March 25, 2020
Survive On Venus (Integrated)
The listening section casts doubt on the reading passage for humans are impossible presence on Venus. First, the reading states that the pressure at Venus's surface is much greater than at Earth's. So, almost everything is landed on Venus by humans, such as spacecraft, would be crushed. The listening part, however, asserts that establishing a station which is floating on Venus' atmosphere rather than surface, the problem can be solve. Since since the pressure on the air is lower than surface. So, there is no danger of the station to be crushed.
Second, the author thinks that Venus contains very less water and oxygen for humans surviving. So, these should be import from Earth to Venus. Yet, the speaker from the listening portion points out that Venus does contains carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, the chemicals are able to produce water and oxygen for humans survival. Thus, it is not necessary to supply these elements from Earth.
Finally, the reading passage mentions that sunlight is blocked by the thick clouds. Since very little light reaches the surface, humans could not get electricity to power. Nevertheless, the lecturer argues that above clouds are not very thick and clouds can reflect the sunlight too. People can collect the light from direct sunlight and reflection from above and below clouds to generate electricity to power the station.
Surviveing On Venus (Integrated)
The listening section casts doubt on the reading passage for humans are impossible presencthat it is impossible for humans to live on Venus.
You could also say "That it is impossible for humans to survive on Venus" or "set foot on Venus" (which effectively means "to visit").
First, the reading states that the pressure at Venus's surface is much greater than at Earth's.
So, almost everything is landed onsent to Venus by humans, such as spacecraft, would be crushed.
You could enclose "such as spacecraft" in parentheses () here, if you wanted to.
The listening part, however, asserts that by establishing a station which is floating on Venus' atmosphere rather than surface, theis problem can be solved.
Since sincThis is because the pressure oin the air is lower than surfaceupper atmosphere is lower than on the surface, and thus there is no danger of the station being crushed.
In this context, it's best to only use "since" if you are continuing on from the previous sentence.
So, there is no danger of the station to be crushed.
You can incorporate this in the sentence above.
Secondly, the author thinks that Venus contains verymuch less water and oxygen than the amount required for humans to survivinge.
SoTherefore, these shouldneed to be imported from Earth to Venus.
You would say "should" if it wasn't imperative, or if you were making a judgement on whether it is the obligation of a person to do something. In this case, it's not really an obligation or a "nice to have", this is a requirement.
Yet, the speaker from the listening portion points out that Venus does contains carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, the chemicals that are able to produce water and oxygen for humans survival.
Thus, it is not necessary to supply these elements from Earth.
Since very little light reaches the surface, humans could not getnerate electricity tofor power.
Nevertheless, the lecturer argues that abovthe clouds are not very thick and clouds can reflect the sunlight too.
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Very well done overall! I was only making small tweaks to make the sentences flow together better, and fit better within the context. Awesome work!
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The listening section casts doubt on the reading passage for humans are impossible presence on Venus. The listening section casts doubt on the reading passage You could also say "That it is impossible for humans to survive on Venus" or "set foot on Venus" (which effectively means "to visit"). |
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First, the reading states that the pressure at Venus's surface is much greater than at Earth's. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, almost everything is landed on Venus by humans, such as spacecraft, would be crushed. So, almost everything You could enclose "such as spacecraft" in parentheses () here, if you wanted to. |
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The listening part, however, asserts that establishing a station which is floating on Venus' atmosphere rather than surface, the problem can be solve. The listening part, however, asserts that by establishing a station which is floating on Venus' atmosphere rather than surface, th |
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Since since the pressure on the air is lower than surface.
In this context, it's best to only use "since" if you are continuing on from the previous sentence. |
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So, there is no danger of the station to be crushed.
You can incorporate this in the sentence above. |
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Second, the author thinks that Venus contains very less water and oxygen for humans surviving. Secondly, the author thinks that Venus contains |
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So, these should be import from Earth to Venus.
You would say "should" if it wasn't imperative, or if you were making a judgement on whether it is the obligation of a person to do something. In this case, it's not really an obligation or a "nice to have", this is a requirement. |
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Yet, the speaker from the listening portion points out that Venus does contains carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, the chemicals are able to produce water and oxygen for humans survival. Yet, the speaker from the listening portion points out that Venus does contain |
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Thus, it is not necessary to supply these elements from Earth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally, the reading passage mentions that sunlight is blocked by the thick clouds. |
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Since very little light reaches the surface, humans could not get electricity to power. Since very little light reaches the surface, humans could not ge |
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Nevertheless, the lecturer argues that above clouds are not very thick and clouds can reflect the sunlight too. Nevertheless, the lecturer argues that |
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People can collect the light from direct sunlight and reflection from above and below clouds to generate electricity to power the station. |
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