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Sept. 9, 2025

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Survival horror games.

Finally, I’ll start with a topic which I love so much: Horror games. Not just games, but anything related to horror. I started this when I was just a kid, around my 11/12/13 years, yes I know this is too early, but even this time, I already had contact with horror games like Resident Evil. The problem is, I didn't know anything in English, barely read, felt lost much easily and I gave up. This is not for me, or so I thought. Starting my adolescence, youtube was already a phenomenon, with a lot of content creators and every type of videos to watch. I always liked to watch videos, mainly about the games, watch videos from my favorite youtubers playing horror games which I didn't have any courage to play, show me that I was passionate for horror games, just not have the bravery to play haha. Analog horror, psychological horror, survival, games, videos, and movies, the creativity involved always captivated me, mainly if it involves monsters. Jumping for the current era, with my 19 years, I always play every game, about horror, as far as survival Horror Resident Evil, psychological horror, Silent Hill, but oddly enough, Outlast 1 it’s my favorite game about horror, not the franchise, but your purpose to be a really scary horror. Putting you into a skin to Miles Upshur, a freelance journalist who receives anonymous denouncing about the strange events in Mount Massive. Miles, doesn't have any weapon, or knows to fight, it’s only you and the unknowns. With this purpose, this game shows me the major physical horror that I have been faced with, a sick game, I recommend it if you are as in love with horror as me.

But in your opinion, do you like horror? Do you have a favorite game?
Feel free to share, I’m interested to know.


Por fim, vou começar com um tópico que adoro muito: jogos de terror. Não apenas jogos, mas qualquer coisa relacionada a terror. Comecei quando era criança, por volta dos meus 11/12/13 anos, sim, sei que é muito cedo, mas mesmo nessa época, eu já tinha contato com jogos de terror como Resident Evil. O problema é que eu não sabia nada de inglês, mal lia, me perdia com muita facilidade e desistia. Isso não é para mim, ou pelo menos era o que eu pensava. Desde a minha adolescência, o YouTube já era um fenômeno, com muitos criadores de conteúdo e todo tipo de vídeo para assistir. Eu sempre gostei de assistir vídeos, principalmente sobre os jogos, assistir vídeos dos meus youtubers favoritos jogando jogos de terror que eu não tinha coragem de jogar, me mostrou que eu era apaixonado por jogos de terror, só não tinha coragem de jogar haha. Terror analógico, terror psicológico, sobrevivência, jogos, vídeos e filmes, a criatividade envolvida sempre me cativou, principalmente se envolve monstros. Saltando para a era atual, com meus 19 anos, sempre jogo todos os tipos de jogos, desde survival horror até Resident Evil, terror psicológico, Silent Hill, mas, curiosamente, Outlast 1 é meu jogo favorito sobre terror, não a franquia, mas seu propósito de ser um terror realmente assustador. Colocando você na pele de Miles Upshur, um jornalista freelancer que recebe denúncias anônimas sobre os estranhos eventos em Mount Massive. Miles não tem nenhuma arma, nem sabe lutar, é apenas você e os desconhecidos. Com esse propósito, este jogo me mostra o maior horror físico que já enfrentei, um jogo incrível, recomendo se você é tão apaixonado por terror quanto eu.

Mas, na sua opinião, você gosta de terror? Você tem um jogo favorito?
Sinta-se à vontade para compartilhar, estou interessado em saber.

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Finally (Firstly?), I’ll start with a topic which I love so much: Horror games.

"love" is already a pretty strong verb, so "so much" feels a little redundant and as a result, unnatural, here.

Finally seems a little odd for the first point.

I started thisenjoying these when I was just a kid, around my 11/12/13 years, (yes I know this is too early,) but even at this time, I already had encountact withered horror games like Resident Evil.

Since you haven't mentioned an action yet, "this" is a little unclear.

"had contact" sounds a little robotic here, so changed to "encountered" for done.

You had a lot of comma seperated thoughts here, so I changed one which is more of a side comment to be parenthesised to make it read a little better.

The problem is, I didn't know anything in English, barely read, felt lost muchtoo easily and then I gave up.

Starting my adolescence, youtube was already a phenomenon, with a lot of content creators and every type of videos to watch.

"every type of" takes a singular noun afterwards.

I always liked to watch videos, mainly about the games, such as watching videos from my favorite youtubers playing horror games which I didn't have anythe courage to play,. This showed me that I was passionate for horror games, just nodidn't have the bravery to play haha.

Again, there's a lot of comma seperated points here, it's clearer to just break it into two sentences.

Analog horror, psychological horror, survival, games, videos, and movies, the creativity involved always captivated me, mainly if it involvesd monsters.

"involved" to match the tense of "captivated"

Jumping (forward) to the current era, with myhere I am 19 years old, I always play every game, about horror, as far such as survival Hhorror games, Resident Evil, psychological horror games, Silent Hill, but o. Oddly enough, Outlast 1 it’s my favorite game about horror, not the franchise, but youtheir purpose to be a really scary horror.

I think you thought it was "jumping for" because you might have heard "jumping forward". I'd guessing people are 50/50 for whether they'd include "forward" in this sentence or not, both work fine.

In some other languages you "have X years" to describe your age, but in English you are "X years old". In casual speech, you can drop "years old", but you have to either include both words or neither word.

"about horror" doesn't work as a clause on its own, so removed the comma separating it from "play ever game"

Putting you into athe skin tof Miles Upshur, a freelance journalist who receives anonymous denouncing about the strange events in Mount Massive.

