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ericou

Dec. 4, 2023

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Study club

Recently, I been participating a study club. This is for the students who is preparing for the pilot apprenticeship. We gathered weekly on Thursday. It was quite an interesting event and it did come in handy. We booked a meeting room at the city's library few days before the event, and I have had to eat supper in the afternoon on this day because the meeting starts at 7pm. During the meeting, we shared information about either aviation or any ones that we need to know. After that, all of the members uploaded the article we were asked to bring to the event. We took turns to recite other's article in English and summarize after finished it. Then, we have to keep everyone's article in mind. When all of us are finished, each member will be alternately asked to recall what someone else's article is about. This practice is to simulate the real interview while we are in the recruitment process. I really appreciate all the members to practice no matter English or any interview skill with me.

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Recently, I been participating in a study club.

This is for the students who is preparing for the pilot apprenticeship.

We gathered weeklymeet every Thursday/We meet on Thursdays.

It was quite an interesting event, and it did come in handy.

We booked a meeting room at the city's library a few days before the event, and. I have had to eat supper in the afternoon on this dayThursdays/meeting days now because the meeting starts at 7pm.

During the meeting, we shared information about either aviation or any onesthing that we would need to know.

We took turns to reciteing each other's articles in English and summarized after finisheding it.

Then, we haved to keep everyone's article in mind.

When all of us are finished, each member will beas alternately asked to recall what someone else's article is about.

This practice ie purpose was to simulate the real interview while we aree would encounter in the recruitment process.

No matter if it's English or any other interview skill, I really appreciate all the members to practice no matter English or any interviewing any skill with me.

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Good luck on your interview! :)

The suggestions I made mainly concerned consistency of tenses (past vs. present)

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ericou

Dec. 7, 2023

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thanks for your work

Recently, I have been participating in a study club.

ThisIt is for the students who isare preparing for the pilot apprenticeship.

We booked a meeting room at the city's library a few days before the event, and I have had to eat supper in the afternoon on this day because the meeting starts at 7pm.

During the meeting, we shared information about either aviation or any onesthing that we need to know.

Not sure what you meant by "ones" but it didn't fit there. "information" would also work.

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ericou

Dec. 7, 2023

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thanks for your work

Recently, I have been participating a study club.

More natural: "I recently joined a study group."

This is for the students who isare preparing for the pilot apprenticeship.

More natural: "we're studying to become apprentice pilots"

We gatheredmeet weekly on Thursday.

More natural: "we meet on Thursdays" or "we meet every Thursday"

It was quite an interesting event and it did come in handy.

We booked a meeting room at the city's library a few days before the event, and. So, I have had to eat supper in the afternoon on thisese days because the meeting starts at 7pm.

During the meeting, we shared information about either aviation or any onesthing that we need to know.

After that, all of the members uploaded the article we were asked to bring to the event.

We took turns to reciteing each other's articles in English and summarize them after finished iting.

Then, we have to keep everyone's article in mind.

When all of us are finished, each member will be alternately asked to recall what someone else's article is about.

This practice is to simulate the real interview while we are in the recruitment process.

I really appreciate all the members to practice no matter English or any interview skill with me.

Not sure what you're trying to say here

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I assumed this was a meeting that happens more than once. Many of your sentences implied that it only happened once. If it was actually a single meeting, ignore those changes.

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ericou

Dec. 7, 2023

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Thanks. It's still happening actually. I got confused while typing this article.

Recently, I have been participating a study club.

This is for the students who isare preparing for the pilot apprenticeship.

We gathered weekly on Thursdays.

Or if the event is ongoing - "We gather weekly on Thursdays." works :)

We booked a meeting room atin the city's library few days before the event, and I have had to eat supper in the afternoon on this day, because the meeting startsed at 7pm.

During the meeting, we shared information about either aviation or any ones thatthing else we needed to know.

After that, all of the members uploaded the articles we were asked to bring to the event.

We took turns to recite each other's articles in English and summarize it after we finished it.

Then, we haved to keepremember everyone's article in minds.

When all of us awere finished, each member will be alternatelyas asked to recall what someone else's article iwas about.

