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Sunrise or Sunset?

It always have been a difficult question to me...

Sunrise have something magic: is silent, fresh and full of possibilities. The world still wake and everything looks calm. But I must to confess that rare time I woke up at time to see it.

In change, I enjoy the sunset frequently. It has warm colors, soft light, and this sensation of the day is saying bay with style. Sometimes I stayed looking the sky like ir was a movie.

And how we are talking about beautiful skies, I wish to see a rain stairs or an aurora borealis, have you had the opportunity to see them?


¿Amanecer o atardecer?

Siempre me ha parecido una pregunta difícil…

El amanecer tiene algo mágico: es silencioso, fresco y lleno de posibilidades. El mundo apenas despierta y todo parece en calma. Pero tengo que confesar que rara vez me levanto a tiempo para verlo.

En cambio, el atardecer lo disfruto más seguido. Tiene colores cálidos, una luz suave, y esa sensación de que el día se va despidiendo con estilo. A veces me quedo mirando el cielo como si fuera una película.

Y ya que hablamos de cielos bonitos, yo deseo ver una lluvia de estrellas o una aurora boreal, ¿han tenido la oportunidad de verlas?

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It has always have been a difficult question tofor me...

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unrise haves something magic:al: It is silent, fresh and full of possibilities.

The world still wakeis not awake yet and everything looks calm.

But I must to confess that rare time I, I rarely woake up atin time to see it.

In change, IHowever, I also enjoy the sunset frequently.s.

It has warm colors, soft light, and this sensation of the day is saying bay with style.

not sure what the last bit means!

Sometimes I stayed looking at the sky like ir wat's a movie.

you can say 'sometimes I look up at the sky' or 'sometimes I watch the sky'

And how we are talking about beautiful skies, I wish to see a rain stairs or an aSpeaking of which, I wish to see _______ or the Aurora bBorealis, have you had the opportunity to see them?

Speaking of which basically means -> since you're talking about that.....
not sure what rain stairs are!

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Your use of vocabulary is good, just need to work on your grammar a little more. But still understandable!

Sunrise or Sunset?

It always haves been a difficult question to me...


Sunrise
s have something magic: is silent, fresh and full of possibilities.

"has always" is more common, but "always has" works OK

sunrises is plural, so the verb is "have", whereas "sunrise" is singular, so the verb is "has". This is a silly verb in English (like many others).

The world stillbarely wakes and everything looks calm.

"still" implies that it has been awake for a long time, but I think you are meaning to say that the world is waking up from previously being asleep

But I must to confess that I rare time Ily woake up atin time to see it.

"tengo que" translates to "have to," but "I must" would be more like "debo"

so

"I have to confess"

or

"I must confess"

"must" and "have/has to" are the same

vague adverbs of time can come after the subject or before it, but some ways of doing this aren't common

1. John and Julie often go to the store together. COMMON

2. Often, John and Julie go to the store together. UNCOMMON

3. Often John and Julie go to the store together. INCORRECT

IOn cthe other hanged, I enjoy the sunset frequently.

a useful English phrase

"on one hand" meaning "por un lado" like the first of two things that are opposites or nearly opposites

"on the other hand" meaning "por otro lado" like the second of two things that are opposites or nearly opposites

"however" would also work well in this case

It has warm colors, soft light, and this sensation ofthat the day is saying baye with style.

"bye" is a silly English spelling, but that is how it is spelled

also, either

"...this sensation that the day is saying bye with style"

OR

"...this sensation of the day saying bye with style"

Sometimes I stayed looking the sky like ir wasas if it were a movie.

If you still do it sometimes then "I stay"

If you don't do it anymore then "I used to stay"

Okay, so "as if it were a movie" (or "as though it were a movie") is technically the correct way, but it is common to hear English speakers fail to use the subjunctive construction in daily speech. Without using the subjunctive, we would probably hear:

"Sometimes I stay looking at the sky like it is a movie."

And howsince we are talking about beautiful skies, I wish to see a rain of stairs or an aurora borealis, h. Have you had the opportunity to see themse?

Since the question part is your concluding part, it fits well as its own sentence at the end

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Clear writing overall, I noticed some things where English "rules" are just complicated.

Sunrise or Sunset?

It's always have been a difficult question tofor me...

Sunrise have something magic


There's something magical about sunrise/dawn
: it's silent, freshcool, and full of possibilities.

The world is still wakeing and everything lookseems calm.

But I musthave to confess that I rare time Ily woake up atin time to see it.

IOn cthe other hanged, I (am able to) enjoy the sunset frequentlymore often.

It has's full of warm colors, soft light, and thise sensation ofthat the day is saying bay withgoodbye in style.

Sometimes I stayed lookingre at the sky likeas if irt wasere a movie.

And howsince we are talking about beautiful skies, I wishould love to see a rain stairsmeteor shower or anthe aurora borealis, h. Have you ever had the opportunity to see them?

You can also say "the northern lights" – "the aurora boealis" is the scientific name, but it's fine.

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Very nice!

It has always have been a difficult question tofor me...


Sunrise ha
ves something magical: it's silent, fresh and full of possibilities.

The world is still wakeing up and everything looks calm.

But I must to confess that I rare time Ily woake up at a time to see it.

