June 25, 2024
Support or not
If your friend told you a business plan and asked your opinion, would you support him to try even though you don't think it will succeed?
I'm a little hesitant.
If this project were from my client, I would have many matrixes to show how it might happen in the future. It's my job to be cautious and there are other teams to be ambitious.
But my friend doesn't have a fully functional organization. And he also takes my opinion seriously.
It's said that pessimists are often right and optimists are often successful. What if the plan does work?
支持与否
如果你朋友告诉你商业计划并征询意见，若你认为他不会成功，你还会支持他去尝试吗?
我有点犹豫。
如果这个项目来自我的客户，我将有许多矩阵来显示它在未来可能发生的情况。我的工作是保持谨慎，还有其他团队去雄心壮志。
但我朋友没有一个功能齐全的组织。他也很重视我的意见。
据说悲观者往往对，乐观者往往成功。万一计划真能成呢?
If your friend told you ahis business plan and asked for your opinion, would you support him to try even though you don't think it willould succeed?
June 27, 2024
Thank you!
Have a nice day!
Support or not
If your friend told you a business plan and asked for your opinion, would you support him to try even though you don't think it will succeed?
I'm a little hesitant.
If this project were fpromposed by my client, I would have many matrixces to show how it might happen in the future.
It's my job to be cautious and; there are other teams to be ambitious.
I think and is grammatically okay... but I personally find it a little awkward to use "and" as the connector because these sentences show contrast.
But, my friend doesn't have a fully functional organization.,
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And he also takes my opinion seriously.
It's said that pessimists are often right and optimists are often successful.
What if the plan does work?
Feedback
It sounds like the person really values your opinion/expertise so my guess is that he would want to hear the truth. But instead of just saying whether or not it will work, maybe give him some feedback on the parts of his plan you think might be a problem and some advice on how to fix it?
June 27, 2024
Thank you!
Indeed I gave him detailed feedback and some advice, and also told him the potential risks.
If your friend told you about a business plan and asked for your opinion, would you support him to try even though you don't think ithe will succeed?
I'm a little hesitant.
If this project wereas from my client, I would have many matrixes to show how it might happen in the future.
But my friend doesn't have a fully functional organization.
And he also takes my opinion seriously.
It's said that pessimists are often right and optimists are often successful.
What if the plan does work?
June 25, 2024
Thank you!
Have a nice day!
STo support or not
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I'm a little hesitant.
If this project were from my client, I would have many matrixeplans to show how it might happen in the future.
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It's my job to be cautious and there are other teams to be ambitious.
But my friend doesn't have a fully functional organization.
And he also takes my opinion seriously.
It's said that pessimists are often right and optimists are often successful.
What if the plan does work?
Feedback
Wonderful!
June 25, 2024
Thank you!
Have a nice day!
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