This practice is to simulate thehow a real world interview would go, while we are in the recruitment process.

I really appreciate all the members help to practice, no matter whether it was English or any other interview skill with me.

Feedback

You swap a bit here between present tense and past tense - I have corrected it to be past tense as that's what you used more, but please let me know if that doesn't make sense :) Good work overall!

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ericou

Dec. 4, 2023

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thanks for the correction, yes i got confused choosing which tense to be used.

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cats

Dec. 4, 2023

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It can be tough! I still understood everything you were saying, so it's a great start. Great work :)

Then, we have to keep everyone's article in mind.


Then, we haved to keepremember everyone's article in minds.

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Then, we haved to keep everyone's article in mind.

Study club


Recently, I been participating a study club.


Recently, I have been participating a study club.

Recently, I have been participating a study club.

More natural: "I recently joined a study group."

Recently, I have been participating in a study club.

Recently, I been participating in a study club.

This is for the students who is preparing for the pilot apprenticeship.


This is for the students who isare preparing for the pilot apprenticeship.

This is for the students who isare preparing for the pilot apprenticeship.

More natural: "we're studying to become apprentice pilots"

ThisIt is for the students who isare preparing for the pilot apprenticeship.

This is for the students who is preparing for the pilot apprenticeship.

We gathered weekly on Thursday.


We gathered weekly on Thursdays.

Or if the event is ongoing - "We gather weekly on Thursdays." works :)

We gatheredmeet weekly on Thursday.

More natural: "we meet on Thursdays" or "we meet every Thursday"

We gathered weeklymeet every Thursday/We meet on Thursdays.

It was quite an interesting event and it did come in handy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was quite an interesting event, and it did come in handy.

We booked a meeting room at the city's library few days before the event, and I have had to eat supper in the afternoon on this day because the meeting starts at 7pm.


We booked a meeting room atin the city's library few days before the event, and I have had to eat supper in the afternoon on this day, because the meeting startsed at 7pm.

We booked a meeting room at the city's library a few days before the event, and. So, I have had to eat supper in the afternoon on thisese days because the meeting starts at 7pm.

We booked a meeting room at the city's library a few days before the event, and I have had to eat supper in the afternoon on this day because the meeting starts at 7pm.

We booked a meeting room at the city's library a few days before the event, and. I have had to eat supper in the afternoon on this dayThursdays/meeting days now because the meeting starts at 7pm.

During the meeting, we shared information about either aviation or any ones that we need to know.


During the meeting, we shared information about either aviation or any ones thatthing else we needed to know.

During the meeting, we shared information about either aviation or any onesthing that we need to know.

During the meeting, we shared information about either aviation or any onesthing that we need to know.

Not sure what you meant by "ones" but it didn't fit there. "information" would also work.

During the meeting, we shared information about either aviation or any onesthing that we would need to know.

After that, all of the members uploaded the article we were asked to bring to the event.


After that, all of the members uploaded the articles we were asked to bring to the event.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We took turns to recite other's article in English and summarize after finished it.


We took turns to recite each other's articles in English and summarize it after we finished it.

We took turns to reciteing each other's articles in English and summarize them after finished iting.

We took turns to reciteing each other's articles in English and summarized after finisheding it.

When all of us are finished, each member will be alternately asked to recall what someone else's article is about.


When all of us awere finished, each member will be alternatelyas asked to recall what someone else's article iwas about.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When all of us are finished, each member will beas alternately asked to recall what someone else's article is about.

This practice is to simulate the real interview while we are in the recruitment process.


This practice is to simulate thehow a real world interview would go, while we are in the recruitment process.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This practice ie purpose was to simulate the real interview while we aree would encounter in the recruitment process.

I really appreciate all the members to practice no matter English or any interview skill with me.


I really appreciate all the members help to practice, no matter whether it was English or any other interview skill with me.

I really appreciate all the members to practice no matter English or any interview skill with me.

Not sure what you're trying to say here

No matter if it's English or any other interview skill, I really appreciate all the members to practice no matter English or any interviewing any skill with me.

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