June 10, 2020
Stuff and Things
Most of the time I can't keep the things I bought in their decent state. I'm a bad user in this sense. I think it's better to know how to treat your your belongings so you could sell them later. Of course, it's also a more ethical thing to do. Instead of throwing away a thing, and adding your garbage to the junkyards, which are already full. Unfortunately, in our country, we don't have garbage recycling system, so reselling stuff is the a good way to do. The most horrible story of ruining a thing is my electric guitar. I bought when I was at high school. I didn't know how to treat it well, and it ended up being broken and dirty, and I dropped playing it. I even broke the electronics. In the end, I sold it to my nephew almost for free. He was happy to get the guitar, and managed to fix it. Now he enjoys playing it. Eventually, I'm glad that my guitar now in good hands, and bringing entertainment to someone, rather than lying broken in the dust. If I buy a new guitar (I guess I would buy an acoustic one), I'd better to learn how to treat it better.
I don't know whether I should use "things", "stuff", or "belongings" for the things you buy and use in your everyday life.
Don't mention the title. It's a reference to an old meme from "The Walking Dead" show :D
Stuff and Things
Most of the time I can't keep the things I bought in theirthat I buy in a decent state.
I think it's better to know how to treat your your belongings well so you couldan sell them later.
Of course, it's also a more ethical thing to do.
The most horrible story of ruining a thing is my electric guitar.
I bought it when I was atin high school.
I even broke the electronics.
In the end, I sold it to my nephew almost for free.
He was happy to get the guitar, and managed to fix it.
Now he enjoys playing it.
Stuff and Things
Most of the time I can't keep the things I bought in theira decent state.
Alternately, "in good condition."
I'm a bad user in this sense.
I think it's better to know how to treat your your belongings so you could sell them later.
Of course, it's also a more ethical thing to do.
Instead of throwing away a thing,things away and adding your garbage to the junkyards, which are already full.
This sentence is incomplete, but you can combine it with the previous sentence since they are contrasting two behaviors. "Of course, it's more ethical to do this instead of throwing things away and adding your garbage to the junkyards, which are already full."
Unfortunately, in our country, we don't have a garbage recycling system, so reselling stuff is the a good way to do.
The most horrible story of ruining a thing is my electric guitar.
I bought it when I was at high school.
I didn't know how to treat it well, and it ended up being broken and dirty, and I droppedquit playing it.
I think "quit" is more natural, but "dropped" is also okay.
I even broke the electronics.
In the end, I sold it to my nephew almost for free.
He was happy to get the guitar, and managed to fix it.
Now he enjoys playing it.
Eventually, I'm glad that my guitar is now in good hands, and is bringing entertainment to someone, rather than lying broken in the dust.
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It's cool that your nephew managed to fix that guitar so it didn't get wasted. :)
June 11, 2020
Yes. I agree. Thank you!
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Most of the time I can't keep the things I bought in their decent state. Most of the time I can't keep the things I bought in Alternately, "in good condition." Most of the time I can't keep the things |
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I'm a bad user in this sense. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think it's better to know how to treat your your belongings so you could sell them later. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I think it's better to |
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Of course, it's also a more ethical thing to do. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Instead of throwing away a thing, and adding your garbage to the junkyards, which are already full. Instead of throwing This sentence is incomplete, but you can combine it with the previous sentence since they are contrasting two behaviors. "Of course, it's more ethical to do this instead of throwing things away and adding your garbage to the junkyards, which are already full." |
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Unfortunately, in our country, we don't have garbage recycling system, so reselling stuff is the a good way to do. Unfortunately, in our country, we don't have a garbage recycling system, so reselling stuff is |
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The most horrible story of ruining a thing is my electric guitar. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I bought when I was at high school. I bought it when I was at high school. I bought it when I was |
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I didn't know how to treat it well, and it ended up being broken and dirty, and I dropped playing it. I didn't know how to treat it well, and it ended up being broken and dirty, and I I think "quit" is more natural, but "dropped" is also okay. |
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I even broke the electronics. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the end, I sold it to my nephew almost for free. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He was happy to get the guitar, and managed to fix it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now he enjoys playing it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Eventually, I'm glad that my guitar now in good hands, and bringing entertainment to someone, rather than lying broken in the dust.
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If I buy a new guitar (I guess I would buy an acoustic one), I'd better to learn how to treat it better. |
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