Dec. 24, 2019
Sunset
When I was walking my dog today, I saw a beautiful sunset. The sky was orange, pale pink and pale blue. It was just like a picture by Turner. I like sunset so much. Because I remember my happy childhood when I used to play outside with friends until it gets dark when I see it.
今日犬の散歩をしていると 綺麗な夕焼けが見えた。空はオレンジ色に淡いピンクと淡いブルーが混じっていた。まるでターナーの絵のようだった。私は夕焼けが大好き。夕焼けを見ると、暗くなるまでずっと、友達と外で遊んでいた幸せな子供時代を思い出すから。
Sunset
When I was walking my dog today, I saw a beautiful sunset.
The sky was orange, pale pink and pale blue.
I like sunsets so much.
Jan. 2, 2020
Thank you so much.
Sunset
When I was walking my dog today, I saw a beautiful sunset.
The sky was orange, pale pink and pale blue.
It was just like a pictureainting by Turner.
I likove sunsets so much.
While "like" is not incorrect, it sounds weird when used with "so much" because "like" expresses only a moderate amount of love while "so much" expresses that there is a lot.
Because I rememberIt reminds me of my happy childhood when I used to see it when I played outside with friends until it getsot dark when I see it.
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Very well written! Only a few minor mistakes! 😊
Dec. 24, 2019
Thank you ！
Sunset
When I was walking my dog today, I saw a beautiful sunset.
The sky was orange, pale pink and pale blue.
It was just like a pictureainting by Turner.
I like sunsets so much.
Because I rememberThey remind of my happy childhood when I used to play outside with friends until it getsot dark when I see iwould see the sun set.
Sunset
When I was walking my dog today, I saw a beautiful sunset.
The sky was orange, pale pink and pale blue.
It was just like a picture by Turner.
I like sunset so much.
Because Iit rememberinds me of my happy childhood when I used to play outside with my friends until it getsot dark when Iand I could see it.
Dec. 24, 2019
Thank you ！
Sunset
When I was walking my dog today, I saw a beautiful sunset.
The sky was orange, pale pink and pale blue.
It was just like a picture by Turner.
I like sunset so much.
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This is really good! :)
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