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As a result, a mamen and a woman tend toen may fall in love with each other.

The other correction sounds more natural than the original sentence, I think. This is another alternative.

I sawhad a dream on the other day that I was crossing a suspension bridge.

When I was about to get to the other shoride, the rope of the bridge broke and I was almost thrown into the abyss.

Then, someone grippabbed my hand and saved me.

I looked up and found that it was my boss.

I don't know why, but I recalledthought of The Suspension Bridge Effect then.

Your original sentence was fine, but I think this sounds a bit more natural.

I said the boss, "Thank you"," then after shaking off his hand, and then I dived into the abyss.

Theren I woke up.

I think it's emergionthe dream means that I'd rather be enough strongstrong enough to speak out and say "No means no" than I come to like thebe with a person I don't like.

I thought after I woke up that I became stronger because I chose to dive into the abyss (lol).

Have you ever heard aboutof "The Suspension Bridge Effect"?

"About" isn't wrong but, of is more natural.

When people cross a suspension bridge, they tend to mistake athe feeling that theykept themselves inrose from suspense and thrilled, for a feeling from romance.

I saw a dream on the other day that I was crossing a suspension bridge.

Then, someone gripped my hand and saved me.

I looked up and found that it was my boss.

I said the boss, "Thank you", shaking to him, then shook off his hand, and then I dived into the abyss.

There I woke up at that point.

”そこで目が覚めました”を直訳してみました。

I think it's emergion that I'd rather be enough strong was an emergence of my inner feelings to be strong enough to speak out "No means no", than I come to like the person I don't actually like.

"現れ"をどう訳すかはわかりませんが、できるだけ自然に直してみました。本来の意味が失ってしまったらすみません。

I thought aAfter I woke up that I, I thought I had becaome stronger because I chose to dive into the abyss(lol).

The Suspension Bridge Effect

When people cross a suspension bridge, they tend to mistake a feeling that theykept themselves in suspense and thrilledthe thrill and feeling of suspense for athe feeling ofrom romance.

As a result, a mamen and a womaen tend to fall in love with each other.

I sawhad a dream on the other day that I was crossing a suspension bridge.

When I was about to get toreach the other shoride, the rope of the bridge broke and I was almost thrownfell into the abyss.

Then, someone grippabbed my hand and saved me.

I looked up and foundiscovered that it was my boss.

I don't know why, but at that moment I recalled The Suspension Bridge Effect then.

I said the boss, "Thank you"ank you to my boss and, shaking off his hand, and then I divedI let myself fall into the abyss.

Theren I woke up.

I think it's emergionthe meaning of my dream is that I'd rather be enough strongstrong enough to speak out and say "No means no" than I come to like thesettle for a person I don't like.

I thought aAfter I woke up, I thought that I had becaome strong because I chose to divefall into the abyss(lol).

I saw a dream on the other day thatwhere I was crossing a suspension bridge.

When I was about to get to the other shoride, the rope of the bridge broke and I was almost thrown into the abyss.

Then, someone grippabed my hand and saved me.

Remember to keep it past tense

I looked up and found that the person who saved me was my boss.

I don't know why but I recalled The Suspension Bridge Effect then.

I would probably say remembered here

I said theo my boss, "Thank you", shaking. I let go off his hand, and then I divedfell into the abyss.

Theren I woke up.