July 23, 2025
Suggestions to Improve Public Transportation Services
To whom it may concern,
I am Paula. I have been a member of the club for 5 years. I am writing to you, because I have different suggestions about this idea.
Firstly, I would like to mention that public services of transports are very important in our lives. Many people use these transport to go to work, university... or other places. I think that this method it is important, because if we go on public transport, you can reduced the pollution.
Nevertheless, public transport is less comfortable than own transport. For this reason, for we can avoid that people prefer the second option, the public transport should have more facilities and must be free for all people, because nowadays these transports are so expensive and all people cannot afford to buy their tickets.
What do you think ?
*Hello I am Paula and I am studying for my english exam. It is on august and I study for the b1 level. I would like if my writing is right for my exam. Thank you ;)
Suggestions to Improve Public Transportation Services
To whom it may concern, I am Paula.
I have been a member of the club for 5 years.
I am writing to you, because I have different suggestions about this idea.
Firstly, I would like to mention that public services of transports are very important in our lives.
Many people use these means of transport to go to work, university..., or other places.
The ... isn't needed if you're mentioning other places.
I think that this method it is important, because if we go onusing public transport, you can reduced thes air pollution.
Avoid putting two conjunctions together.
For this reason, for we can avoid that people prefer the second option,To encourage people to use the public transport more frequently, it should have more facilities and. It must also be free for all peopleveryone, because nowadayscurrently these transporickets are sovery expensive and all peoplnot everyone cannot afford to buy their ticketshem.
Breaking sentences helps the reader as well as the writer.
Many people use these transport to go to work, university... or other places etc.
Etc would be perfect here
I think that this method it is important, because if we go on public transport, you can reduced the pollution.
Nevertheless, public transport is less comfortable than own transportusing your own car.
I'm assuming that you're talking about using your own car here.
For this reason, forso we can avoid that people preferchoose the second option, the public transport should have more facilities and must be free for all people, because nowadays these transports are so expensive and all peopleveryone cannot afford to buy their tickets.
What do you think ?
It is oin august and I study for the b1 level.
I would like to know if my writing is right for my exam.
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Good luck for your exam Paula! I'm sure you're gonna crush it!
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To whom it may concern, I am Paula. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have been a member of the club for 5 years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am writing to you, because I have different suggestions about this idea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Firstly, I would like to mention that public services of transports are very important in our lives. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Many people use these transport to go to work, university... or other places. Many people use these transport to go to work, university Etc would be perfect here Many people use these means of transport to go to work, university The ... isn't needed if you're mentioning other places. |
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What do you think ? What do you think |
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Thank you ;) |
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I think that this method it is important, because if we go on public transport, you can reduced the pollution. I think that this method I think that this method Avoid putting two conjunctions together. |
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Nevertheless, public transport is less comfortable than own transport. Nevertheless, public transport is less comfortable than I'm assuming that you're talking about using your own car here. |
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For this reason, for we can avoid that people prefer the second option, the public transport should have more facilities and must be free for all people, because nowadays these transports are so expensive and all people cannot afford to buy their tickets. For this reason,
Breaking sentences helps the reader as well as the writer. |
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*Hello I am Paula and I am studying for my english exam. |
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It is on august and I study for the b1 level. It is |
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I would like if my writing is right for my exam. I would like to know if my writing is right for my exam. |
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Thanks you ;) |
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