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Yamin

May 16, 2025

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Success

Success، a word you hear from everyone. People keep saying you need to win awards, to be someone important in society.
You try. You keep trying. You push yourself. But sometimes, you feel like you’re drowning. You’re human. You have limits.
I work. I really do. And sometimes I feel guilty for not working harder. But I still hold on to hope. I believe that good things will happen.
I know I’m someone who can do the impossible. But I also know I have to accept the bad news like; “We’re not selecting you”, “Sorry”, or even just “Rejected.”
In the end, I can only do my best.
(We all have to keep working hard)...


النجاح، كلمة تسمعها من الجميع. يستمر الناس في القول بأنك تحتاج إلى الفوز بجوائز، لتكون شخصًا مهمًا في المجتمع.
أنت تحاول. تستمر في المحاولة. تضغط على نفسك. لكن في بعض الأحيان، تشعر وكأنك تغرق. أنت إنسان. لديك حدود.
أنا أعمل. أعمل حقاً. وأحياناً أشعر بالذنب لأنني لا أعمل بجهد أكبر. لكنني ما زلت متمسكة بالأمل. أؤمن بأن الأشياء الجيدة ستحدث.
أعلم أنني شخص قادر على فعل المستحيل. ولكنني أعلم أيضاً أنني يجب أن أواجه الأخبار السيئة أحياناً مثل ”لم نختارك“ أو ’آسف‘ أو ”مرفوض“.
في النهاية، سأبذل قصارى جهدي.
(علينا جميعًا أن نواصل العمل بجد)...

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Success

Success، a word you hear from everyone.

People keep saying you need to win awards, to be someone important in society.

You try.

You keep trying.

You push yourself.

But sometimes, you feel like you’re drowning.

You’re human.

You have limits.

I work.

I really do.

And sometimes I feel guilty for not working harder.

But I still hold on to hope.

I believe that good things will happen.

I know I’m someone who can do the impossible.

But I also know I have to accept the bad news like; “We’re not selecting you”, “Sorry”, or even just “Rejected.” In the end, I can only do my best.

(We all have to keep working hard)...

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Agreed, good luck!

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Nice one

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Yamin

May 17, 2025

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Thanks

But I also know I have to face theaccept bad news sometimeslike: “We’re not selecting you”, “Sorry”, or even just “Rejected.
In the end, I
’ll can only do my best.

(wWe all have to keep working hard)...

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I feel you! I feel like society conditions us to never be satisfied with what we have, but sometimes just trying every day is enough.

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Yamin

May 17, 2025

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Thanks i really appreciate that🙏🏻

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But I also know I have to face the bad news sometimeslike: “We’re not selecting you”, “Sorry”, or just “Rejected.” In the end, I’ll do my best.


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In the end, I
’ll can only do my best.

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But sometimes, you feel like you’re drowning.


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You’re human.


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You have limits.


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I really do.


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And sometimes I feel guilty for not working harder.


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But I still hold on to hope.


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I believe that good things will happen.


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I know I’m someone who can do the impossible.


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But I also know I have to accept the bad news like; “We’re not selecting you”, “Sorry”, or even just “Rejected.” In the end, I can only do my best.


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