Jan. 18, 2023
Sunset Rollercoaster
Taiwanese band, Sunset Rollercoaster, covered an old Chinese pop song "我是一隻魚", which meant "I'm A Fish" in English, sung by 任賢齊. They re-edited the song with their authentic style. The song was a nod to the 90's Chinese pop song golden era.
The Taiwanese band, Sunset Rollercoaster, covered an old Chinese pop song "我是一隻魚", which meant s"I'm A Fish" in English,. The original was sung by 任賢齊.
Unlike in Chinese, in English you must connect clauses with conjunctions or otherwise break them up into multiple sentences.
They re-ediinterpreted the song with their own authentic style.
A good word to use would be "interpret" -- putting their own spin on it-- since you said the new song is influenced by their own style.
It is good to indicate that the style is authentic to THEM by saying "their own authentic style"
The song was a nod to the 90's Golden Era of Chinese pop song golden eras.
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Very nice! I know Sunset Rollercoaster by "My Jinji." It's a great song
Sunset Rollercoaster
The Taiwanese band, Sunset Rollercoaster, covered an old Chinese pop song "我是一隻魚", which meants "I'm Aa Fish" in English,. It was sung by 任賢齊.
They re-edited the song within their own authentic style.
The song was a nod to the Golden Era of 90's Chinese pop song golden eras.
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Good work!
Jan. 18, 2023
Thank you!
Sunset Rollercoaster
Taiwanese band, Sunset Rollercoaster, covered an old Chinese pop song "我是一隻魚", which meant "I'm A Fish" in English, sung by 任賢齊.
The commas should be deleted because the name of the band is essential information (if you were to omit it, the sentence would no longer make sense and would be grammatically incorrect).
They re-edited the song with their(or: in) their (own) authentic style.
“In their own” sounds more natural, but the original sentence is also grammatically correct.
The song was a nod to the 90's golden era of Chinese pop (song golden eras).
“Songs” isn’t necessary.
I assume you are saying that the 90s were the golden era of Chinese pop.
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Well done.
Jan. 18, 2023
The song was a nod to the 90's golden era of Chinese pop (song golden eras).
We can shed "songs" because "Chinese pop" is enough to indicates the genre. Am I correct?
Jan. 18, 2023
Thank you!
Jan. 18, 2023
We can shed "songs" because "Chinese pop" is enough to indicates the genre. Am I correct?
Yes, that’s right.
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Taiwanese band, Sunset Rollercoaster, covered an old Chinese pop song "我是一隻魚", which meant "I'm A Fish" in English, sung by 任賢齊. Taiwanese band The commas should be deleted because the name of the band is essential information (if you were to omit it, the sentence would no longer make sense and would be grammatically incorrect). The Taiwanese band The Taiwanese band, Sunset Rollercoaster, covered an old Chinese pop song "我是一隻魚", which mean Unlike in Chinese, in English you must connect clauses with conjunctions or otherwise break them up into multiple sentences. |
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They re-edited the song with their authentic style. They re-edited the song with “In their own” sounds more natural, but the original sentence is also grammatically correct. They re-edited the song They A good word to use would be "interpret" -- putting their own spin on it-- since you said the new song is influenced by their own style. It is good to indicate that the style is authentic to THEM by saying "their own authentic style" |
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The song was a nod to the 90's Chinese pop song golden era. The song was a nod to the 90 “Songs” isn’t necessary. I assume you are saying that the 90s were the golden era of Chinese pop. The song was a nod to the Golden Era of 90's Chinese pop song The song was a nod to the 90's Golden Era of Chinese pop song |
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