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Sweet Potatoes

Sweet potatoes were largely planted in my area when I was a child. They were our main food and usually planted in May, and harvested in October.

After harvesting them, people had two ways to store them. One, they sliced the sweet potatoes into slices and dried them in the sun, and then collected them and stored them in houses. Two, they dug cellars and stored sweet potatoes in the cellars.

People almost ate sweet potatoes for three meals every day. In the morning, mothers cut sweet potatoes into pieces and put them into a pot filled with water, and then heated the pot to boil them. Sometimes, people didn't even cut sweet potatoes, but directly put them in the pot.

As for the dried sweet potato slices, people had two ways to eat them. One was to crush the slices and put them into a pot filled with water to cook them. Another way was to grind the slices into flour to make food. People usually used flour to make noodles and steamed buns.


Let me tell you how to make steamed sweet potato flour buns. It was so simple: you mixed the flour and a certain amount of water to make a dough, and then made the dough into many small doughs and flattened the small doughs, finally stuck the flat doughs in a pot (water was at the bottom of the pot and didn't reach where the flat dough was sticking) to cook them.

As for those small and broken sweet potatoes, people put them under their eaves to dry them, because the less water in them, the more delicious they were. When people boiled this kind of sweet potatoes, they tasted more sweet than ordinary ones.

I grew up eating sweet potatoes and everyone grew up with it. So there was a common saying in my area, "sweet potato flour, sweet potato buns, without them we can't survive."

Sweet potatoes used to be the essential food to feed us, but now people have more good alternatives to them, and they have become an exquisite dish in restaurants.

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Sweet potatoes were largely planted in my area when I was a child.

They were our main food, and usually planted in May, and harvested in October.

After harvesting them, people had two ways to store them.

OneFirst, they sliced the sweet potatoes into slices and dried them in the sun, and then collected them and stored them in houses.

TwoSecond, they dug cellars and stored sweet potatoes in the cellars.

People almost ate sweet potatoes for almost three meals every day.

"Almost ate" sounds like they did not eat but almost did. "Almost three meals" means most of their meals, which I assume is what you were going for.

In the morning, mothers cut sweet potatoes into pieces and put them into a pot filled with water, and then heated the pot to boil them.

Sometimes, people didn't even cut sweet potatoes, but directly put them in the pot.

As for the dried sweet potato slices, people had two ways to eat them.

One was to crush the slices and put them into a pot filled with water to cook them.

Another way was to grind the slices into flour to make food.

People usually used flour to make noodles and steamed buns.

Let me tell you how to make steamed sweet potato flour buns.

It was so simple: you mixed the flour and a certain amount of water to make a dough, and then made the dough into many small doughs and flattened the small doughs, f. Finally, you stuck the flat doughs in a pot (water was at the bottom of the pot and didn't reach where the flat dough was sticking) to cook them.

Based on your description, "(water was at the bottom of the pot and didn't reach where the flat dough was sticking)", I think we call them "steamer pots". Your description is still clear and makes sense!

Colloquially in English, when describing a recipe or some sort of procedure, you can use "they" with past tense. For example:
"You mix the flour..." and "They mixed the flour..." sound more natural.

As for those small and broken sweet potatoes, people put them under their eaves to dry them, because the less water in them, the more delicious they were.

When people boiled this kind of sweet potatoes, they tasted more sweet than ordinary ones.

or "These kinds of sweet potatoes"

I grew up eating sweet potatoes andwith everyone grew up with itelse.

or "like everyone else."

So there was a common saying in my area, "sweet potato flour, sweet potato buns, without them we can't survive."

Sweet potatoes used to be the essential food to feed us, but now people have more good alternatives to them, and they have become an exquisite dish in restaurants.

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Your descriptions are very clear, and everything makes sense! The few mistakes here are minor.

Sweet Potatoes

Sweet potatoes were largely planted in my area when I was a child.

They were our main food andsource, usually planted in May, and harvested in October.

After harvesting them, people had two ways to store them.

One, they way was to sliced the sweet potatoes into slices and driedy them in the sun, and then collected them and stored them in houses.

Two, theyhe second was to duig cellars and stored sweet potatoes in the cellars them there.

People almost ate sweet potatoes for almost all three meals every day.

In the morning, mothers cut sweet potatoes into pieces and put them into a pot filled with water, and then heated the pot to boil them.

Sometimes, people didn't even cut the sweet potatoes, but directly put themput them directly in the pot.

As for the dried sweet potato slices, people had two ways to eat them.

OneThe first was to crush the slices and put them into a pot filled with water to cook them.

Another way was to grind the slices into flour to make food.

People usually used the flour to make noodles and steamed buns.

Let me tell you how to make steamed sweet potato flour buns.

It wa's so simple: you mixed the flour and a certain amount of water to make a dough, and then made the dough into many small doughs and flattened the small doughs, finally stuck the flat doughs in a pot (water wasseparated it into smaller units that you then flatten, finally putting them in a pot (with the water at the bottom of the pot and didn'not reach where the flat dough was stickinging the dough) to cook them.

