Aug. 4, 2022
Summer rain.
I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yard and the smell of the wet soil of my plant pots.
Since I'm afraid of the lightning (falling on me) I only watch but if it's little rain I enjoy it.
The thunder remains me of my dog who passed away a year ago, her name was Brittany, and was so afraid of thunder because she used to live in the streets and that's why my family and I adopt her.
But seeing the water drops in the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me.
Me encanta el sonido de las gotas de lluvia cayendo sobre el techo de mi patio y el olor de la tierra mojada de mis macetas con plantas.
Desde que me asustan los rayos (cayendo en mi) Solo miro pero si es poca lluvia lo disfruto.
Los truenos me recuerdan a mi perrita que falleció hace ya un año, su nombre era Brittany, y estaba muy asustada de los truenos porque solía vivir en la calle y por eso mi familia y yo la adoptamos.
Pero ver las gotas de agua en las hojas y flores después de la lluvia me relaja e inspira.
Summer rRain.
I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceilingroof of my yardhouse and the smell of the wet soil ofin my plant pots.
Me, too!
Since I'm afraid of the lightning (fallstriking on me), I only watch it but, if it's a little rain, I enjoy it.
The thunder remainds me of my dog who passed away a year ago, h. Her name was Brittany, and she was so afraid of thunder because she used to live ion the streets andso that's why my family and I adopted her.
But seeing the water drops in the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me.
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Me, too! Very well done!
Aug. 8, 2022
Summer rRain.
Why Rain in capitals? and the final point.
Aug. 8, 2022
I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceilingroof of my yardhouse and the smell of the wet soil ofin my plant pots.
Thanks!
Aug. 8, 2022
Why Rain in capitals? and the final point.
It's a title so we capitalize the first letter of important words and use no punctuation to end it.
Aug. 9, 2022
It's a title so we capitalize the first letter of important words and use no punctuation to end it.
Oh, thanks.
Summer rRain.
I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yardmy roof and the smell of the wet soil ofrom my plant pots.
Since I'm afraid of the lightning (falling onstriking me) I only watchobserve, but if it's little rains I enjoy it.
The thunder remainds me of my dog who passed away a year ago, her name was Brittany, and she was so afraid of thunder because she used to live in the streets and that's whyhow my family and I came to adopting her.
But seeing the water drops in the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me.
I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yardmy roof and the smell of the wet soil of my plant pootted plants.
Since I'm afraid of the lightning (fallpossibly striking on me), I only watch but if it's littlefrom indoors. But the light rain I enjoy it.
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But seeing the water drops idrops of water on the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me.
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Nice entry!
Summer rain.
I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yard and the smell of the wet soil of my planted pots.
"on the ceiling" not sure what you were trying to say here.
Since I'm afraid of the lightning (falling onhitting/striking me) I only watch but if it's little rain Ia light rain/drizzle I'll go out and enjoy it.
"I'll enjoy it" sounds strange in English. I interpreted this as going out and enjoying the rain.
The thunder remainds me of my dog who passed away a year ago, h. Her name was Brittany, and was so afrai. She was terrified of thunder because she used to live ion the streets and t. That's why my family and I adopted her.
A run-on sentence. I changed "so afraid" to "terrified" as it implies a "higher-level of fear". "So afraid" also works. Just showing another word choice to get the feeling across.
But sSeeing the water raindrops ion the leaves and flowers after the rain relaxes and inspires me.
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Good work! Keep it up!
Aug. 8, 2022
I love the sound of the raindrops falling on the ceiling of my yard and the smell of the wet soil of my planted pots.
My yard has a sheet roof (that's what the translator says) and it makes noise or sound.
Aug. 8, 2022
Since I'm afraid of the lightning (falling onhitting/striking me) I only watch but if it's little rain Ia light rain/drizzle I'll go out and enjoy it.
Yes, that's what I meant.
Aug. 8, 2022
Thank you!
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