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Suspension Bridge Effect

Have you ever heard about "The Suspension Bridge Effect"?
When people cross a suspension bridge, they tend to mistake a feeling that they
kept themselves in suspense and thrilled for a feeling from romance. As a result, a man and a woman tend to fall in love with each other.
I saw a dream on the other day that I was crossing a suspension bridge. When I was about to get to the other shore, the rope of the bridge broke and I was almost thrown into the abyss.
Then, someone gripped my hand and save me. I looked up and found that was my boss.
I don't know why but I recalled The Suspension Bridge Effect then. I said the boss, "Thank you", shaking off his hand, and then I dived into the abyss. There I woke up.
I think it's emergion that I'd rather be enough strong to speak out "No means no" than I come to like the person I don't like.
I thought after I woke up that I became strong because I chose to dive into the abyss(lol).


吊り橋効果
皆さんは、「吊り橋効果」というのを聞いたことがありますか?
吊り橋を渡っている時のハラハラドキドキ感が恋愛によるものと勘違いし、結果、男女が恋に落ちやすくなるというものです。
この間、吊り橋を渡っている夢を見ました。もう少しで向こう岸に着くところでロープが切れ、奈落の底に落ちそうになりました。
その時、私の手を握り、助けてくれた人がいました。顔を見上げると上司でした。
私はなぜかその時吊り橋効果を思い出し、上司へ「ありがとうございます」と言って、手を振り払い、奈落の底へ落ちて行きました。そこで目が覚めました。
嫌いな人を好きになるよりも、「イヤなことはイヤ」とはっきり言える強い自分になりたいという気持ちの現れだったと思います。
目が覚めた後、奈落の底へ落ちることを選択した自分は強くなったなと思いました(笑)

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Suspension Bridge Effect

Have you ever heard about "The Suspension Bridge Effect"?

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Dec. 23, 2019

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Suspension Bridge Effect

As a result, a man and a woman tend to fall in love with each other.

When I was about to get to the other shore, the rope of the bridge broke and I was almost thrown into the abyss.

I don't know why but I recalled The Suspension Bridge Effect then.

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Dec. 23, 2019

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Have you ever heard about "The Suspension Bridge Effect"?

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shiera

Dec. 23, 2019

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Suspension Bridge Effect

Have you ever heard about "The Suspension Bridge Effect"?

As a result, a man and a woman tend to fall in love with each other.

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Dec. 23, 2019

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Suspension Bridge Effect


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When people cross a suspension bridge, they tend to mistake a feeling that theykept themselves in suspense and thrilled for a feeling from romance.


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I saw a dream on the other day that I was crossing a suspension bridge.


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I looked up and found that was my boss.


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I don't know why but I recalled The Suspension Bridge Effect then.


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”そこで目が覚めました”を直訳してみました。

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I think it's emergion that I'd rather be enough strong to speak out "No means no" than I come to like the person I don't like.


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"現れ"をどう訳すかはわかりませんが、できるだけ自然に直してみました。本来の意味が失ってしまったらすみません。

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I thought after I woke up that I became strong because I chose to dive into the abyss(lol).


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