Aug. 22, 2022
Summer and the Beach
The summer is the better season for people that like the sun, beach, sailing or simply walking. For me is really pleassant to make strolls for the parks at afternoon. I like also to wading by the shore on the beach, wetting my feet at the morning, when the sun is not so strong. Usually, when I arrive to the beach, I go straight to the water where I am a while. Later, I stretch on the beach towel, to take the sun, but I have to have care for not to burn, because my skin is quite white. Sometime I go alone, but I prefer go with my wife or with more people. It is more fun.
Summer and the Beach
The summer is the bestter season for people that like the sun, the beach, sailing or simply walking.
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Usually, when I arrive ato the beach, I go straight to the water where I amstay for a while.
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Sometime I go alone, but I prefer go with my wife or with more peopleothers.
It is more fun.
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Let me know if something doesn’t make sense I am more than happy to explain!
Aug. 23, 2022
Thank you.
The sSummer is the bestter season for people that like the sun, beach, sailing, or simply walking.
"that" isn’t incorrect, and you might need to later know, with relative clauses for informal writing, using either ‘who' or 'that' is grammatically correct. However, in formal academic writing, the use of 'who' is preferred over 'that', when referring only to people, while the use of ‘that’ is correct when referring only to objects (including noun descriptors).
Aug. 23, 2022
That's very kind of you for your comment.
Aug. 23, 2022
That's very kind of you for your comment.
You’re very welcome. I was happy to find an error that hadn’t been corrected yet, lol, because I needed to correct other’s journals before I could post another journal of my own.
I also wanted to say that you have many interesting prompts and journals, all very inspiring for learning writing, and helpful to find different topics to write about.
Summer and the Beach
The summer is the (better)/best season for people that like the sun, the beach, going sailing or simply walking.
For me, it is really pleassant to mtake strolls forin the parks atduring the afternoon.
I like also to wading by the shore on the beach, wetting my feet atin the morning, when the sun is not so strong.
Usually, when I arrive to the beach, I go straight to the water where I amremain for a while.
Later, I stretch out on the beach towel, to take in the sun, but I have to havtake care for not to burn, because my skin is quite white.
Sometimes I go alone, but I usually prefer go with my wife or with more people.
It is more fun.
It is more fun that way.
Aug. 23, 2022
Thanks a lot.
The Summer and the Beach
The summer is the bestter season for people that like the sun, beach, sailing or simply walking.
For me it is really pleassant to make strolls for the parks at afternoon.
I like also to wadingalso like to wade in the water by the shore on the beach, wetting my feet atin the morning, when the sun is not so strong.
Wade is normally paired with water (sea, river).
Usually, when I arrive ato the beach, I go straight to the water where I amstay for a while.
Later, I stretch on the beach towel, to take the sun, but I have to have care for not to burn, because my skin is quite white.
Sometimes I go alone, but I prefer to go with my wife or with more people.
Aug. 23, 2022
That's very kind of you for your comments.
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"that" isn’t incorrect, and you might need to later know, with relative clauses for informal writing, using either ‘who' or 'that' is grammatically correct. However, in formal academic writing, the use of 'who' is preferred over 'that', when referring only to people, while the use of ‘that’ is correct when referring only to objects (including noun descriptors). The summer is the best |
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