IOn cthe other hanged, I enjoy the sunset frequently.

It has warm colors, soft light, and this sensation ofthat the day is saying baye with style.

Sometimes I stayed looking at the sky like irt was a movie.

And howSince we are talking about beautiful skies, I wish to see a rain stairsI could see a meteor shower (I believe this is what you mean) or an aurora borealis, have you had the opportunity to see them?

You could also say something like 'I would love to see' or 'I hope one day I can see' here.

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Great job!

Sunrise or Sunset?


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Sometimes I stayed looking the sky like ir was a movie.


Sometimes I stayed looking at the sky like irt was a movie.

Sometimes I stayed lookingre at the sky likeas if irt wasere a movie.

Sometimes I stayed looking the sky like ir wasas if it were a movie.

If you still do it sometimes then "I stay" If you don't do it anymore then "I used to stay" Okay, so "as if it were a movie" (or "as though it were a movie") is technically the correct way, but it is common to hear English speakers fail to use the subjunctive construction in daily speech. Without using the subjunctive, we would probably hear: "Sometimes I stay looking at the sky like it is a movie."

Sometimes I stayed looking at the sky like ir wat's a movie.

you can say 'sometimes I look up at the sky' or 'sometimes I watch the sky'

And how we are talking about beautiful skies, I wish to see a rain stairs or an aurora borealis, have you had the opportunity to see them?


And howSince we are talking about beautiful skies, I wish to see a rain stairsI could see a meteor shower (I believe this is what you mean) or an aurora borealis, have you had the opportunity to see them?

You could also say something like 'I would love to see' or 'I hope one day I can see' here.

And howsince we are talking about beautiful skies, I wishould love to see a rain stairsmeteor shower or anthe aurora borealis, h. Have you ever had the opportunity to see them?

You can also say "the northern lights" – "the aurora boealis" is the scientific name, but it's fine.

And howsince we are talking about beautiful skies, I wish to see a rain of stairs or an aurora borealis, h. Have you had the opportunity to see themse?

Since the question part is your concluding part, it fits well as its own sentence at the end

And how we are talking about beautiful skies, I wish to see a rain stairs or an aSpeaking of which, I wish to see _______ or the Aurora bBorealis, have you had the opportunity to see them?

Speaking of which basically means -> since you're talking about that..... not sure what rain stairs are!

It always have been a difficult question to me... Sunrise have something magic: is silent, fresh and full of possibilities.


It has always have been a difficult question tofor me...


Sunrise ha
ves something magical: it's silent, fresh and full of possibilities.

It's always have been a difficult question tofor me...

Sunrise have something magic


There's something magical about sunrise/dawn
: it's silent, freshcool, and full of possibilities.

It always haves been a difficult question to me...


Sunrise
s have something magic: is silent, fresh and full of possibilities.

"has always" is more common, but "always has" works OK sunrises is plural, so the verb is "have", whereas "sunrise" is singular, so the verb is "has". This is a silly verb in English (like many others).

It has always have been a difficult question tofor me...

S


A s
unrise haves something magic:al: It is silent, fresh and full of possibilities.

The world still wake and everything looks calm.


The world is still wakeing up and everything looks calm.

The world is still wakeing and everything lookseems calm.

The world stillbarely wakes and everything looks calm.

"still" implies that it has been awake for a long time, but I think you are meaning to say that the world is waking up from previously being asleep

The world still wakeis not awake yet and everything looks calm.

But I must to confess that rare time I woke up at time to see it.


But I must to confess that I rare time Ily woake up at a time to see it.

But I musthave to confess that I rare time Ily woake up atin time to see it.

But I must to confess that I rare time Ily woake up atin time to see it.

"tengo que" translates to "have to," but "I must" would be more like "debo" so "I have to confess" or "I must confess" "must" and "have/has to" are the same vague adverbs of time can come after the subject or before it, but some ways of doing this aren't common 1. John and Julie often go to the store together. COMMON 2. Often, John and Julie go to the store together. UNCOMMON 3. Often John and Julie go to the store together. INCORRECT

But I must to confess that rare time I, I rarely woake up atin time to see it.

In change, I enjoy the sunset frequently.


IOn cthe other hanged, I enjoy the sunset frequently.

IOn cthe other hanged, I (am able to) enjoy the sunset frequentlymore often.

IOn cthe other hanged, I enjoy the sunset frequently.

a useful English phrase "on one hand" meaning "por un lado" like the first of two things that are opposites or nearly opposites "on the other hand" meaning "por otro lado" like the second of two things that are opposites or nearly opposites "however" would also work well in this case

In change, IHowever, I also enjoy the sunset frequently.s.

It has warm colors, soft light, and this sensation of the day is saying bay with style.


It has warm colors, soft light, and this sensation ofthat the day is saying baye with style.

It has's full of warm colors, soft light, and thise sensation ofthat the day is saying bay withgoodbye in style.

It has warm colors, soft light, and this sensation ofthat the day is saying baye with style.

"bye" is a silly English spelling, but that is how it is spelled also, either "...this sensation that the day is saying bye with style" OR "...this sensation of the day saying bye with style"

It has warm colors, soft light, and this sensation of the day is saying bay with style.

not sure what the last bit means!

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