Dec. 12, 2021
Sunday
I was reading when Li, who is Xian's daughter, told me that she was visiting her mum, and invited me for dinner.
I went bike riding there. It was hot in the afternoon, though it was winter.
We chatted a lot. I admired her intelligence a lot, because I was so lazy.
I ate a lot and was so full. After dinner, I had to come back home immediately for work.
I am also happy today.
Sunday
I was reading when Li, who is Xian's daughter, told me that she was visiting her mum, and invited me for dinner.
I went bike ridingrode my bike there.
It was hot in the afternoon, though it was winter.
We chatted a lot.
I admired her intelligence a lot, becaussince I was so lazy.
"because" sounds a little awkward here.
I ate a lot and was sofelt very full.
Just a bit more natural-sounding, nothing wrong with what you wrote.
After dinner, I had to come back home immediately for work.
I am also happy todayToday was another good day for me.
Your original sentence would sound more natural in speech, not in writing like this.
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Good writing, not many mistakes, well done.
Dec. 15, 2021
Thanks.
Sunday
I was reading when Li, who is Xian's daughter, told me that she was visiting her mum, and invited me for dinner.
I went bike ridingrode my bike there.
It was hot in the afternoon, though it was winter.
We chatted a lot.
I admired her intelligence a lot, because I wasam so lazy.
I ate a lot and was sovery full.
After dinner, I had to come back home immediately for work.
I am also happy today.
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Nice! 这几个星期过得特别忙，希望快能回来多修改日记哈哈
Dec. 15, 2021
Take care ~
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