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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 26, 2021

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Study Vlogs

Previously, I didn't understand why people posted video contents about studying themselves.

I didn't know why other people watched the contents.

Today, I feel down while doing my study routines.

It seems like burn-out or a lot of stress.

By accident, I see the study vlog and it hit me that I am participating and studying with them.

The video makes me cheep up and study again.

I finally understand the people who make the study vlogs and watch them.

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Study Vlogs

Previously, I didn't understand why people posted video contents about studying themselves.

Or: Previously, I didn't understand why people posted video contents about themselves studying.

I also didn't know why other people watched theat contents.

Today, I feelt down while doing my study routines.

It seems like burn-out or a lot of stress.

By accident, I see theaw a study vlog, and it hit me that I am participating and studying with them.

The video makesde me cheepr up and study again.

I finally understand the people who make the study vlogs and watch them.

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Study vlogs can be fun and encouraging. You're doing a great job! Keep it up! :)

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 27, 2021

402

Always thank you very much!

Study Vlogs

Today, I feelt down while doing my study routines.

All the actions in this text are already done. Therefore, use past tense for the whole text.

It seems like burn-out orand a lot of stress.

By accident, I seeaw the study vlog and it hit me that I am participating andI was shocked that I was studying with them.

I didn't quite understood the phrase 'hit me that I am participating and studying with them', so I presumed that you were surprised or shocked that you are doing the same thing as them.

The video makes me cheep up andcheered me up to study again.

I finally understanood the people who makde these study vlogs and why they watched them.

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 27, 2021

402

Thank you for your corrections.

Study Vlogs


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Previously, I didn't understand why people posted video contents about studying themselves.


Previously, I didn't understand why people posted video contents about studying themselves.

Or: Previously, I didn't understand why people posted video contents about themselves studying.

I didn't know why other people watched the contents.


I also didn't know why other people watched theat contents.

Today, I feel down while doing my study routines.


Today, I feelt down while doing my study routines.

All the actions in this text are already done. Therefore, use past tense for the whole text.

Today, I feelt down while doing my study routines.

It seems like burn-out or a lot of stress.


It seems like burn-out orand a lot of stress.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

By accident, I see the study vlog and it hit me that I am participating and studying with them.


By accident, I seeaw the study vlog and it hit me that I am participating andI was shocked that I was studying with them.

I didn't quite understood the phrase 'hit me that I am participating and studying with them', so I presumed that you were surprised or shocked that you are doing the same thing as them.

By accident, I see theaw a study vlog, and it hit me that I am participating and studying with them.

The video makes me cheep up and study again.


The video makes me cheep up andcheered me up to study again.

The video makesde me cheepr up and study again.

I finally understand the people who make the study vlogs and watch them.


I finally understanood the people who makde these study vlogs and why they watched them.

I finally understand the people who make the study vlogs and watch them.

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