March 18, 2024
Sunday
Today it is Sunday, and, in the street in front of my apartment, there was a street market as usual. Now it's late afternoon and it is already over, but the sky is still blue and bright. For today, the beginner saxophonist with the not-very-promising taste came back after two weeks. But, thank god, he was gone after playing what seems to be Take Five only ten minutes or so. Then, an electric guitarist came and played some music quietly for a while. it's a peaceful, good Sunday.
今日は日曜日で、うちのアパートの前の通りでは、いつものように市場が開かれていました。もう今は夕方で、市場はとっくに終わってしまいましたが、まだ空は青いし明るいです。今日は、２週間ぶりに、あのセンスもなさそうな初心者サクソフォン奏者が戻ってきました。でも、１０分くらいテイク・ファイブらしきものを吹いていなくなってくれたので良かったです。その後に電気ギタリストが来て、しばらく静かに曲を弾いていました。平和ないい日曜日です。
Sunday
Today it is Sunday, and, in the street in front of my apartment, there was a street market as usual.
Now it's late afternoon and it is already over, but the sky is still blue and bright.
For today, the beginner saxophonist with the not-very-promising taste came back after two weeks.
But, thank god, he was gone after playing what seems to be Take Fonly five onlyr ten minutes or so.
Then, an electric guitarist came and played some music quietly for a while.
iIt's a peaceful, good Sunday.
Sunday
Today it is Sunday, and, in there was a street market as usual at the street in front of my apartment, there was a street market as usual.
Rearranging the phrases here flows a bit smoother to me.
Now it's late afternoon and it is already over, but the sky is still blue and bright.
For today, the beginner saxophonist with the not-very-promising taste came back after two weeks.
But, thank god, he was gone after playing what seems to be Take Five only ten minutes or so.
Then, an electric guitarist came and played some music quietly for a while.
it's a peaceful, good Sunday.
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I'm glad you enjoyed your Sunday. :)
Today it is Sunday, and, in the street in front of my apartment, as usual, there was a street market as usual.
Now it's late afternoon and it is already overthe street market has already finished/ended, but the sky is still blue and bright.
Past perfect tense (has ~ed) because the market finished in the past tense, but it is still relevant to the current moment
It --> street market just for clarity, as "it" could refer to either "Sunday" or "street market"
For tToday, the beginner saxophonist with the not-very-promising taste came back after (being gone for) two weeks.
But, thank god, he was gone afterstopped playing what seemsed to be Take Ffive onlyr ten minutes or so.
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It's 100% understandable as is : ) there were some small mistakes, but the main thing is that your sentences could be more concise/efficient. That'll come with time, though!
April 25, 2024
Thank you for your corrections, and sorry for this late reply, but there's a song called Take Five... :P
Sunday
Today it is Sunday, and, in the street in front of my apartment, there was as usual, a street market as usual.
Now it's late afternoon and it is already over, but the sky is still blue and bright.
For todayToday, after two weeks, the beginner saxophonist with the not-very-promising taste came back after two weekscareer had come.
But, thank gGod, he was goneleft after playing what seems to be Take Five onlyfor only five to ten minutes or so.
Then, an electric guitarist came and played some music quietly for a while.
it'It’s a peaceful, goodcalm Sunday.
Sunday
Today iIt is Sunday, and, in the street in front of my apartment, there was a street market as usual today, and the usual street market was in front of my apartment.
Yours was grammatically correct, but with this slight reordering and taking out a couple of words, it sounds more natural.
Now it's late afternoon and it is already over, but the sky is still blue and bright.
For today, the beginner saxophonist with the not-very-promising taste came back after two weeks.
But, thank god, he was gone after playing what seems to be Take Five for only ten minutes or so.
Then, an electric guitarist came and played some music quietly for a while.
it's a peaceful, good Sunday.
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Sounds like a lively street that you live on!
Sunday
Today it is Sunday, and, in the street in front of my apartment, there was a street market as usual.
Now it's late afternoon and ithe is already overgone, but the sky is still blue and bright.
For today, the beginner saxophonist with the not-very-promising taste came back after two weeks.
If you have written about this saxophonist before, then saying "the saxophonist" is correct.
But, thank gododness, he was gone after playing what seems to be Take Five onlyfor about ten minutes or so.
Then, an electric guitarist came and played some music quietly for a while.
Alternative:
An electric guitar player...
iIt's a peaceful, good Sunday.
April 25, 2024
Thank you for your corrections, and sorry for this late reply, but... ChatGPT says I see what you mean now. In casual or personal writing, it's perfectly acceptable to use "the" to refer to a person or thing you've experienced before, even if you haven't mentioned them in public or in the same writing piece previously.
In your case, if you're writing in a personal mode and you feel a sense of familiarity or annoyance with the saxophonist, using "the saxophonist" with the definite article "the" can help convey that feeling effectively. It adds a sense of personal connection or history with the person, even if you haven't explicitly mentioned them before in the writing.
So, yes, you have the right to openly express your personal feelings and experiences, and using "the" to refer to someone or something you've encountered before, even if not mentioned previously in the same writing, is a valid and natural way to do so."
Do you agree?
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Yours was grammatically correct, but with this slight reordering and taking out a couple of words, it sounds more natural. Today it is Sunday, and Today it is Sunday Today it is Sunday, and Rearranging the phrases here flows a bit smoother to me. Today it is Sunday, and |
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