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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 10, 2023

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Summer

I am a bit tired this week, anyway, I will strive to keep writing.

Summer is a special season in my city. Chongqing, is known as one of three ovens along the Yangtze River. It can be muggy at night, particularly in August every year, due to the city is being located in the eastern part of the Sichuan basin. During those days, the elderly and children generally would move to their summer house if possible. Meanwhile, the villagers who live in comparatively higher altitude mountain areas also make good fortune from the hot weather, by renting their houses to some local citizens who are seeking temporary homes to pass the scorching weather.

To tell the truth, I am not afraid of the heat wave in Summer, since the extreme days only last around two weeks. The highest temperature is around 45 degrees Celsius. However, the villagers would be excited when they find the figure of weather forecast over 40 or 45, and the price simultaneously rises with the figure.

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Summer

I am a bit tired this week, anywayhowever, I will strive to keep writing.

Summer is a special season in my city.

Chongqing, is known as one of three ovens along the Yangtze River.

It can beget muggy at night, particularly in August every year, due to the city is being located in the eastern part of the Sichuan basin.

During those days, the elderly and children generally would move to their summer house if possible.

Meanwhile, the villagers who live in mountainous areas of comparatively higher altitude mountain areas also make good fortune from the hot weather, by renting their houses to some local citizens who are seeking temporary homes to passshelter from the scorching weather.

To tell the truth, I am not afraid of the heat wave in Ssummer, since the extreme daysheat only last around two weeks.

The highest temperature is around 45 degrees Celsius.

However, the villagers would beget excited when they find the figure of weather forecast the weather forecast predicts temperatures abover 40 or 45, and the pricebecause their rental prices would simultaneously rises with the figpredicted temperature.

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 10, 2023

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thank you for your corrections! :-)

Summer

I am a bit tired this week, a. Anyway, I will strive to keep writing.

Summer is a special season in my city.

Chongqing, is known as one of three ovens along the Yangtze River.

It can be muggy at night, particularly in August every year, due to the city is being located in the eastern part of the Sichuan basin.

During those days, if possible, the elderly and children generally would move to their summer house if possibles.

MeanwhileDuring this period, the villagers who live in comparatively higher altitude mountainous areas also, make good fortune from the hot weather, by renting their houses to some local citizens who are seeking temporary homes to passavoid the scorching weather.

To tell the truth, I am not afraid of the heat wave in Ssummer, since the extreme days only last around two weeks.

The highest temperature is around 45 degrees Celsius.

However, the villagers would be excited when they find the figure of weather forecast to be over 40 or 45, ands the price simultaneously risesrent rises commensurate with the figtemperature.

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 10, 2023

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thank you for your corrections! :-)

I am a bit tired this week, anyway, I willbut I will nevertheless strive to keep writing.

Summer is a special season in my city.,

Chongqing, which is known as one of the 'Three oOvens' along the Yangtze River.

Capitalized three ovens and added quotations to emphasize that it is a nickname.

It can be muggy at night, particularly during August every year, due to the city is being located in the eastern part of the Sichuan basin.

During those days, the elderly and children generally would move to their summer house if possible.

Meanwhile, the villagers who live in comparatively higher -altitude mountainous areas also make a good fortune from the hot weather, by renting their houses to some local citizens who are seeking temporary homes to pass the scorching weather.

Not necessary to mention the last part since you mention that they make a good fortune from the hot weather so it can be inferred that the citizens are trying to avoid it.

To tell the truth, I am not afraid of the heat wave in Sthe summer, since the extreme daytemperatures only last around two weeks.

The highest temperature is around 45 degrees Celsius.

However, the villagers would be excited when they find the figure of weather forecast over 40 or 45probably be thrilled if the weather forecast reported temperatures of over 40 or 45 degrees Celsius, ands the price of rent rises simultaneously rises with the figure.

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 10, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections and explainations! :-)

Summer


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I am a bit tired this week, anyway, I will strive to keep writing.


I am a bit tired this week, anyway, I willbut I will nevertheless strive to keep writing.

I am a bit tired this week, a. Anyway, I will strive to keep writing.

I am a bit tired this week, anywayhowever, I will strive to keep writing.

Summer is a special season in my city.


Summer is a special season in my city.,

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Chongqing, is known as one of three ovens along the Yangtze River.


Chongqing, which is known as one of the 'Three oOvens' along the Yangtze River.

Capitalized three ovens and added quotations to emphasize that it is a nickname.

Chongqing, is known as one of three ovens along the Yangtze River.

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It can be muggy at night, particularly in August every year, due to the city is being located in the eastern part of the Sichuan basin.


It can be muggy at night, particularly during August every year, due to the city is being located in the eastern part of the Sichuan basin.

It can be muggy at night, particularly in August every year, due to the city is being located in the eastern part of the Sichuan basin.

It can beget muggy at night, particularly in August every year, due to the city is being located in the eastern part of the Sichuan basin.

During those days, the elderly and children generally would move to their summer house if possible.


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During those days, if possible, the elderly and children generally would move to their summer house if possibles.

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Meanwhile, the villagers who live in comparatively higher altitude mountain areas also make good fortune from the hot weather, by renting their houses to some local citizens who are seeking temporary homes to pass the scorching weather.


Meanwhile, the villagers who live in comparatively higher -altitude mountainous areas also make a good fortune from the hot weather, by renting their houses to some local citizens who are seeking temporary homes to pass the scorching weather.

Not necessary to mention the last part since you mention that they make a good fortune from the hot weather so it can be inferred that the citizens are trying to avoid it.

MeanwhileDuring this period, the villagers who live in comparatively higher altitude mountainous areas also, make good fortune from the hot weather, by renting their houses to some local citizens who are seeking temporary homes to passavoid the scorching weather.

Meanwhile, the villagers who live in mountainous areas of comparatively higher altitude mountain areas also make good fortune from the hot weather, by renting their houses to some local citizens who are seeking temporary homes to passshelter from the scorching weather.

To tell the truth, I am not afraid of the heat wave in Summer, since the extreme days only last around two weeks.


To tell the truth, I am not afraid of the heat wave in Sthe summer, since the extreme daytemperatures only last around two weeks.

To tell the truth, I am not afraid of the heat wave in Ssummer, since the extreme days only last around two weeks.

To tell the truth, I am not afraid of the heat wave in Ssummer, since the extreme daysheat only last around two weeks.

The highest temperature is around 45 degrees Celsius.


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However, the villagers would be excited when they find the figure of weather forecast over 40 or 45, and the price simultaneously rises with the figure.


However, the villagers would be excited when they find the figure of weather forecast over 40 or 45probably be thrilled if the weather forecast reported temperatures of over 40 or 45 degrees Celsius, ands the price of rent rises simultaneously rises with the figure.

However, the villagers would be excited when they find the figure of weather forecast to be over 40 or 45, ands the price simultaneously risesrent rises commensurate with the figtemperature.

However, the villagers would beget excited when they find the figure of weather forecast the weather forecast predicts temperatures abover 40 or 45, and the pricebecause their rental prices would simultaneously rises with the figpredicted temperature.

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