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joselysv

Jan. 29, 2021

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Summer Paradise

My best vacation, the one that I would always remember it's my graduation trip from high school.

I was sixteen by them, and I go to Cancun, Mexico with all my friends since I was little, all my classmates go to that trip, it was just us, no paretns allow, a lot of teenager in the shore of Cancun.

It was a extraordinaly, intense, and a funny week. We enjoy very much and partied, we knew many places, and visited bars and discoted. The Hotel where we stayed was beautifull, and had many activities for us to participated, besides I shared room with my besties, it was a really good experience that I will keep in my mind, and I hope to some day travel to that paradise again.

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The Hotel where we stayed was beautifull, and had many activities for us to participated, besides in. I shared room with my besties, i. It was a really good experience that I will keep in my mind, and I hope to some day travel to that paradise again.

My bestfavourite vacation, the one that I wouldill always remember it's my graduation trip fromafter high school.

I was sixteen by them, and Ihave gone to Cancun, Mexico with all my friends since Ii was little, and when I was sixteen all my classmates go tocame on thate trip, i. It was just us, no paretnts allowed, a lot of teenager is on the shore of Cancun.

It was an extraordinalry, intense, and a funny week.

use 'a' before words begining with a consonant
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use 'an' before words with a vowel

vowels = a,e,i,o,u
consonant = all other letters

We enjoyed ourselves very much and partied, we knew a lot, we discovered many new places, and visited bars and discoted.

discoted is not a word

The Hotel wherethat we stayed in was beautifull, and had many activities for us to participated, besides I in. I also shared a room with my besties, so it was a really good experience that I will keep in my mind, andremember forever. I hope to some day travel to that paradise againMexico again someday.

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joselysv

Jan. 29, 2021

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It was an extraordinalry, intense, and a funny week.

this is very hepfull, I didn't know this rule. Thanks for explained to me

Summer Paradise


My best vacation, the one that I would always remember it's my graduation trip from high school.


My bestfavourite vacation, the one that I wouldill always remember it's my graduation trip fromafter high school.

I was sixteen by them, and I go to Cancun, Mexico with all my friends since I was little, all my classmates go to that trip, it was just us, no paretns allow, a lot of teenager in the shore of Cancun.


I was sixteen by them, and Ihave gone to Cancun, Mexico with all my friends since Ii was little, and when I was sixteen all my classmates go tocame on thate trip, i. It was just us, no paretnts allowed, a lot of teenager is on the shore of Cancun.

It was a extraordinaly, intense, and a funny week.


It was an extraordinalry, intense, and a funny week.

use 'a' before words begining with a consonant and use 'an' before words with a vowel vowels = a,e,i,o,u consonant = all other letters

We enjoy very much and partied, we knew many places, and visited bars and discoted.


We enjoyed ourselves very much and partied, we knew a lot, we discovered many new places, and visited bars and discoted.

discoted is not a word

The Hotel where we stayed was beautifull, and had many activities for us to participated, besides I shared room with my besties, it was a really good experience that I will keep in my mind, and I hope to some day travel to that paradise again.


The Hotel wherethat we stayed in was beautifull, and had many activities for us to participated, besides I in. I also shared a room with my besties, so it was a really good experience that I will keep in my mind, andremember forever. I hope to some day travel to that paradise againMexico again someday.

The Hotel where we stayed was beautifull, and had many activities for us to participated, besides in. I shared room with my besties, i. It was a really good experience that I will keep in my mind, and I hope to some day travel to that paradise again.

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