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June 16, 2022

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summer rain

I was back from the school and leave to home in my pink jacket . I had afraid and I know this is crazy but i think someone follow me I run faster and faster but he comes alaways near . My mind is brocken think so and then it rains very strong it was june and i will wet and leave fast to home but it follow me every where and he the shadow stand all the time on my window but then than the rain stop was it away


A shadow is more at only light

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sSummer rRain

I was back from the school and leave to home inft my pink jacket at home.

I hadwas afraid and I know this is crazy but i think someone was follow meing me, so I ruan faster and faster but he comewas alaways near .gaining on me.

My mind is brocken thinkI can't quite think straight so and then it started rainsing very strong i. It was jJune and iI willould get wet and leave fast to go home b. But ithe followed me every where and he the shadow stand all ththere was a shadow the whole time on my window b. But then than the rain stop was iped and it went away.

summer rain

I was back from the school and about to leave to go home in my pink jacket .

I hadwas afraid and I know this is crazy, but iI think someone was following me. I run faster and faster, but he comes alaways comes near .

My mind is brocken think so and then itI'm not thinking straight, and it starts rainsing very strongheavily. Because it was jJune and i will wet and leave fast t, I will get wet so I leave quickly to go home but it follows me every where and he t. The shadow stand all the time onkeeps standing at my window, but then than the rain stop was its and it goes away.

This was a very long sentence, so I tried to separate a few ideas into their own sentences when needed.

A shadow is more at only light.

Not sure what this means.

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summer rain


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sSummer rRain

I was back from the school and leave to home in my pink jacket .


I was back from the school and about to leave to go home in my pink jacket .

I was back from the school and leave to home inft my pink jacket at home.

I had afraid and I know this is crazy but i think someone follow me I run faster and faster but he comes alaways near .


I hadwas afraid and I know this is crazy, but iI think someone was following me. I run faster and faster, but he comes alaways comes near .

I hadwas afraid and I know this is crazy but i think someone was follow meing me, so I ruan faster and faster but he comewas alaways near .gaining on me.

My mind is brocken think so and then it rains very strong it was june and i will wet and leave fast to home but it follow me every where and he the shadow stand all the time on my window but then than the rain stop was it away


My mind is brocken think so and then itI'm not thinking straight, and it starts rainsing very strongheavily. Because it was jJune and i will wet and leave fast t, I will get wet so I leave quickly to go home but it follows me every where and he t. The shadow stand all the time onkeeps standing at my window, but then than the rain stop was its and it goes away.

This was a very long sentence, so I tried to separate a few ideas into their own sentences when needed.

My mind is brocken thinkI can't quite think straight so and then it started rainsing very strong i. It was jJune and iI willould get wet and leave fast to go home b. But ithe followed me every where and he the shadow stand all ththere was a shadow the whole time on my window b. But then than the rain stop was iped and it went away.

A shadow is more at only light


A shadow is more at only light.

Not sure what this means.

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