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naho2863

Aug. 16, 2022

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Summer Meals

I wanted to be a little more healthy like years ago, so I decided to do a diet.
This summer, I almost every day had eggs with vegetables for breakfast.
But when lunch comes in I can't always eat healthily, I eat Chinese food because it is my favorite and some chips for watching a movie.


Quería ser un poco más saludable como años atrás, así que decidí hacer dieta.
Este verano, casi todos los días desayune huevos con verduras.
Pero cuando el almuerzo viene no puedo comer saludable siempre, tengo comida china porque es mi favorita y papas para ver una película.

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I wanted to beYears ago I was a little more healthy like years agothan I am now, so I decided to dogo on a diet.

I understood your original sentence just fine, but this sounds more natural. :)

This summer, I aAlmost every day this summer I had eggs with vegetables for breakfast.

But when lunch comes inaround I can't always eat healthily, I eat Chinese food because it is my favorite and some. I also indulge in chips forwhile watching a movies.

The part about chips should be a new sentence because you aren't talking about lunch here (which is the subject of the original sentence).

Summer Meals

I wanted to be a little more healthy - like I had been years ago, - so I decided to dogo on a diet.

This summer, I almost every day’ve had eggs withand vegetables for breakfast almost every day.

But when lunchit comes in I can'to lunch, I don’t always eat healthily,. I often eat Chinese food (because it is my favorite) and some chips for(while watching a movie).

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It’s hard to change what you eat.

Meals in the Summer Meals

A few years ago, I decided that I wanted to be a little more healthy like years ago, so I decided to dotry a diet.

You can say: ‘try dieting’ as well, we do not say ‘do a diet’!

When talking about a decision in the past in this form, the formula is this:
“A few years ago…”
“A few days ago…”
“Yesterday…”
“Last Friday, I decided that I wanted to be a bit healthier, and decided to try a diet.”

This summer, I almost every day hadFor almost every breakfast during this summer, I ate eggs with vegetables for breakfast.

So the word order/language structure here is a bit tricky, here are some more examples:

Examples:
1. For almost the entire year, I wrote in my journal.
2. For almost every dinner this week, I ate lettuce.
3. For almost every day this week, I got up at 6AM.

But whenever lunch coames in I can't always around, I couldn’t bring myself to eat healthily, Iand ended up eating Chinese food because it is my favorite and somewith chips forwhilst watching amy favourite movie.

If you have any questions please don’t hesitate to ask, i will answer all. I had a lengthy explanation but it was deleted. Technology!

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Fantastic work! It is hard to summon willpower sometimes, don’t be so hard on yourself, take it one day at a time!

Summer Meals

I wanted to be a little more healthy likeier as I was years ago, so I decided to do achange my diet.

This summer, I almost every day had eggs with vegetables for breakfast almost every day.

But when lunch comes inarrives, I can't always eat healthily,. I eat Chinese food because it is my favorite and then some chips forwhen I watching a movie.

or

But when lunch arrives, I can't always eat healthy. I eat Chinese food because it is my favorite and then some chips when I watch a movie.

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Great job!

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naho2863

Aug. 17, 2022

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Thank you!

Summer Meals


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Meals in the Summer Meals

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I wanted to be a little more healthy like years ago, so I decided to do a diet.


I wanted to be a little more healthy likeier as I was years ago, so I decided to do achange my diet.

A few years ago, I decided that I wanted to be a little more healthy like years ago, so I decided to dotry a diet.

You can say: ‘try dieting’ as well, we do not say ‘do a diet’! When talking about a decision in the past in this form, the formula is this: “A few years ago…” “A few days ago…” “Yesterday…” “Last Friday, I decided that I wanted to be a bit healthier, and decided to try a diet.”

I wanted to be a little more healthy - like I had been years ago, - so I decided to dogo on a diet.

I wanted to beYears ago I was a little more healthy like years agothan I am now, so I decided to dogo on a diet.

I understood your original sentence just fine, but this sounds more natural. :)

This summer, I almost every day had eggs with vegetables for breakfast.


This summer, I almost every day had eggs with vegetables for breakfast almost every day.

This summer, I almost every day hadFor almost every breakfast during this summer, I ate eggs with vegetables for breakfast.

So the word order/language structure here is a bit tricky, here are some more examples: Examples: 1. For almost the entire year, I wrote in my journal. 2. For almost every dinner this week, I ate lettuce. 3. For almost every day this week, I got up at 6AM.

This summer, I almost every day’ve had eggs withand vegetables for breakfast almost every day.

This summer, I aAlmost every day this summer I had eggs with vegetables for breakfast.

But when lunch comes in I can't always eat healthily, I eat Chinese food because it is my favorite and some chips for watching a movie.


But when lunch comes inarrives, I can't always eat healthily,. I eat Chinese food because it is my favorite and then some chips forwhen I watching a movie.

or But when lunch arrives, I can't always eat healthy. I eat Chinese food because it is my favorite and then some chips when I watch a movie.

But whenever lunch coames in I can't always around, I couldn’t bring myself to eat healthily, Iand ended up eating Chinese food because it is my favorite and somewith chips forwhilst watching amy favourite movie.

If you have any questions please don’t hesitate to ask, i will answer all. I had a lengthy explanation but it was deleted. Technology!

But when lunchit comes in I can'to lunch, I don’t always eat healthily,. I often eat Chinese food (because it is my favorite) and some chips for(while watching a movie).

But when lunch comes inaround I can't always eat healthily, I eat Chinese food because it is my favorite and some. I also indulge in chips forwhile watching a movies.

The part about chips should be a new sentence because you aren't talking about lunch here (which is the subject of the original sentence).

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