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Origami

Origami is the one of Japanese traditional play which is folding or cutting or sticking papers.
According to my research, origami began from 14〜15 cently, and since Edo area, it became as common play for children.
In Japanese shops, they producing many origami which is in different sizes, and different patterns. I have over one hundred origami in my home because I had been in origami four years ago, and I have still liked doing it sometimes.
I do origami when I am waching long videos, like movies. I made desk and chair and more with origami while I was watching 3 set of movies today.
the movies that I watch is "Trick". This series sterted twenty years ago, and it was very famouse.
I have watched it over five times, but I'm still love it and they make me feel scared.
I can watch them only during long holidays, like summer breaks or winter breaks.
Because it is already putted the last story up, and there is one way to wach it. That one way of apply, just set up on long breaks.
Watching "Trick" is one of my habit when I am on long holidays.

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Origami

I do origami when I am waching long videos, like movies.

I can watch them only during long holidays, like summer breaks or winter breaks.

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Origami is the one of Japanese traditional play which is folding or cutting or sticking papers.


Origami is the one of the Japanese traditional play which igames, and involves folding or cutting or sticking papers. Origami is the one of the Japanese traditional games, and involves folding or cutting or sticking papers.

It's usually phrased as "one of the X". To play = verb (eg. I want to play a game) A game = noun, something you play (eg. chess, soccer, charades, etc) I think it would be a bit more natural to say it "involves" these things. You can use "involves" to describe the details of an activity, eg. soccer involves kicking a ball around a field, chess involves using strategy to defeat your opponent, etc Using WHICH here, either "which involves" or "which is", implies origami is one of several options that involve folding/cutting paper. If you use AND, you are saying it is a game AND it involves XYZ (but the other games may be completely different). I'm not sure how you would like to phrase this, you I thought I'd outline 2 potential options for you.

According to my research, origami began from 14〜15 cently, and since Edo area, it became as common play for children.


According to my research, origami began from around the 14-15 centlyuries, and since Edo area, it has became as common playgame for children. According to my research, origami began from around the 14-15 centuries, and since Edo area it has became a common game for children.

I would only use the ~ symbol for rough/inexact estimations of amount, eg. it was ~100kg (it was roughly/around 100kg, but may have actually been 101kg), it was ~$100 (it was roughly/around $100, but may have been slightly more or less), etc. It would go before the number. But it's quite informal, so I wouldn't use it here. Periods of time in Japanese history are usually called "periods", eg. the Edo period, the Meiji perio, the Taisho period Periods of time in other parts of the world are sometime called "eras" instead, eg. the Victorian era, the Paleolithic era, etc There doesn't seem to be a strict rule for when to use each one, but here is a list for future reference: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_time_periods Side note, as far as I know this is also why historical movies/tv shows are sometimes called "period pieces". Because they are set in a past period of time. You could also use "a common activity for children" here. Activity = anything you do, often a leisure activity (eg. a game, hobby, organised event, extracurricular activities)

In Japanese shops, they producing many origami which is in different sizes, and different patterns.


In Japanese shops, they producinge many origami pieces, which is inare different sizes, and different patterns. In Japanese shops, they produce many origami pieces, which are different sizes and different patterns.

You could also say: "they produce many origami pieces, in many different sizes and patterns." You CAN just say "many origami", but I think adding pieces makes it sound much more natural. sizeS and patternS --> plural, so you need to use "are" instead of "is"

I have over one hundred origami in my home because I had been in origami four years ago, and I have still liked doing it sometimes.


I have over one hundred origami pieces in my home because I hadve been doing origami for four years ago, and I have still liked doing it sometimes. I have over one hundred origami pieces in my home because I have been doing origami for four years, and I still like doing it sometimes.

OR: "because I started doing origami four years ago, and I have been enjoying doing it since then." OR: " because I have been doing origami for four years, and I have liked it since then."

I do origami when I am waching long videos, like movies.


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I made desk and chair and more with origami while I was watching 3 set of movies today.


I made desk and chair and more with origami while I was watching 3 set of3 movies today. I made desk and chair and more with origami while I was watching 3 movies today.

A set = a group or collection of things. So a set of movies would be multiple movies, and 3 sets would be even more - assuming minimum 2 movies per set, with 3 sets you would have watched at minium 6 movies.

the movies that I watch is "Trick".


tThe movies that I watch ised were a series called "Trick". The movies that I watched were a series called "Trick".

This series sterted twenty years ago, and it was very famouse.


This series stearted twenty years ago, and it was very famouse. This series started twenty years ago, and it was very famous.

I have watched it over five times, but I'm still love it and they make me feel scared.


I have watched ithem over five times, but I'm still love ithem and they still make me feel scared. I have watched them over five times, but I still love them and they still make me feel scared.

I can watch them only during long holidays, like summer breaks or winter breaks.


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Because it is already putted the last story up, and there is one way to wach it.


Because it is already putted the last story upthe series has already been completed, and there is only one way to wach it. Because the series has already been completed, and there is only one way to wach it.

For put, it is always written as "put" or "puts", never "putted". It conjugates a bit weirdly.

That one way of apply, just set up on long breaks.


That is one way of applydoing it, just set up on long breaks. That is one way of doing it, just set up on long breaks.

Watching "Trick" is one of my habit when I am on long holidays.


Watching "Trick" is one of my habits when I am on long holidays. Watching "Trick" is one of my habits when I am on long holidays.

One of my habitS --> as it is one of multiple habits

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