Dec. 6, 2020
Sushi
Sushi is one of the famous Japanese foods, but I don't often eat sushi. I think sushi uses raw fish so it's perishable so sushi sold in a supermarket is a little expensive. Conveyor-belt sushi restaurants are popular. These kinds of sushi restaurants are reasonable and good for families. It's fun for children to pick up sushi carried by conveyor-belt, and in some restaurants, they can play a mini-game every five plates. Premium sushi restaurants are extremely expensive for me, and I haven't gone yet.
Sushi
Sushi is one of the most famous Japanese foods, but I don't often eat sushi.
I think because sushi uses raw fish so, it's a perishable sfood. So sushi sold in a supermarket is a little expensive.
Your sentence was mostly correct but I just changed it to make it sound a bit more natural, like something a native speaker would be more likely to say.
Conveyor- belt sushi restaurants are popular.
These kinds of sushi restaurants are reasonable and good for families.
It's fun for children to pick up sushi carried by the conveyor- belt, and in some restaurants, they can play a mini-game every five plates.
Premium sushi restaurants are extremelytoo expensive for me, and I haven't gone yet.
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Good writing skills! Most of what you've written is correct, I only changed the phrasing of some of the sentences to make it sound more natural. Good job.
Dec. 7, 2020
Thank you so much!
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Sushi is one of the famous Japanese foods, but I don't often eat sushi. Sushi is one of the most famous Japanese foods, but I don't often eat sushi. |
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I think sushi uses raw fish so it's perishable so sushi sold in a supermarket is a little expensive. I think because sushi uses raw fish Your sentence was mostly correct but I just changed it to make it sound a bit more natural, like something a native speaker would be more likely to say. |
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Conveyor-belt sushi restaurants are popular. Conveyor |
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These kinds of sushi restaurants are reasonable and good for families. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's fun for children to pick up sushi carried by conveyor-belt, and in some restaurants, they can play a mini-game every five plates. It's fun for children to pick up sushi carried by the conveyor |
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Premium sushi restaurants are extremely expensive for me, and I haven't gone yet. Premium sushi restaurants are |
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