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Aug. 18, 2022

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Summmer rain

I used to hate summer rain, because in my villege, summer rain alway appear with sunny day, it can be more hot than normal sunny day, the air feels like become water vapor.

BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C,I can't wait for a summer big rain. the air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.

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I used to hate summer rain, because in my villeage, summer rain alway appear with sunny day, it can be more hotit alway falls on sunny days. Hotter than a normal sunny day, the air feels like become water vaporsteamy.

BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C, all day long in 40 °C heat, I can't wait for a summer big raindownpour.

tThe air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.

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I used to love summer, but now I fear it. In recent years, our bushfires have become bigger and more frequent.

Summmer rRain

I used to hate summer rain, because in my villeage, summer rain always appeared with a sunny day, so it can be more hotould be hotter than normal sunny day,. It's when the air feels like becomeas if it's turning into water vapor.

BUT, after suffering for a long day withof 40 °C,I can't wait for a big summer big rain.

tThe air is too dry for me, not to mention for the plants and wild animals.

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Great job!

Summmer rain

I used to hate summer rain, because in my villeage, summer rain alway appear with sunny days came on sunny days. On those days, it can be more hot than a normal sunny day, and the air feels like become water vaporso humid.

I'd say humid rather than water becomes vapor, but both make sense.

BUT,ut after suffering for a long day withof 40 °C, I can't wait for a summer big rain.

The BUT works if you chose to use it stylistically like that.

tThe air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.

Great!

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Good work, everything was very understandable!

Summmer rain

I think it's a keyboard mistake

I used to hate summer rain, because in my villege, summer rain alway appeared with sunny days, it can be more hotter than a normal sunny day, the air feels like become water vapordamp.

BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C,I can't wait for a heavy summer big rain.

Heavy is used with rain most often

the air is too dry for me, not to mention as well as the plants and wild animals.

This majes it sound more natural

Summmer rain


Summmer rain

I think it's a keyboard mistake

Summmer rain

Summmer rRain

I used to hate summer rain, because in my villege, summer rain alway appear with sunny day, it can be more hot than normal sunny day, the air feels like become water vapor.


I used to hate summer rain, because in my villege, summer rain alway appeared with sunny days, it can be more hotter than a normal sunny day, the air feels like become water vapordamp.

I used to hate summer rain, because in my villeage, summer rain alway appear with sunny days came on sunny days. On those days, it can be more hot than a normal sunny day, and the air feels like become water vaporso humid.

I'd say humid rather than water becomes vapor, but both make sense.

I used to hate summer rain, because in my villeage, summer rain always appeared with a sunny day, so it can be more hotould be hotter than normal sunny day,. It's when the air feels like becomeas if it's turning into water vapor.

I used to hate summer rain, because in my villeage, summer rain alway appear with sunny day, it can be more hotit alway falls on sunny days. Hotter than a normal sunny day, the air feels like become water vaporsteamy.

BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C,I can't wait for a summer big rain.


BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C,I can't wait for a heavy summer big rain.

Heavy is used with rain most often

BUT,ut after suffering for a long day withof 40 °C, I can't wait for a summer big rain.

The BUT works if you chose to use it stylistically like that.

BUT, after suffering for a long day withof 40 °C,I can't wait for a big summer big rain.

BUT, after suffering for a long day with 40 °C, all day long in 40 °C heat, I can't wait for a summer big raindownpour.

the air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.


the air is too dry for me, not to mention as well as the plants and wild animals.

This majes it sound more natural

tThe air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.

Great!

tThe air is too dry for me, not to mention for the plants and wild animals.

tThe air is too dry for me, not to mention the plants and wild animals.

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