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Which do you like a meat or fish? Honestly, I love a fish! Because meats have too many fats in them. And I love sushi! Have you ever been to Japan? Japanese conveyer belt sushi bar, in Japanese "Kaiten Zuzhi" is taste so good! Especially, Hamazushi is my best bar. If you have a chance, I recommend go to it.
This is still a secret, but most Japanese people know that Chawan-mushi is more delicious than sushi, and they order it in Japanese conveyer belt sushi bar.
Which do you like a, meat or fish?
Since you're talking about categories of sushi instead of specific pieces of sushi (that e.g. you're offering to someone), we don't use "a"
Honestly, I love a fish!
Because meat dishes have too manyuch fats in them.
fat is uncountable (i.e. you don't say 1 fat, 2 fats, etc), so it uses "much" instead of "many".
Japanese conveyeor belt sushi bars, in Japanesecalled "Kaiten Zuzshi" isn Japanese, taste so good!
They're かいてんずし right? I don't think any romanisation system converts し to zhi and zhi would be challenging for a native English speaker to attempt to pronounce.
Especially, Hamazushi is my bestfavourite bar.
"my best bar" would imply some level of ownership of the bar, like you own/run many bars, but Hamazushi is the most succesful or most popular.
"my favourite bar" just implies it's your most liked bar.
If you have a chance, I recommend you go (to it / there).
"to it" is fine, but "there" is the word choice a native would use.
This is still a secret, but most Japanese people know that Chawan-mushi is more delicious than sushi, and they order it in Japanese conveyer belt sushi bar.
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Sushi is pretty much always made with seafood here. I think a lot of people here would be surprised to learn that non-fish sushi exists :)
Which do you like a meat or fish?
Honestly, I love a fish!
Because meats havare too many fats in them.fatty.
This might be a more natural way, but I understood what you meant before perfectly fine
Japanese conveyer belt sushi bars, in Japanese: "Kaiten Zuzhi" is, the sushi there tastes so good!
You could say the sushi bars 'are really good', but if you want to say tastes good adding the sushi is a good way
If you have a chancget the chance to go there, I recommend go to it.
This is still a secret, but most Japanese people know that Chawan-mushi is more delicious than sushi, and they order it in Japanese conveyer belt sushi bars.
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Went to Japan last year, it was awesome!! Will have to remember Chawan-mushi
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Which do you like amore meat or fish?
Honestly, I love a fish!
Because meats have too many fats in them.
A,and I love sushi!
Have you ever been to Japan?
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Especially, Hamazushi is my bestwhich is my favorite bar.
If you have a chance, I recommend go to ityou go there.
This is still a secret, but most Japanese people know that Chawan-mushi is more delicious than sushi, and they order it in Japanese conveyer belt sushi bar.
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Japanese conveyer belt sushi bar, in Japanese "Kaiten Zuzhi" is taste so good! Japanese conveyer belt sushi bar, which in Japanese is called "Kaiten Zuzhi" Japanese conveyer belt sushi bars, in Japanese: "Kaiten Zuzhi" You could say the sushi bars 'are really good', but if you want to say tastes good adding the sushi is a good way Japanese convey They're かいてんずし right? I don't think any romanisation system converts し to zhi and zhi would be challenging for a native English speaker to attempt to pronounce. |
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