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kiwy

Aug. 26, 2021

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I went swimming at five p.m, because I thought there would be less people at that time. Unfortunately, I was wrong. There were so many children. What the worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing with them. There was a young couple always stand in middle of the pool but never swim. The boy played under the water sometimes, or tried to catch the walking girl. I had to changed my way from time to time.
Thanks to swimming a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enioy myself.
I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestlers, squatting under deep water, then jumped up, over and over again. It was so adorable. A little girl, who looked about 5 years old, swam very freely, just like a fish. I thought she swam better than most of the people who swimming in the pool.
I made a mistake that I shouldn't eat food contained sugar, it made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming. However, I have swam for 70 minutes. I am so happy today.

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Swimming

I went swimming at five p.m,. because I thought there would be lessfewer people at that timethen.

You use "fewer" for things you can count, like people, and "less" for things you can't count, like water.

Unfortunately, I was wrong.

There were so many children.

What thewas worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing withinto them.

There was a young couple always standing in middle of the pool but never swimming.

The boy played under the water sometimes, or tried to catch the girl, who was walking girlaround.

I had to changed my wayroute from time to time.

Thanks to swimminghaving swum a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enijoy myself.

I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestlers, squatting deep under deepthe water, then jumpeding up, over and over again.

It was so adorable.

A little girl, who looked about 5 years old, swam very freely, just like a fish.

I thought she swam better than most of the people who were swimming in the pool.

I made athe mistake that I shouldn't eat of eating (food containeding sugar, i/sugary food). It made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming.

However, I have swam for 70 minutes.

I am so happy today.

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I'm glad you enjoyed your time at the pool!

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kiwy

Aug. 27, 2021

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Thank you.

Swimming


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I went swimming at five p.m, because I thought there would be less people at that time.


I went swimming at five p.m,. because I thought there would be lessfewer people at that timethen.

You use "fewer" for things you can count, like people, and "less" for things you can't count, like water.

Unfortunately, I was wrong.


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There were so many children.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What the worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing with them.


What thewas worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing withinto them.

There was a young couple always stand in middle of the pool but never swim.


There was a young couple always standing in middle of the pool but never swimming.

The boy played under the water sometimes, or tried to catch the walking girl.


The boy played under the water sometimes, or tried to catch the girl, who was walking girlaround.

I had to changed my way from time to time.


I had to changed my wayroute from time to time.

Thanks to swimming a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enioy myself.


Thanks to swimminghaving swum a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enijoy myself.

I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestlers, squatting under deep water, then jumped up, over and over again.


I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestlers, squatting deep under deepthe water, then jumpeding up, over and over again.

It was so adorable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A little girl, who looked about 5 years old, swam very freely, just like a fish.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I thought she swam better than most of the people who swimming in the pool.


I thought she swam better than most of the people who were swimming in the pool.

I made a mistake that I shouldn't eat food contained sugar, it made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming.


I made athe mistake that I shouldn't eat of eating (food containeding sugar, i/sugary food). It made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming.

However, I have swam for 70 minutes.


However, I have swam for 70 minutes.

I am so happy today.


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