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Feb. 17, 2024

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Suppose a friend is looking for a job in a new field.

You know change career is hard, right? It’s means you need to find a new job in a new field. But if you decide to do it, I have some suggestions for you. The first one is, find what you really want. Is that field will make you feel better? The second is build your knowledge and experiences. To do some research, learning things is useful. And you also need to build a professional network. It include friends ,family ,neighbors and coworkers. Talk with them about your goals,maybe they’ll help you find a new company. That’s might be help with you. Good luck.

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Suppose a friend is looking for a job in a new field.

You know changeing careers is hard, right?

It’s means you need to find a new job in a new field.

But if you decide to do it, I have some suggestions for you.

The first one isFirst, find what you really want.

IsWould that field will make you feel better?

A common expression used in this context is “would it make you happy?” but “feel better” is fine too.

The sSecond is, build your knowledge and experiences.

To dDo some research, learning things is useful.

Use the dash (—) to connect clauses. Not to be confused with the hyphen (-) which are shorter and used to make compound words.

And you also need to build a professional network.

IThat includes friends , family , neighbors, and co-workers.

A good example of the hyphen. That last comma (the Oxford comma) is optional but I personally always use it because it can change the meaning of some phrases.

Talk with them about your goals, maybe they’ll can help you find a new company.

That’s might be help withful to you.

Good luck.

You know it's hard to change career is hards, right?

Grammatically, I think "You know changing a career is hard" would work, but "It's hard to..." is more idiomatic.

IsWill working in that field will make you feel better?

Again, grammatically maybe "Will that field make you feel better?" could work, but the field doesn't have that kind of agency. It's my working in the field that I think will make me feel better.

To dDo some research, l. Learning things is useful.

The original wording made it sound like you're saying "In order to do research, learning things is useful." Except that learning things is the research so the meaning is unclear.

It can include friends ,family ,neighbors and coworkers.

You know change career is hard, right?


You know it's hard to change career is hards, right?

Grammatically, I think "You know changing a career is hard" would work, but "It's hard to..." is more idiomatic.

You know changeing careers is hard, right?

Suppose a friend is looking for a job in a new field.


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It’s means you need to find a new job in a new field.


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But if you decide to do it, I have some suggestions for you.


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The first one is, find what you really want.


The first one isFirst, find what you really want.

Is that field will make you feel better?


IsWill working in that field will make you feel better?

Again, grammatically maybe "Will that field make you feel better?" could work, but the field doesn't have that kind of agency. It's my working in the field that I think will make me feel better.

IsWould that field will make you feel better?

A common expression used in this context is “would it make you happy?” but “feel better” is fine too.

The second is build your knowledge and experiences.


The sSecond is, build your knowledge and experiences.

To do some research, learning things is useful.


To dDo some research, l. Learning things is useful.

The original wording made it sound like you're saying "In order to do research, learning things is useful." Except that learning things is the research so the meaning is unclear.

To dDo some research, learning things is useful.

Use the dash (—) to connect clauses. Not to be confused with the hyphen (-) which are shorter and used to make compound words.

And you also need to build a professional network.


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It include friends ,family ,neighbors and coworkers.


It can include friends ,family ,neighbors and coworkers.

IThat includes friends , family , neighbors, and co-workers.

A good example of the hyphen. That last comma (the Oxford comma) is optional but I personally always use it because it can change the meaning of some phrases.

Talk with them about your goals,maybe they’ll help you find a new company.


Talk with them about your goals, maybe they’ll can help you find a new company.

That’s might be help with you.


That’s might be help withful to you.

Good luck.


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