Aug. 26, 2021
I went swimming at five p.m, because I thought there would be less people at that time. Unfortunately, I was wrong. There were so many children. What the worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing with them. There was a young couple always stand in middle of the pool but never swim. The boy played under the water sometimes, or tried to catch the walking girl. I had to changed my way from time to time.
Thanks to swimming a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enioy myself.
I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestlers, squatting under deep water, then jumped up, over and over again. It was so adorable. A little girl, who looked about 5 years old, swam very freely, just like a fish. I thought she swam better than most of the people who swimming in the pool.
I made a mistake that I shouldn't eat food contained sugar, it made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming. However, I have swam for 70 minutes. I am so happy today.
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You use "fewer" for things you can count, like people, and "less" for things you can't count, like water.
Unfortunately, I was wrong.
There were so many children.
What thewas worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing withinto them.
There was a young couple always standing in middle of the pool but never swimming.
The boy played under the water sometimes, or tried to catch the girl, who was walking girlaround.
I had to changed my wayroute from time to time.
Thanks to swimminghaving swum a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enijoy myself.
I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestlers, squatting deep under deepthe water, then jumpeding up, over and over again.
It was so adorable.
A little girl, who looked about 5 years old, swam very freely, just like a fish.
I thought she swam better than most of the people who were swimming in the pool.
I made athe mistake that I shouldn't eat of eating (food containeding sugar, i/sugary food). It made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming.
However, I have swam for 70 minutes.
I am so happy today.
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I went swimming at five p.m, because I thought there would be less people at that time. I went swimming at five p.m You use "fewer" for things you can count, like people, and "less" for things you can't count, like water. |
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Unfortunately, I was wrong. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There were so many children. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What the worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing with them. What |
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There was a young couple always stand in middle of the pool but never swim. There was a young couple always standing in middle of the pool but never swimming. |
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The boy played under the water sometimes, or tried to catch the walking girl. The boy played under the water sometimes |
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I had to changed my way from time to time. I had to change |
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Thanks to swimming a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enioy myself. Thanks to |
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I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestlers, squatting under deep water, then jumped up, over and over again. I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestler |
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A little girl, who looked about 5 years old, swam very freely, just like a fish. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I thought she swam better than most of the people who swimming in the pool. I thought she swam better than most of the people who were swimming in the pool. |
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I made a mistake that I shouldn't eat food contained sugar, it made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming. I made |
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However, I have swam for 70 minutes. However, I |
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I am so happy today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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