Oct. 11, 2025
Sweating cools our body when hot or active.
Tiny drops come from skin pores.
They take away heat as they dry.
Drink water to replace lost fluids.
Wipe sweat to stay comfortable.
Clean skin stops bad smells.
Smart sweating keeps us healthy during play and work.
Although it's already October, the place where I live is still hot and stuffy.
In the morning and at night, I feel a little bit of autumn.
当炎热或活动时,出汗可以使身体降温。
微小的汗珠从皮肤毛孔冒出。
它们在蒸发时带走热量。
喝水来补充流失的水分。
擦汗,保持舒适。
干净的皮肤可以阻止难闻的气味。
聪明的排汗让我们在玩耍和工作时保持健康。
虽说已经十月了,我住的地方仍然很闷热。
早上和晚上,我会感受到一點秋天的气息。
Sweating cools our body when we are hot or active.
Adding "we are" or the contracted form "we're" would probably be better. This makes it more readable and flows a bit better.
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Overall, great job. I am really impressed (and happy that other people want to learn English)! My only other gripe with this text is that you may want to add some connectives between sentences so that:
"Tiny drops come from skin pores. They take away heat as they dry."
becomes
"Tiny drops come from skin pores, and they take away heat as they dry."
Love this,
Have fun learning English!
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Sweating cools our body when hot or active. Sweating cools our body when we are hot or active. Adding "we are" or the contracted form "we're" would probably be better. This makes it more readable and flows a bit better. |
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Tiny drops come from skin pores. |
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They take away heat as they dry. |
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Drink water to replace lost fluids. |
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Wipe sweat to stay comfortable. |
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Clean skin stops bad smells. |
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Smart sweating keeps us healthy during play and work. |
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Although it's already October, the place where I live is still very hot and stuffy. |
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In the morning and at night, I feel a little bit of autumn. |
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Although it's already October, the place where I live is still hot and stuffy. |
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