The noun of "denounce" is "denunciation" but I think that's not the right noun here. It doesn't quite fit within the context.

Miles, doesn't have any weapon, or knows how to fight, it’s only you and the unknowns.

Again "Miles" is not enough of a clause to be seperated by a comma like this.

With this purporemise, this game shows me the major physical horror that I have been faced with, it's a sick game, I recommend it if you are as in love with horror as me.

"sick" as an adjective with a positive meaning is both a little dated (more likely to be used by people in their 30s than 19 year olds, I think), and more casual than the rest of this piece has been written.

But in your opinionas for you, do you like horror?

This is a little nuanced, but you wouldn't ask someone if they like something in their opinion. That's because "in your opinion" is for something where you're asking the other person for an answer with an understanding that they might have uncertainty about the answer they give. However, when it comes to if they like something or not, the default assumption is they will know the correct answer.

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My favourite game changes over time, but I think over the last few years, most of the time it's been Factorio.

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Sept. 16, 2025

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So many thanks to you, I apreciete every explain to help me improve my english

Survival horror games.


Finally, I’ll start with a topic which I love so much: Horror games.


Finally (Firstly?), I’ll start with a topic which I love so much: Horror games.

"love" is already a pretty strong verb, so "so much" feels a little redundant and as a result, unnatural, here. Finally seems a little odd for the first point.

Miles, doesn't have any weapon, or knows to fight, it’s only you and the unknowns.


Miles, doesn't have any weapon, or knows how to fight, it’s only you and the unknowns.

Again "Miles" is not enough of a clause to be seperated by a comma like this.

With this purpose, this game shows me the major physical horror that I have been faced with, a sick game, I recommend it if you are as in love with horror as me.


With this purporemise, this game shows me the major physical horror that I have been faced with, it's a sick game, I recommend it if you are as in love with horror as me.

"sick" as an adjective with a positive meaning is both a little dated (more likely to be used by people in their 30s than 19 year olds, I think), and more casual than the rest of this piece has been written.

But in your opinion, do you like horror?


But in your opinionas for you, do you like horror?

This is a little nuanced, but you wouldn't ask someone if they like something in their opinion. That's because "in your opinion" is for something where you're asking the other person for an answer with an understanding that they might have uncertainty about the answer they give. However, when it comes to if they like something or not, the default assumption is they will know the correct answer.

Do you have a favorite game?


Feel free to share, I’m interested to know.


Not just games, but anything related to horror.


I started this when I was just a kid, around my 11/12/13 years, yes I know this is too early, but even this time, I already had contact with horror games like Resident Evil.


I started thisenjoying these when I was just a kid, around my 11/12/13 years, (yes I know this is too early,) but even at this time, I already had encountact withered horror games like Resident Evil.

Since you haven't mentioned an action yet, "this" is a little unclear. "had contact" sounds a little robotic here, so changed to "encountered" for done. You had a lot of comma seperated thoughts here, so I changed one which is more of a side comment to be parenthesised to make it read a little better.

The problem is, I didn't know anything in English, barely read, felt lost much easily and I gave up.


The problem is, I didn't know anything in English, barely read, felt lost muchtoo easily and then I gave up.

This is not for me, or so I thought.


Starting my adolescence, youtube was already a phenomenon, with a lot of content creators and every type of videos to watch.


Starting my adolescence, youtube was already a phenomenon, with a lot of content creators and every type of videos to watch.

"every type of" takes a singular noun afterwards.

I always liked to watch videos, mainly about the games, watch videos from my favorite youtubers playing horror games which I didn't have any courage to play, show me that I was passionate for horror games, just not have the bravery to play haha.


I always liked to watch videos, mainly about the games, such as watching videos from my favorite youtubers playing horror games which I didn't have anythe courage to play,. This showed me that I was passionate for horror games, just nodidn't have the bravery to play haha.

Again, there's a lot of comma seperated points here, it's clearer to just break it into two sentences.

Analog horror, psychological horror, survival, games, videos, and movies, the creativity involved always captivated me, mainly if it involves monsters.


Analog horror, psychological horror, survival, games, videos, and movies, the creativity involved always captivated me, mainly if it involvesd monsters.

"involved" to match the tense of "captivated"

Jumping for the current era, with my 19 years, I always play every game, about horror, as far as survival Horror Resident Evil, psychological horror, Silent Hill, but oddly enough, Outlast 1 it’s my favorite game about horror, not the franchise, but your purpose to be a really scary horror.


Jumping (forward) to the current era, with myhere I am 19 years old, I always play every game, about horror, as far such as survival Hhorror games, Resident Evil, psychological horror games, Silent Hill, but o. Oddly enough, Outlast 1 it’s my favorite game about horror, not the franchise, but youtheir purpose to be a really scary horror.

I think you thought it was "jumping for" because you might have heard "jumping forward". I'd guessing people are 50/50 for whether they'd include "forward" in this sentence or not, both work fine. In some other languages you "have X years" to describe your age, but in English you are "X years old". In casual speech, you can drop "years old", but you have to either include both words or neither word. "about horror" doesn't work as a clause on its own, so removed the comma separating it from "play ever game"

Putting you into a skin to Miles Upshur, a freelance journalist who receives anonymous denouncing about the strange events in Mount Massive.


Putting you into athe skin tof Miles Upshur, a freelance journalist who receives anonymous denouncing about the strange events in Mount Massive.

The noun of "denounce" is "denunciation" but I think that's not the right noun here. It doesn't quite fit within the context.

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