I just wanted to borrow the name ofrom Lana Del Rey's song.

The original sentence isn't too bad. Hardly a noticeable mistake.

When I was a high school student, I suffered from a lot studyof pressure. to study.

I thought that I was so lonely that no one understandeood me.

And I didn't want to talked about it with my classmates because I thought that they were stupid.

Don't start sentences with "and" unless you're nearly an expert in English writing and 99% of native English speakers aren't even experts. Most people do it incorrectly, so it's best to just avoid it entirely.

I hadnstead, I learned a lot of ancestral poems for exams,. I thought that the authors would understand me more.

"had" is pretty optional here, I think. You could also use a semicolon if you feel comfortable: "Instead, I learned a lot of ancestral poems for exams; I thought that the authors would understand me more."

SoThus, I started to learned more ancestral poems outside my textbook.

Don't really start sentences with "So." Learn and implement transition words! They're very helpful and sometimes they make you sound smart and fancy. :-)

I would quoted them inton my notebook and recited them frequently.

My correction works, but if it were me, I would've written: "I would write the poems down into my notebook and recite them frequently to myself (or others!)"

I speak louread the poems aloud in class, because I wanted to show off myself.

Few things: (1) You could say "read the poems," "recited the poems," or "recounted the poems..." many options. (2) You could either say "out loud" or "aloud" (3) "I wanted to show off" or "I wanted to flaunt myself."

I wanted to showdisplay my loneliness and knowledge, whereas I wanted to so that I could scorn my classmates.

Not really sure what this means. You wanted to read the poems aloud so that you could tell your classmates that you were lonely, but also quite knowledgeable. Why did you want to scorn them? Did you want to show them that you were better than them? Make them jealous? In that cause, I would've written: "I wanted to display my loneliness to my classmates while simultaneously exhibiting my knowledge of ancestral poetry. With this, my classmates would have no other option than to be jealous." Sorry if that sounds a bit extra than what you wrote.

YepIndeed, when I look back, it at it, my behavior does seems quite ridiculous.

In casual conversation, you could definitely say "...look back at it, it does seem ridiculous..."

As one of the ancestral poems had stated: w, "When you are young, you know nothing sad, but you think you are the saddest person in the world."

If you are directly quoting what someone said, you need to use a comma before the quotation marks. Example: "I spoke to Ethan yesterday and he said, "I want to go to the park.'"

SoThe poem is explaining that when you are young, you try hard to transmit your sadness everywhere. you go.

(1) Don't start with "so." (2) Try to have a better start to the sentence when you are explaining a quote. You need to make it clear that you are explaining what the QUOTE said and not adding to the quote. (3) you could also say "transmit your sadness onto everyone."

WFurthermore, when you become mature, you know what sadness really is, but you talk about the weather instead of sadness.

I think that last part regarding the weather wasn't important... just made me a bit confused. Also, transition word!

I have forgotten most of the poems, and I am busy doing something more important to mehings now.

FurthermoreAdditionally, I care about the weather a lot.

Don't understand the point of this sentence. I would've discarded it.

I just want to borrowed the name from a Lana Del Rey's song.

When I was a high school student, I suffered a lot study pressurehad to study a lot and was really stressed out.

Alternative: I felt pressured to study a lot.

I thought I was so lonely thafelt lonely and thought no one could understanded me.

And I didn't want to talked about it with to my classmates about it because I thought they were stupid.

I had learned a lot ancestral poems for exams, IAt one point in my studies, I had to study ancestral poems. I enjoy those poems a lot and thought the author would understands me more.

So I started to learneding more ancestral poems outside my textbookpoems on my own during my free time.

I quoted them oin my notebook and recited them frequently.

I speak loudoke the poems out loud in class, because I wanted to show off myself.

I wanted to show my loneliness and knowledge, whereas I wanted toas well as scorn my classmates.

Yep, wWhen I look back, it now, my behavior seems quite ridiculous.

As the ancestal poemone of those poems has stated: when you are young, you know nothing sad, budon't know true sadness yet you think you are the saddest person in the world.

So you try hard to transmitspread your sadness everywhere.

When you become mature, you will know what sadness really is, but you. Instead of dwelling on your sadness, you will talk about the weather instead of sadness.

I have forgotten most of the poems, and. Nowadays, I am busy doing somethings that are more important to me now.

Furthermore, I careI also care about the weather a lot.