Nov. 9, 2024
SugarCane's Diary① Why did you choose that kind of job？②
①diary：I aspire to create a podcast about public health in the future,it can include some videos,images and voice and so on.But now I have to prepare the lelts test，so that I can go to the school to chase my graduate school's life. I am not a native English speaker, it is very difficult to deal with the speaking part！(╥╯^╰╥)o(╥﹏╥)o
②This is my speaking test question for part1：why did you choose that kind of job？
answering the question：To be honest, I aspire to create a podcast about public health, and I believe that immersing myself in the media industry and fully engaging with a project from start to finish is essential. Gaining familiarity with all aspects of production is invaluable for my podcast plans and the prospect excites me. I aim to craft something truly unique and immersive. Although, as previously mentioned, frontline work can be relentless with hardly any days off, it also deeply informs me of the vast amount I still have to learn. by the way，The industry's rapid growth also offers boundless opportunities, and overall, accumulating frontline experience is the primary reason I chose this job.
I say words very slowly，even I have some good words or phrases，I still can not speak fluently. Mabey I have to minus some words?
①日记：我希望未来能创建一个关于公共卫生的播客，可能会包括一些视频、图片和声音等内容。但是现在我必须准备雅思考试，这样我才能进入学校开始我的研究生生活。我不是以英语为母语的人，口语部分对我来说太太太太难了！(╥╯^╰╥)o(╥﹏╥)o
②这是我的口语考试part1的题目：你为什么选择那样的工作？
回答问题：老实说，我渴望创建一个关于公共卫生的播客，我相信深入媒体行业并从头到尾参与一个项目是必不可少的。熟悉所有制作环节对于我的播客计划来说是无价的，而且这个前景也让我感到兴奋。我希望能够创造出真正独特和沉浸式的东西。虽然如前所述，一线工作可能是轮流转的，几乎没有休息日，但这也让我深刻了解到我还有很多东西要学习。行业的快速增长提供了无尽的机会，总的来说，积累一线经验是我选择这份工作的主要原因。
我讲得很慢，即使我准备了一些好词好句，我还是不能够非常流利的说出来，也许我应该减少字数？
SugarCane's Diary① Why did you choose that kind of job？②
①diary：I aspire to create a podcast about public health in the future,it can. It might include some videos, images and, voice, and so on. But now I have to prepare the lelts test，so that I can go to the school to chase myfor the IELTS test, so I can go to graduate school's life.
There are some cases where you can use "and" multiple times in a list, but we normally only use "and" once in a list.
I am not a native English speaker, i. It is very difficult to deal with the speaking part！(╥╯^╰╥)o(╥﹏╥)o
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②This is my speaking test question for part 1：why did you choose that kind of job？
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Answering the question：: To be honest, I aspire to create a podcast about public health, and I believe that immersing myself in the media industry and fully engaging with a project from start to finish is essential.
Instead of "Answering the question:" you could also say "My answer:"
Gaining familiarity with all aspects of production is invaluable for my podcast plans and the prospect excites me.
I aim to craft something truly unique and immersive.
Although, as previously mentioned, frontline work can be relentless with hardly any days off, i. It also deeply informstrongly reminds me of the vast amount of things I still have to learn.
I think "remind" is a better word to use
bBy the way，T, the industry's rapid growth also offers boundless opportunities, and overall, accumulating frontline experience is the primary reason I chose this job.
I say words very slowly，even. Even if I have some good words or phrases，, I still can not speak fluently.
Maybey I have to ominust some words?
Nov. 10, 2024
Thank you for your feedback, it has been incredibly helpful to me！(*´▽｀)ノノ
SugarCane's Diary① Why did you choose that kindtype of job？②
①diary：I aspire to create a podcast about public health in the future, it canould include some videos, images and, voice and so on. But now I have to prepare for the lelts test，so that I can go to the school to chase my graduate school's life.
