April 14, 2024
Sunday Routine
Today is Sunday. It's my relaxing and preparing day.
Normally I make bread and prepare vegetables in my fridge because I don't have much time to cook during the workday.
Sometimes I also need to buy some household supplies. Even though shopping online is so convenient in China we can buy those things anytime, I prefer to check our home stock before ordering new ones.
Sometimes I meet friends on Sunday, but not today. After the trip to Mount Lu, I need to have a rest.
I usually check my next week's schedule in the evening of Sunday. After doing that, I'll feel peaceful and well-prepared. Then I'll go jogging and enjoy the last time before sleep.
PS: I uploaded a video about the stream I mentioned in my last entry. Welcome to watch it: https://youtu.be/Noy-P1nCKAM
周日行程
今天是星期天。我的放松与准备日。
通常我会做些面包，准备些蔬菜到冰箱里，因为工作日没有太多时间做饭。
有时我还要买一些家庭用品。尽管网上购物很方便，可以随时买东西，但我更喜欢在订购新的东西之前检查一下库存。
有时我在星期天与朋友相见，但今天没有。庐山之行结束后，我需要休息一下。
我一般在周日晚上查看下周的日程安排。这样做之后，我会感到平静，觉得准备充分了。然后去慢跑，享受睡前的最后时光。
Sunday Routine
Today is Sunday.
It's my day to relaxing and preparing daye.
Or you could say "It's my day of relaxation and preparation"
Normally I make bread and prepare vegetables to put in my fridge, because I don't have much time to cook during the workdayeek.
prep is more casual/natural, think of meal prep
"in my fridge" sounds like your doing the preparation IN your fridge
Sometimes I also need to buy some household supplies.
Even though shopping online is so convenient in China and we can buy those things anytime, I prefer to check our home stock/supplies at home before ordering new onethings/items.
Sometimes I meet friends on Sunday, but not today.
After the trip to Mount Lu, I need to haved a rest.
Need to have a rest = present tense, indicating you currently need a rest
Needed a rest = past tense, need for rest at some point in the past
I usually check my next week's schedule infor the eveningnext week ofn Sunday evenings.
Sounds more natural
After doing that, I'll feel peaceful and well-prepared.
Then I'll go jogging and enjoy the last timemoments before sleep/before I fall asleep.
WYou're welcome to watch it: https://youtu.be/Noy-P1nCKAM
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Great job! Just a couple of little grammar things and words/phrases to make your writing sound more natural. Your Sunday routine sounds similar to mine!
April 15, 2024
Thank you for the corrections and feedback.
Let's high-five for our similar Sunday routines!
Sunday Routine
Today is Sunday.
It's my relaxingation and preparingation day.
Normally, I make bread and prepare the vegetables that are in my fridge because I don't have much time to cook during the workday.
Sometimes I also need to buy some household supplies.
Even though shopping online is so convenient in China that we can buy those things anytime, I prefer to check our home stock at home before ordering new ones.
Sometimes I meet friends on Sunday, but not today.
After the trip to Mount Lu, I need to have a rest.
I usually check my next week's schedule ion theSunday evening of Sunday.
After doing that, I'll feel peaceful and well-prepared.
Then I'll go jogging and enjoy the last time before sleep.
PS: I uploaded a video about the stream I mentioned in my last entry.
WYou're welcome to watch it: https://youtu.be/Noy-P1nCKAM
Feedback
What a nice day!
April 15, 2024
Thank you!
Have a nice day!
Sunday Routine
Today is Sunday.
It's my relaxingday of relaxation and preparing dayation.
I corrected it so it sounds more natural
Normally I make bread and prepare vegetables in my fridge because I don't have much time to cook during the workdayeek.
Sometimes I also need to buy some household supplies.
Even though shopping online is so convenient in China and we can buy those things anytime, I prefer to check our home stock before ordering new onethings.
Sometimes I meet friends on Sunday, but not today.
After thea trip to Mount Lu, I need to haved a rest.
I usually check my next week's schedule in the evening of Sunday.
After doing that, I'll feel peaceful and well-prepared.
Then I'll go jogging and enjoy the last time before sleep.
PS: I uploaded a video about the stream I mentioned in my last entry.
WYou're welcome to watch it: https://youtu.be/Noy-P1nCKAM
Feedback
Wonderful!
April 14, 2024
Thank you for the corrections and feedback!
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