May 22, 2026
今天我加班了,才四小时。我感觉时间比较慢慢的过了 😒 但是今天热死了!我很高兴下星期不去上班,我真需要休息
Today I worked overtime, only 4 hours. I felt that time was passing quite slowly 😒 but the heat today was insane! I'm glad I'm not working next week lol I need a break
加班
今天我加班了,才四小时。
我感觉时间过得比较慢慢的过了 😒
我感觉时间过得比较慢 😒
The original wording is repetitive. The
但是今天热死了!
我很高兴下星期不去上班,我真需要休息
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Wow, working in hot weather is really annoying.Your Chinese is pretty good. Just watch your word choice.
加班
今天我加班了,才四小时。 今天我加班了,才四小时。
才四小时。听起来好像你还没有加够,还想多加一会。或者是你觉得加班四小时很轻松,根本不算啥。
我感觉时间比较慢慢的过了 过得很慢😒
我感觉时间过得很慢😒
看表情应该这样改。
但是今天热死了!
我很高兴下星期不去上班,我真需要休息。 我很高兴下星期不去上班,我真需要休息。
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多注意句子之间的逻辑关联。否则就显得东一句西一句的。
加班
今天我加班了,才四小时。
我感觉时间比较慢慢的过了 😒
但是今天热死了!
我很高兴下星期不必去上班,我真需要休息。 我很高兴下星期不必去上班,我真需要休息。
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You need to take a break.
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