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sumaya

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I'm feeling positive today, I haven't felt like that in a long time. And I know why, it's simply because I am trying to isolate myself from my family a bit more.
This is normal to me by the way, to be away from them, but sometimes I get myself involved with their problems.
But over time, I've learnt that I need to isolate myself from them to be mentally okay.
I heard them yelling at my brother today because he stayed out late yesterday, I immediately grabbed my headphones and turned the music on in a high volume.
I know that this is running away from the problem and it's not healthy.
But this is the best option right now, I can't face them while I have to study, I have a lot to deal with already.
Being in an unstable house will not stop me from studying.
I am studying so I could be able to face the problems and difficulties that I'm running away from in the moment.


أشعر بإيجابية اليوم، لم أشعر بذلك منذ زمن طويل. وأعلم السبب، ببساطة لأنني أحاول عزل نفسي عن عائلتي أكثر.

من الطبيعي بالنسبة لي، أن أكون بعيدًا عنهم، لكنني أحيانًا أتورط في مشاكلهم.

لكن مع مرور الوقت، تعلمت أنني بحاجة لعزل نفسي عنهم لأكون في حالة نفسية جيدة.

سمعتهم يصرخون على أخي اليوم لأنه تأخر بالأمس، فأمسكت سماعاتي على الفور وشغّلت الموسيقى بصوت عالٍ.

أعلم أن هذا هروب من المشكلة، وهو أمر غير صحي.

لكن هذا هو الخيار الأفضل الآن، لا أستطيع مواجهتهم وأنا مضطرة للدراسة، لديّ الكثير لأتعامل معه بالفعل.

لن يمنعني العيش في منزل غير مستقر من الدراسة.

أدرس لأتمكن من مواجهة المشاكل والصعوبات التي أهرب منها في الوقت الحالي.

Corrections

Studying

I'm feeling positive today, I haven't felt like that in a long time.

And I know why, it's simply because I am trying to isolate myself from my family a bit more.

This is normal to me by the way, to be away from them, but sometimes I get myself involved with their problems.

But over time, I've learnt that I need to isolate myself from them to be mentally okay.

I heard them yelling at my brother today because he stayed out late yesterday, I immediately grabbed my headphones and turned the music on in a high volume.

I know that this is running away from the problem and it's not healthy.,

This is well written, although since this is quite a short sentence and it leads nicely into the next line, most people would end this sentence with a comma.

But this is the best option right now, I can't face them while I have to study, I have a lot to deal with already.

Being in an unstable house will not stop me from studying.

I am studying so I could be able to face the problems and difficulties that I'm running away from inat the moment.

This sentence didn't read very well but I think I understand what you're trying to say. Changing "in the moment" to "at the moment" helps get the point across better I think. "In the moment" is generally used when referring to a time other than the present, it rarely refers to the current moment. Most people would say "at the moment". For example, "I can't talk at the moment" or "I've got a lot going on at the moment".

Feedback

Very well written overall! This would pass as a native's writing if I didn't know otherwise. The feedback I've given is nitpicky at worst, keep it up!

Studying


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I'm feeling positive today, I haven't felt like that in a long time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I know why, it's simply because I am trying to isolate myself from my family a bit more.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is normal to me by the way, to be away from them, but sometimes I get myself involved with their problems.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Being in an unstable house will not stop me from studying.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But over time, I've learnt that I need to isolate myself from them to be mentally okay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I heard them yelling at my brother today because he stayed out late yesterday, I immediately grabbed my headphones and turned the music on in a high volume.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I know that this is running away from the problem and it's not healthy.


I know that this is running away from the problem and it's not healthy.,

This is well written, although since this is quite a short sentence and it leads nicely into the next line, most people would end this sentence with a comma.

But this is the best option right now, I can't face them while I have to study, I have a lot to deal with already.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am studying so I could be able to face the problems and difficulties that I'm running away from in the moment.


I am studying so I could be able to face the problems and difficulties that I'm running away from inat the moment.

This sentence didn't read very well but I think I understand what you're trying to say. Changing "in the moment" to "at the moment" helps get the point across better I think. "In the moment" is generally used when referring to a time other than the present, it rarely refers to the current moment. Most people would say "at the moment". For example, "I can't talk at the moment" or "I've got a lot going on at the moment".

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