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Ryoko

July 22, 2025

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Summer

The rainy season has finished last week.It’s so hot and humid outside everyday.The most hardest part for me is where I go into or going out a building. Because my body cannot adapt temperature changes. It’s not only the hot, but also having air conditioning on puts a strain on the body. I feel that the temperature is getting hotter year by year. I’m worrying that we cannot walk outside on summer in near future.


先週、梅雨が明けました。外は毎日暑く、湿度が高いです。私にとって1番きついのは、建物の出入りです。体が気温の変化に適応できないからです。暑さだけではなく、エアコンをつけていると体に負担がかかります。毎年気温が上がっている気がします。近い未来、私たちは外を歩けなくなるのではないかと心配しています。

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Summer

TLast week the rainy season has finished last week.It’ended. It’s always so hot and humid outside everyday.The most. The hardest part for me is where I go into or going out a buildingn I enter/exit a building, since my body cannot adapt to temperature changes.

The rainy season has finished last week -> Last week the rainy season ended: Typically time phrases are put at the front

It’s so hot and humid outside everyday -> It’s always so hot and humid outside

The most hardest part for me -> The hardest part for me: "hardest" is the extreme, so "most hardest" is incorrect.

go into or going out a -> enter or exit -> enter/exit

Because my body cannot adapt temperature changes.

Appended to previous sentence.

It’s not only the hoeat, but also having air conditioning on puts a strain on themy body.

hot -> heat: Heat is the correct noun

on the body -> on my body: We're talking about your body here.

I feel that the temperature is getting hotter year band hotter every year.

hotter year by year. -> hotter and hotter every year.

I’m worryingied that we cannotwon't be able to walk outside oin summer in nearthe future.

Tense change as we're now talking about a potential future.

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It's been getting hotter around here as well. Luckily we don't have humidity so I don't have to worry about that

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Ryoko

July 23, 2025

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Thank you for correction! In Japan, the heat is also damaging crops😭

Summer

The rainy season has finishended last week. It’s so hot and humid outside every day. The most hardest part for me is where I go into or going out of a building.

Because mMy body cannot adapt to temperature changes.

I feel the same problem.

It’s not only the hot, but also havingHaving the heat and air conditioning on puts a strain on themy body.

I feel that the temperature is getting hotter year by year.

I’m worrying that we cannot walk outside oin summer in the near future.

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This summer has been brutal. I'm with you.

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Ryoko

July 23, 2025

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Thank you for correction!

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marblemenow

July 23, 2025

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You're welcome.

Summer


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The rainy season has finished last week.It’s so hot and humid outside everyday.The most hardest part for me is where I go into or going out a building.


The rainy season has finishended last week. It’s so hot and humid outside every day. The most hardest part for me is where I go into or going out of a building.

TLast week the rainy season has finished last week.It’ended. It’s always so hot and humid outside everyday.The most. The hardest part for me is where I go into or going out a buildingn I enter/exit a building, since my body cannot adapt to temperature changes.

The rainy season has finished last week -> Last week the rainy season ended: Typically time phrases are put at the front It’s so hot and humid outside everyday -> It’s always so hot and humid outside The most hardest part for me -> The hardest part for me: "hardest" is the extreme, so "most hardest" is incorrect. go into or going out a -> enter or exit -> enter/exit

Because my body cannot adapt temperature changes.


Because mMy body cannot adapt to temperature changes.

I feel the same problem.

Because my body cannot adapt temperature changes.

Appended to previous sentence.

It’s not only the hot, but also having air conditioning on puts a strain on the body.


It’s not only the hot, but also havingHaving the heat and air conditioning on puts a strain on themy body.

It’s not only the hoeat, but also having air conditioning on puts a strain on themy body.

hot -> heat: Heat is the correct noun on the body -> on my body: We're talking about your body here.

I feel that the temperature is getting hotter year by year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel that the temperature is getting hotter year band hotter every year.

hotter year by year. -> hotter and hotter every year.

I’m worrying that we cannot walk outside on summer in near future.


I’m worrying that we cannot walk outside oin summer in the near future.

I’m worryingied that we cannotwon't be able to walk outside oin summer in nearthe future.

Tense change as we're now talking about a potential future.

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