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ricky

Dec. 22, 2020

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Subject I love

I think for me, my favorite subject is biology. I have love this subject since I was very young. When I was in primary school, we had this subject in my school. At that time, it was quite easy because these books just showed us colorful pictures of animals. For example, the books showed some interesting animals we have never seen in our daily life, which can easily catch my eyes. On top of that it was as easy as a-b-c, so that I could keep up with teachers and make the grade , that can make me feel a sense of fulfillment at that time. Then when we went to secondary school, it became a little bit difficult because it introduced the difference between men and women, the organs, how women get pregnant and how they deliver a baby. So it was quite hard to catch up and ace the test. When I attended high school, it became much more difficult and complicated because it liked mathematics and teachers covered a lot of ground at once. Every time when it came to the pop quiz, my mind went blank and bombed my tests at that time. So I stayed behind in this subject. But I am still a big fan of it, because I know it plays a significant role in our lives. For example, genetically modified food and medical advancements which make a contribution to our society require knowledge from these fields.

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My Favourite Subject I love

I think for me, my favourite subject iswould be biology.

I have loved this subject since I was very young.

When I was in primary school, we had this subjectwere taught this in my school.

At that time, it was quite easy because these books just showed us colorful pictures of animals.

"these books" suggest the books are in front of you currently

For example, the books showed some interesting animals we haved never seen in our daily life, which can easily catchught my eyes.

The sentence should be in the past since you're talking about when you used to be in school

On top of that it was as easy as a-b-c, so that I could keepkept up with teachers and make thegot good grade s, that can makde me feel a sense of fulfillment at that time.

Again, it should be in past tense. I wouldn't say "make the grade" since that doesn't make much sense in English, instead "achieved good grades", "got good grades" sound better.

Then when we went to secondary school, and it became a little bit more difficult because it introduced the difference between men and women, the organs, how women get pregnant and how they deliver a baby.

When I attended high school, it became much more difficult and complicated because it liked mathematics and the teachers covered a lot of ground at once.

Every time when it came to the pop quiz, my mind went blank and I would bombed my tests at that time.

the "at that time" is unnecessary

So I stayedgot behind in this subject.

You weren't behind beforehand but became behind hence why I used "got" instead of "stayed" since "stayed" implies that you were behind before.

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ricky

Dec. 23, 2020

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Thank you so much~

Subject I love


My Favourite Subject I love

I think for me, my favorite subject is biology.


I think for me, my favourite subject iswould be biology.

I have love this subject since I was very young.


I have loved this subject since I was very young.

When I was in primary school, we had this subject in my school.


When I was in primary school, we had this subjectwere taught this in my school.

At that time, it was quite easy because these books just showed us colorful pictures of animals.


At that time, it was quite easy because these books just showed us colorful pictures of animals.

"these books" suggest the books are in front of you currently

For example, the books showed some interesting animals we have never seen in our daily life, which can easily catch my eyes.


For example, the books showed some interesting animals we haved never seen in our daily life, which can easily catchught my eyes.

The sentence should be in the past since you're talking about when you used to be in school

On top of that it was as easy as a-b-c, so that I could keep up with teachers and make the grade , that can make me feel a sense of fulfillment at that time.


On top of that it was as easy as a-b-c, so that I could keepkept up with teachers and make thegot good grade s, that can makde me feel a sense of fulfillment at that time.

Again, it should be in past tense. I wouldn't say "make the grade" since that doesn't make much sense in English, instead "achieved good grades", "got good grades" sound better.

Then when we went to secondary school, it became a little bit difficult because it introduced the difference between men and women, the organs, how women get pregnant and how they deliver a baby.


Then when we went to secondary school, and it became a little bit more difficult because it introduced the difference between men and women, the organs, how women get pregnant and how they deliver a baby.

So it was quite hard to catch up and ace the test.


When I attended high school, it became much more difficult and complicated because it liked mathematics and teachers covered a lot of ground at once.


When I attended high school, it became much more difficult and complicated because it liked mathematics and the teachers covered a lot of ground at once.

Every time when it came to the pop quiz, my mind went blank and bombed my tests at that time.


Every time when it came to the pop quiz, my mind went blank and I would bombed my tests at that time.

the "at that time" is unnecessary

So I stayed behind in this subject.


So I stayedgot behind in this subject.

You weren't behind beforehand but became behind hence why I used "got" instead of "stayed" since "stayed" implies that you were behind before.

But I am still a big fan of it, because I know it plays a significant role in our lives.


For example, genetically modified food and medical advancements which make a contribution to our society require knowledge from these fields.


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