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Aug. 13, 2025

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Summer and Food

Yes i am new here anyway anyway it is not important Today i want talking about summer and food Eating food is hobi for me yeah you are right hear Generally i have holidays in summer months So i try eating good and delicious foods and desserts such as sarma, iskender kebab, ice cream, suffle, etc. i know i must to carful not to gain weight this periods :d

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Yes i, I am new here anyway anyway i, though that is not important. Today i, I want to talking about summer and food

Eating food is a hobiby for me yeah you are right hear Gener. I usually i have holidays in summer months S, so iI try to eating good and delicious foods and desserts such as. Some examples are sarma, iskender kebab, ice cream, suffle, etc.and souffle.

I'm not sure why you wrote "anyway anyway it is not important" -- I am assuming you're practicing certain phrases or saying you are new to this website.

I changed that sentence to make more sense, and to be more readable.

Saying "yeah you are right hear" at the end of your sentence was very unclear. That doesn't mean anything. I removed it because I wasn't sure what it meant.

"Generally" sounds weird when you are speaking about something that happens often or recurrently. It's not necessarily wrong, it just sounds weird. You can use words like "typically" or "usually" or "most of the time"

You do not need to pluralize the word "food" in that sentence - it is a collective noun, so "food" can refer to any amount of food. When you say "foods", you usually are referring to different or specific types of food. However, when you are referring to an unknown and uncountable quantity of food, you just say "food."

Putting 2 adjectives before 2 nouns sounds a little strange, but it is not wrong. You may want to say "I try to eat good food and delicious desserts" as it has a better flow.

When you say "for example" or "such as", you don't really need to use "etc." after. This is because you are already saying that these foods are only some of the foods you eat.

i know i must to careful not to gain weight this periods :d

Just fixed minor spelling mistakes.

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Try your best to include more punctuation ( "." "," "!" "?"), it will help a lot with your writing.

Yes i a, I'm new here anyway anyway it ibut that's not important. Today i wantI'm going to talking about summer and about food. Eating food is more like a hobiby for me yeah you are. Yes you heard that right. hear Generally i, I have holidays in summer months Soff during the summer, so iI try eating good and delicious foods and desserts such as sarma, iskender kebab, ice cream, suffle, etc.

holiday = british english
off/ vacation = american english

iI know i must tothat I need to be careful not to, I could potentially gain weight during this periods :dD

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sorry had to restructure this

Yes iI am new here; anyway anyway it i, that's not important. Today i, I want to talking about summer and food. Eating food is a hobiby for me yeah you are. Yes, you heard that right hear. Generally i have holidays in, I go on holiday during the summer months Sso iI try to eating good and delicious foods and desserts such as sarma, iskender kebab, ice cream, suffle, etc.

iI know iI must to careful not to gain weight this periodduring this :d

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Awesome job! Great English :)

Summer and Food

Yes i, I am new here anyway anyway it i, but that's not important. Today i, I want to talking about summer and food. Eating food is a hobiby for me yeah you are right hear. Generally i, I have holidays in the summer months. So i, I try eating good and delicious foods and desserts, such as sarma, iskender kebab, ice cream, suffle, etc.

iI know ithat I must tobe careful not to gain weight during this periods :d.

Summer and Food


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Yes i am new here anyway anyway it is not important Today i want talking about summer and food Eating food is hobi for me yeah you are right hear Generally i have holidays in summer months So i try eating good and delicious foods and desserts such as sarma, iskender kebab, ice cream, suffle, etc.


Yes i, I am new here anyway anyway it i, but that's not important. Today i, I want to talking about summer and food. Eating food is a hobiby for me yeah you are right hear. Generally i, I have holidays in the summer months. So i, I try eating good and delicious foods and desserts, such as sarma, iskender kebab, ice cream, suffle, etc.

Yes iI am new here; anyway anyway it i, that's not important. Today i, I want to talking about summer and food. Eating food is a hobiby for me yeah you are. Yes, you heard that right hear. Generally i have holidays in, I go on holiday during the summer months Sso iI try to eating good and delicious foods and desserts such as sarma, iskender kebab, ice cream, suffle, etc.

Yes i a, I'm new here anyway anyway it ibut that's not important. Today i wantI'm going to talking about summer and about food. Eating food is more like a hobiby for me yeah you are. Yes you heard that right. hear Generally i, I have holidays in summer months Soff during the summer, so iI try eating good and delicious foods and desserts such as sarma, iskender kebab, ice cream, suffle, etc.

holiday = british english off/ vacation = american english

Yes i, I am new here anyway anyway i, though that is not important. Today i, I want to talking about summer and food

Eating food is a hobiby for me yeah you are right hear Gener. I usually i have holidays in summer months S, so iI try to eating good and delicious foods and desserts such as. Some examples are sarma, iskender kebab, ice cream, suffle, etc.and souffle.

I'm not sure why you wrote "anyway anyway it is not important" -- I am assuming you're practicing certain phrases or saying you are new to this website. I changed that sentence to make more sense, and to be more readable. Saying "yeah you are right hear" at the end of your sentence was very unclear. That doesn't mean anything. I removed it because I wasn't sure what it meant. "Generally" sounds weird when you are speaking about something that happens often or recurrently. It's not necessarily wrong, it just sounds weird. You can use words like "typically" or "usually" or "most of the time" You do not need to pluralize the word "food" in that sentence - it is a collective noun, so "food" can refer to any amount of food. When you say "foods", you usually are referring to different or specific types of food. However, when you are referring to an unknown and uncountable quantity of food, you just say "food." Putting 2 adjectives before 2 nouns sounds a little strange, but it is not wrong. You may want to say "I try to eat good food and delicious desserts" as it has a better flow. When you say "for example" or "such as", you don't really need to use "etc." after. This is because you are already saying that these foods are only some of the foods you eat.

i know i must to carful not to gain weight this periods :d


iI know ithat I must tobe careful not to gain weight during this periods :d.

iI know iI must to careful not to gain weight this periodduring this :d

iI know i must tothat I need to be careful not to, I could potentially gain weight during this periods :dD

i know i must to careful not to gain weight this periods :d

Just fixed minor spelling mistakes.

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