush on a girl.
I cannot stop myself tof thinking about this girl.
I cannot stop myself of thinking about this girl.
She likes drivding horses and spends much time on studying.
She likes riding horses and spends much time on studying.
I guess she has a goal, which is to hasget married wtith someone and born some kidshave children.
I guess she has a goal to get married with someone and have children.
She said I am her crush, but actually every time I send messages to her, she replyies indifferently.
She said I am her crush but actually every time I send messages to her, she replies indifferently.
I am really confused, c. Could somebody come to tell me why?
I am really confused. Could somebody tell me why?
Feedback
I feel you bro. Just keep being yourself and eventually she will come to you :)
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Today is Monday in Hongkong, and the weather is foggy.
Today is Monday in Hongkong Today is Monday in Hongkong, and the weather is foggy. Today is Monday in Hongkong, and the weather is foggy. More natural to say "it is foggy" |
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I completed a lot things done and feel like the time is flashing soon.
I completed a lot things
I completed a lot things done and feel like Either: -I completed a lot of things or -I got a lot of things done Either one works. |
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Actually I have a lot things still need to be done like writing this eassy.
Actually I have a lot things that still need to be done, like writing this e
Actually I have a lot things that still need to be done like writing this e |
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Also, the most important thing is I am unsure whether I am crushing on a girl.
Also, the most important thing is that I am unsure whether I have a
Also, the most important thing is I am unsure about is whether I have a the expression is "to have a crush". "To crush"="to squish, break" |
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I cannot stop myself to thinking this girl.
I cannot stop myself
I cannot stop myself |
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She likes driving horse and spend much time on studying.
She likes
She likes |
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I guess she has a goal, which is to has married wtih someone and born some kids.
I guess she has a goal
I guess she has a goal, which is to has married |
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She said I am her crush, but actually everytime I send messages to her, she replys indifferently.
She said I am her crush
She said I am her crush, but actually every time I send messages to her, she repl "with indifference" is more natural |
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I am really confused, could somebody come to tell me why?
I am really confused
I am really confused, could somebody or: could somebody come and tell me why? |
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