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leonard

June 26, 2023

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Swimming

I’m very bad at any kind of sport. Swimming is the only activity that I’m good at. Every day in the summer, I always go to the public swimming pool that is about 200 metres from my home. I prefer swimming in the morning to swimming in the afternoon because it’s very cool, calm and quiet so I can have a large space to train my swimming skills. I learned how to swim in grade 3 so I’ve got used to about 3 types of swimming. On the other hand, it’s kind of boring after 30 minutes of just swimming and relaxing in the pool so sometimes I go to swim in the afternoon. At that time, the pool is crowded with people. It’s hard to get the space to swim but it has a lively atmosphere. I usually invite my friend to play together in the pool. We often challenge each other by playing games, making swimming competitions, diving, etc. After that, we go to a restaurant and then go home. Not only in the swimming pool, I also swim on the beach when my family go on vacation on an island or in the sea. I’m sure that swimming is the most popular activity in summer because it is very fun and good for a person’s health. When the summer comes, I know that: “It’s swimming time!”.

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Swimming is the only activity that I’m good at.

Every day in the summer, I always go to the public swimming pool that is about 200 metres from my home.

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leonard

June 27, 2023

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Thank you very much!

Swimming

I'm not very bagood at any kind ofmost sports.

You're original sentence isn't incorrect. Just sounds a bit strange.

Swimming is the only activity that I’m good at.

Every day in the summer, I always go to the public swimming pool that is about 200 metres from my home.

I prefer swimming in the morning to swimminghan in the afternoon because it’s very cool, calm and quiet so I can have a large space, which gives me a lot of room to tprainctice my swimming skills.

I learned how to swim in grade 3 so I’ve got used to about 3 types of swimming.

On the other hand, it’s kind of boring after 30 minutes of just swimming and relaxing in the pool s. So sometimes I go to swim in the afternoon too.

At that time, the pool is crowded with people.

It’s hard to getfind the space to swim but it has a lively atmosphere.

I usually invite my friend to play (/swim) together in the pool.

We often challenge each other by playing games, making swimming competitions, diving, etc.

After that, we go to a restaurant and then go home.

Not only in the swimming pool, I also swim oin the beach when my family goes on vacation ton an island or into the sea.

I’m sure that swimming is the most popular activity in summer because it is very fun and good for a person’s health.

When the summer comes, I know that: “It’s swimming time!”.

Swimming


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I’m very bad at any kind of sport.


I'm not very bagood at any kind ofmost sports.

You're original sentence isn't incorrect. Just sounds a bit strange.

Swimming is the only activity that I’m good at.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every day in the summer, I always go to the public swimming pool that is about 200 metres from my home.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I prefer swimming in the morning to swimming in the afternoon because it’s very cool, calm and quiet so I can have a large space to train my swimming skills.


I prefer swimming in the morning to swimminghan in the afternoon because it’s very cool, calm and quiet so I can have a large space, which gives me a lot of room to tprainctice my swimming skills.

I learned how to swim in grade 3 so I’ve got used to about 3 types of swimming.


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On the other hand, it’s kind of boring after 30 minutes of just swimming and relaxing in the pool so sometimes I go to swim in the afternoon.


On the other hand, it’s kind of boring after 30 minutes of just swimming and relaxing in the pool s. So sometimes I go to swim in the afternoon too.

At that time, the pool is crowded with people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It’s hard to get the space to swim but it has a lively atmosphere.


It’s hard to getfind the space to swim but it has a lively atmosphere.

I usually invite my friend to play together in the pool.


I usually invite my friend to play (/swim) together in the pool.

We often challenge each other by playing games, making swimming competitions, diving, etc.


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After that, we go to a restaurant and then go home.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Not only in the swimming pool, I also swim on the beach when my family go on vacation on an island or in the sea.


Not only in the swimming pool, I also swim oin the beach when my family goes on vacation ton an island or into the sea.

I’m sure that swimming is the most popular activity in summer because it is very fun and good for a person’s health.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When the summer comes, I know that: “It’s swimming time!”.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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