In the second sentence you would normally specify the school's name. Also, in English you can say "chase my graduate school dream"
I am not a native English speaker, it is very difficult to deal with the speaking part！(╥╯^╰╥)o(╥﹏╥)o ②This is my speaking test question for part1：why did you choose that kind of job？ answering the question：To be honest, I aspire to create a podcast about public health, and I believe that immersing myself in the media industry and fully engaging with a project from start to finish is essential.
Gaining familiarity with all aspects of production is invaluable for my podcast plans and the prospect excites me.
I aim to craft something truly unique and immersive.
Although, as previously mentioned, frontline work can be relentless with hardly any days off, it also deeply informs me of the vast amount I still have to learn.
bBy the way，Tthe industry's rapid growth also offers boundless opportunities, a. And overall, accumulating frontline experience is the primary reason I chose this job.
Instead of by the way, maybe try something more formal. Something like "That aside"
I say the words very slowly，even I have som, and even when I have good words or phrases，, I still can no't speak fluently.
Maybey I have to minustake out some words?
Feedback
Try reading outloud and shadowing exercises. They're really good for improving fluidity and gaining vocabulary. As for taking out words, it's always a good idea to get rid of things that you can't say consistently.
Having good English isn't necessarily about using big words, but having a comfortable level of familiarity with expressing yourself and your ideas. As a native English speaker, your speech is something I'd write in an essay, but I'd simplify it slightly if I actually had to say it out loud.
Nov. 10, 2024
Thanks so much for your feedback! ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ﾉﾞI’ll give your suggestion a try!(๑╹◡╹)ﾉ"""
SugarCane's Diary ① Why did you choose that kind of job？? ②
① diary：: I aspire to create a podcast about public health in the future,it can. It might include some videos, images and, voice and so on. But now I have to prepare for the leltsELTS test，, so that I can go to the school to chaseet into a school and begin my graduate school's life.
Be careful of the spacing around punctuation. This is much more important in English than in Chinese.
Nov. 10, 2024
Wow, that's a point I never thought of! Thanks so much for the awesome suggestion!ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ
SugarCane's Diary① Why did you choose that kind of job？②
①diary：I aspire to create a podcast about public health in the future,it can which would include some videos, images and voice, vocals, and so on. But now I have to prepare for the lelts test，, so that I can go to graduathe school to chase my graduate school's life.oals.
I am not a native English speaker, and it is very difficult to deal with the speaking part！(╥╯^╰╥)o(╥﹏╥)o
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②This is my speaking test question for part1：wWhy did you choose that kind of job？
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Answering the question：To be honest, I aspire to create a podcast about public health, and I believe that immersing myself in the media industry and fully engaging with a project from start to finish is essential.
Gaining familiarity with all aspects of production is invaluable for my podcast plans and the prospect excites me.
I aim to craft something truly unique and immersive.
Although, as previously mentioned, frontline work can be relentless with hardly any days off, but it also deeply informs me of the vast amount I still have to learn.
bBy the way，T, the industry's rapid growth also offers boundless opportunities, and overall, accumulating frontline experience is the primary reason I chose this job.
I say words very slowly，, even if I have some good words or phrases，, I still can not speak fluently.
Maybey I have to minuseliminate some words?
Nov. 10, 2024
Thanks for the great suggestion! Hope you have an amazing day!ヾ(o´∀｀o)ﾉ
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I am not a native English speaker, it is very difficult to deal with the speaking part！(╥╯^╰╥)o(╥﹏╥)o ②This is my speaking test question for part1：why did you choose that kind of job？ answering the question：To be honest, I aspire to create a podcast about public health, and I believe that immersing myself in the media industry and fully engaging with a project from start to finish is essential. I am not a native English speaker, and it is very difficult to deal with the speaking part！(╥╯^╰╥)o(╥﹏╥)o This sentence has been marked as perfect! I am not a native English speaker Instead of "Answering the question:" you could also say "My answer:" |
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by the way，The industry's rapid growth also offers boundless opportunities, and overall, accumulating frontline experience is the primary reason I chose this job.
Instead of by the way, maybe try something more formal. Something like "That aside"
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