As for those small and broken sweet potatoes, people put them under their eaves to dry them, because the less water in them, the more delicious they were.

When people boiled this kind of sweet potatoes, they tasted more sweeter than the ordinary ones.

I grew up eating sweet potatoes and everyone grew up with it, just like everyone else, eating sweet potatoes.

So tThere was a common saying in my area, "sSweet potato flour, sweet potato buns, without them we can't survive."

Sweet potatoes used to be the essential food to feed us, but now people have more goodbetter alternatives to them, and they have become an exquisite dishdelicacy in restaurants.

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Great job! Just a few corrections!

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Sweet potatoes were largely planted in my area when I was a child.


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They were our main food and usually planted in May, and harvested in October.


They were our main food andsource, usually planted in May, and harvested in October.

They were our main food, and usually planted in May, and harvested in October.

After harvesting them, people had two ways to store them.


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One, they sliced the sweet potatoes into slices and dried them in the sun, and then collected them and stored them in houses.


One, they way was to sliced the sweet potatoes into slices and driedy them in the sun, and then collected them and stored them in houses.

OneFirst, they sliced the sweet potatoes into slices and dried them in the sun, and then collected them and stored them in houses.

Two, they dug cellars and stored sweet potatoes in the cellars.


Two, theyhe second was to duig cellars and stored sweet potatoes in the cellars them there.

TwoSecond, they dug cellars and stored sweet potatoes in the cellars.

People almost ate sweet potatoes for three meals every day.


People almost ate sweet potatoes for almost all three meals every day.

People almost ate sweet potatoes for almost three meals every day.

"Almost ate" sounds like they did not eat but almost did. "Almost three meals" means most of their meals, which I assume is what you were going for.

In the morning, mothers cut sweet potatoes into pieces and put them into a pot filled with water, and then heated the pot to boil them.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sometimes, people didn't even cut sweet potatoes, but directly put them in the pot.


Sometimes, people didn't even cut the sweet potatoes, but directly put themput them directly in the pot.

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As for the dried sweet potato slices, people had two ways to eat them.


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One was to crush the slices and put them into a pot filled with water to cook them.


OneThe first was to crush the slices and put them into a pot filled with water to cook them.

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Another way was to grind the slices into flour to make food.


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People usually used flour to make noodles and steamed buns.


People usually used the flour to make noodles and steamed buns.

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Let me tell you how to make steamed sweet potato flour buns.


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It was so simple: you mixed the flour and a certain amount of water to make a dough, and then made the dough into many small doughs and flattened the small doughs, finally stuck the flat doughs in a pot (water was at the bottom of the pot and didn't reach where the flat dough was sticking) to cook them.


It wa's so simple: you mixed the flour and a certain amount of water to make a dough, and then made the dough into many small doughs and flattened the small doughs, finally stuck the flat doughs in a pot (water wasseparated it into smaller units that you then flatten, finally putting them in a pot (with the water at the bottom of the pot and didn'not reach where the flat dough was stickinging the dough) to cook them.

It was so simple: you mixed the flour and a certain amount of water to make a dough, and then made the dough into many small doughs and flattened the small doughs, f. Finally, you stuck the flat doughs in a pot (water was at the bottom of the pot and didn't reach where the flat dough was sticking) to cook them.

Based on your description, "(water was at the bottom of the pot and didn't reach where the flat dough was sticking)", I think we call them "steamer pots". Your description is still clear and makes sense! Colloquially in English, when describing a recipe or some sort of procedure, you can use "they" with past tense. For example: "You mix the flour..." and "They mixed the flour..." sound more natural.

As for those small and broken sweet potatoes, people put them under their eaves to dry them, because the less water in them, the more delicious they were.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When people boiled this kind of sweet potatoes, they tasted more sweet than ordinary ones.


When people boiled this kind of sweet potatoes, they tasted more sweeter than the ordinary ones.

When people boiled this kind of sweet potatoes, they tasted more sweet than ordinary ones.

or "These kinds of sweet potatoes"

I grew up eating sweet potatoes and everyone grew up with it.


I grew up eating sweet potatoes and everyone grew up with it, just like everyone else, eating sweet potatoes.

I grew up eating sweet potatoes andwith everyone grew up with itelse.

or "like everyone else."

So there was a common saying in my area, "sweet potato flour, sweet potato buns, without them we can't survive."


So tThere was a common saying in my area, "sSweet potato flour, sweet potato buns, without them we can't survive."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sweet potatoes used to be the essential food to feed us, but now people have more good alternatives to them, and they have become an exquisite dish in restaurants.


Sweet potatoes used to be the essential food to feed us, but now people have more goodbetter alternatives to them, and they have become an exquisite dishdelicacy in restaurants.

Sweet potatoes used to be the essential food to feed us, but now people have more good alternatives to them, and they have become an exquisite dish in restaurants.

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