When I was younger, I thought I wanted to live in the countryside because I have some family there and when Ienjoyed visiteding them I really enjoyed that timre. When I was younger, I thought I wanted to live in the countryside because I have some family there and enjoyed visiting there.

I remember that I loved to see the horses, the hills the, and rivers, etc. I remember that I loved to see the horses, hills, and rivers.

'etc.' is really informal and I would instead change my words to be more general 'animals and nature'

AndThe people over there was so kind, well they are stillwere so kind. The people were so kind.

In school the teachers were strict about not using 'And' to start a sentence. You can but unless it absolutely needs to be connected to the previous sentence I would leave it out.

Now I realized that even when all of that isith these trueths, what I enjoyed the most was playing with my cousins because their games were way better than the ones I played in the city with my friends. Now I realize that even with these truths, what I enjoyed the most was playing with my cousins because their games were way better than the ones I played in the city with my friends.

you are realizing this in the current moment, so need the present tense. 'way better' works here but you can improve your writing with more description 'more fun/more engaging/more creative/etc'

But nNow that I'm a grown man I think, I cant't move on, eaway from the city I live in. Even when the city is a mess I feel I really like to live here. Now that I'm a grown man, I can't move away from the city I live in. Even when the city is a mess I feel I really like to live here.

you can take out 'I think' since you are the author and your opinions are implied. This sentence feels a bit detached from the previous sentences, I would add something to connect like 'Although I loved the countryside as a child, I have grown to like the city as an adult'

Currently I do homework and I can move to the countryside if I want ito. Currently I do homework and I can move to the countryside if I want to.

My wife and I disscussed that thingmoving to the countryside before, but we agreed that we want to live here in the city is where we want to live. My wife and I discussed moving to the countryside before, but we agreed that we want to live here in the city.