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cthylla

March 5, 2023

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I always wondered if I ever could have a study partner or some short, because of how unlucky the last 6 years I had been with my class mates, that way we could ask each other questions, doubts about the matter, push each other when we were feeling down and unmotivated and work less by splitting up the content.
I'm happy to announce that my dream came true! I finally have someone with me to do all that, and it's been wonderful so far. Of course, we do have our little discussions, but we are always open to talk and listen to see the other side of the story, but I can see some improvements in the quality of the stuff I do and also my mental state. I have more time to enjoy life, since what I used to do it's now taking me half the time. I ask questions and recieve feedback that I understand. I work more and feel a lot less selfish, and when we don't feel like studying, we do lighter things that are related to the matter. I love it so far!

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Studying (2)

I always wondered if I ever couldwhether I would ever have a study partner or some short, because of how unlucky the last 6 years I hadhave been with my class mates, that way. With a study partner, we could ask each other questions, express doubts about the matter, push each other when we were feeling down and unmotivated and work less by splitting up the content.

I'm happy to announce that my dream came true!

I finally have someone with me to do all that, with me and it's been wonderful so far.

Congratulations!

Of course, we do have our little discussions, but we are always open to talk and listen to see the other side of thea story, but I can see some improvements in the quality of the stuff I do and also to my mental state.

Very nice!

I have more time to enjoy life, since what I used to do it's now taking me half theonly half as much time.

I ask questions and recieive feedback that I understand.

I work more and feel a lot less selfish, and, when we don't feel like studying, we do lighter things that are related to the matter.

What a great outcome!

I love it so far!

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Yay you! Nice work, too!

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cthylla

March 8, 2023

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Thanks for the corrections and the nice messages!

Studying (2)

I always wondered if I ever could have a study partner or some short, because of how unlucky the last 6 years I had been with my class mates, that way we could ask each other questions, doubts about thea matter, push each other when we were feeling down and unmotivated and work less by splitting up the content.

The is too specific for this context

I'm happy to announce that my dream cahas come true!

Has come is more closer, / recent than had

I finally have someone with me to do all that, and it's been wonderful so far.

Of course, we do have our little discussions, but we are always open to talking and listening to see the other side of the storyanother person’s perspective, but I can see some improvements in the quality of the stuff I do and also my mental state.

The gerund is overused in English this is an example!

I have more time to enjoy life, since what I used to do it's now taking me half the time.

I ask questions and recieive feedback that I understand.

I work more and feel a lot less selfish, and when we don't feel like studying, we do lighter things that are related to the matter.

I love it so far!

Feedback

That sounds like a wonderful learning environment, well done!

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I always wondered if I ever could have a study partner or some short, because of how unlucky the last 6 years I had been with my class mates, that way we could ask each other questions, doubts about the matter, push each other when we were feeling down and unmotivated and work less by splitting up the content.


I always wondered if I ever could have a study partner or some short, because of how unlucky the last 6 years I had been with my class mates, that way we could ask each other questions, doubts about thea matter, push each other when we were feeling down and unmotivated and work less by splitting up the content.

The is too specific for this context

I always wondered if I ever couldwhether I would ever have a study partner or some short, because of how unlucky the last 6 years I hadhave been with my class mates, that way. With a study partner, we could ask each other questions, express doubts about the matter, push each other when we were feeling down and unmotivated and work less by splitting up the content.

I'm happy to announce that my dream came true!


I'm happy to announce that my dream cahas come true!

Has come is more closer, / recent than had

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I finally have someone with me to do all that, and it's been wonderful so far.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I finally have someone with me to do all that, with me and it's been wonderful so far.

Congratulations!

Of course, we do have our little discussions, but we are always open to talk and listen to see the other side of the story, but I can see some improvements in the quality of the stuff I do and also my mental state.


Of course, we do have our little discussions, but we are always open to talking and listening to see the other side of the storyanother person’s perspective, but I can see some improvements in the quality of the stuff I do and also my mental state.

The gerund is overused in English this is an example!

Of course, we do have our little discussions, but we are always open to talk and listen to see the other side of thea story, but I can see some improvements in the quality of the stuff I do and also to my mental state.

Very nice!

I have more time to enjoy life, since what I used to do it's now taking me half the time.


I have more time to enjoy life, since what I used to do it's now taking me half the time.

I have more time to enjoy life, since what I used to do it's now taking me half theonly half as much time.

I ask questions and recieve feedback that I understand.


I ask questions and recieive feedback that I understand.

I ask questions and recieive feedback that I understand.

I work more and feel a lot less selfish, and when we don't feel like studying, we do lighter things that are related to the matter.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I work more and feel a lot less selfish, and, when we don't feel like studying, we do lighter things that are related to the matter.

What a great outcome!

I love it so far!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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