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July 21, 2021

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Summering at Valley

I've been valley a few days ago.
I went there by train not my car, because driving is very weary these days.
This small town where involves the valley was snug and cozy.
Once we got off the train, the town caught our fancy.
We stayed a cozy inn and it had a big persimmon tree so it was named the persimmon tree inn.

A wooded valley was there alongside roads up to a mountain.
There were lots of rocks in the valley and stream was running between the rocks.
The water was so cold that we went in and out repeatedly.
We could indeed cool down our heat.
We really liked this spot so that we went there throughout three days.

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Summering atpending Summer at the Valley

"Summering" isn't a word. I think you are meaning to use the expression: "spending summer."

I've been was at a valley a few days ago.

I went there by train not mby car, because driving is very weary these days.

Thise small town where involvesin the valley was snug and cozy.

Once we got off the train, the town caught our fancy.

We stayed at a cozy inn and itwhich had a big persimmon tree, so it was named the pPersimmon tTree iInn.

A wooded valley was there alongside roads up to a mountain.

There were lots of rocks in the valley and a stream was running between the rocksm.

The water was so cold that we went in and out repeatedly.

We could indeedIt allowed us to cool down our heat.

We don't usually use temperature in the form of possession. We don't have the heat, we are just affected by it.

We really liked this spot, so that we went there throughout the next three days.

Summering at Valley


Summering atpending Summer at the Valley

"Summering" isn't a word. I think you are meaning to use the expression: "spending summer."

I've been valley a few days ago.


I've been was at a valley a few days ago.

I went there by train not my car, because driving is very weary these days.


I went there by train not mby car, because driving is very weary these days.

This small town where involves the valley was snug and cozy.


Thise small town where involvesin the valley was snug and cozy.

Once we got off the train, the town caught our fancy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We stayed a cozy inn and it had a big persimmon tree so it was named the persimmon tree inn.


We stayed at a cozy inn and itwhich had a big persimmon tree, so it was named the pPersimmon tTree iInn.

A wooded valley was there alongside roads up to a mountain.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There were lots of rocks in the valley and stream was running between the rocks.


There were lots of rocks in the valley and a stream was running between the rocksm.

The water was so cold that we went in and out repeatedly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We could indeed cool down our heat.


We could indeedIt allowed us to cool down our heat.

We don't usually use temperature in the form of possession. We don't have the heat, we are just affected by it.

We really liked this spot so that we went there throughout three days.


We really liked this spot, so that we went there throughout the next three days.

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