Jan. 8, 2022
Study With My Kids
My kids are always curious about my study routines.
When I try to do something new, they come around me and watch what I do.
If someone wants to study the new way like me, I give him a chance to do.
Today, I get started to use an app which is for practising speaking in English.
One my kids wants to speak like me even though he can't understand any thing in English.
After keeping practicing , he can finally speak the sentence.
It gives him a confidence to speak in English as well.
I hope I will give them good espects about studying.
If someone wants to study the new way like me, I give him a chance to do so.
To do here needs another an object or the word so to complete its usage or the thought sounds like it is left open and not completed.
Today, I get started to use an app which is, used for practising speaking in English.
A more native sounding use of language. There are many variations that are possible here.
One of my kids wants to speak like me even though he can't understand any thing in English.
Of is necessary in this case.
It gives him a confidence to speak in English as well.
Indefinite article not necessary.
I hope I will give them good esxpectations about studying.
Use expectations for espects.
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Very well done! Very minor suggestions. However everything written is still very easy to understand for any English speaker. These updates are truly minor flags that are the difference between a native speaker and someone who is learning.
Jan. 8, 2022
Thank you very much.
Study With My Kids
My kids are always curious about my study routines.
If someone wants to study the new way like meusing this new way I am trying, I give him a chance to do. so.
Today, I geot started to useusing an app which is for practiscing speaking in English.
One my kids wants to speak like me even though he can't understand any thing in English.
After keeping practicing for awhile , he can finally speak the sentence.
I hope I will give them good espectideas about studying.
Hi, I'm not sure what you mean. Maybe aspects? I wouldn't use aspect here. You could say I hope I give them a good example on how to study or I hope I give them good ideas about studying, or good tips about studying.
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Nice job! I enjoyed reading it and good for you!
Jan. 8, 2022
Thank you so much.
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My kids are always curious about my study routines. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I try to do something new, they come around me and watch what I do. |
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Today, I get started to use an app which is for practising speaking in English. Today, I g Today, I get started to use an app A more native sounding use of language. There are many variations that are possible here. |
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One my kids wants to speak like me even though he can't understand any thing in English. One my kids wants to speak like me even though he can't understand a One of my kids wants to speak like me even though he can't understand any thing in English. Of is necessary in this case. |
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After keeping practicing , he can finally speak the sentence. After |
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It gives him a confidence to speak in English as well. It gives him Indefinite article not necessary. |
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I hope I will give them good espects about studying. I hope I will give them good Hi, I'm not sure what you mean. Maybe aspects? I wouldn't use aspect here. You could say I hope I give them a good example on how to study or I hope I give them good ideas about studying, or good tips about studying. I hope I will give them good e Use expectations for espects. |
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