April 22, 2023
Currently, people live in a technology overdependent world, specially youth and teenage. They do not actually even know how to do certain tasks, in other historical moment, it woud be taken for granted, such as, prepare fire, food and more importantly, work in a team. That is the main reason behind the project it will described below.
There are two principal aims in this project, that is, encouraging student to be more self-sufficient and make them realise how important is to participate in a group to achieve a common goal.
According to the first topic, students will have to be able to set a fire, search for food and find the most appropiate materials to build a basic refugee to spend the night in. Those activities are interesting in order to improve their self-confidende and manual skills without using any kind of technology. Nonetheless, in this sense, the experience will not be reminded by the students in a different way than they would do having a trip in a natural park.
Most noticeable will be the social and cooperative skills they will gain, since these are useful towards their future, particularly, to work in group. They need to learn to communicate with different people and deal with misunderstandings. Otherwise, they will not be capable of achieving their goals, as there are not enough time to prepare them properly. Therefore communication and creativity will be indispensable between the different participants.
All in all, the most remarkable and useful learning after this activity will be, by far, social habilities, which are required in a teamwork, not to mention in other contexts of our life.
The following is the statement of an exercise created by Cambridge university (it is supposed to be correct), so please do not correct it. Any mistakes would be derived from using a jpg-txt tool.
Your principal has suggested a project in which groups of students spend three
days on a survival exercise, living in a remote place where they have to organise
their own shelter, food and heat. You have made the notes below.
The reasoning behind this proposal:
+ self-sufficiency
+ insight into different living conditions
+ teamwork
Some opinions expressed by
students:
“It could be dangerous.”
“Three days is too short to gain any
new insight.”
“Participants would need considerable
preparation.’
Write an essay discussing two of the arguments in your notes. You should
explain which argument you think is more important and provide reasons to
support your opinion.
You may, if you wish, make use of the opinions expressed in the discussion, but
you should use your own words as far as possible.
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Capital letters for important words in title
Currently, people live in a technology overdependent world, especially youths and teenagers.
They do not actually even know how to do certain tasks, in other historical moment, it that at any other stage in history would be taken for granted, such as, prepareing a fire, food and, more importantly, working in a team.
That is the main reason behind the project ithat will be described below.
There are two principal aims in this project, that is,: encouraging students to be more self-sufficient and makeing them realise how important is to participate in a group to achieve a common goal.
According to the first topic,For the first of these aims students will have to be able to set a fire, search for food and find the most appropriate materials to build a basic refugee to spend the night in.
Those activities are interesting in ordernecessary to improve their self-confidendce and manual skills without using any kind of technology.
Nonetheless, in this sense,However the experience will not be remindembered by the students in a different way than they would dothe same way as having a trip in a natural park.
Not sure what the original sentence is trying to say.
Most noticememorable will be the social and cooperative skills they will gain, since these are useful towards their future, particularly, to working in a group.
They need to learn to communicate with different people and deal with misunderstandings.
Otherwise, they will not be capable of achieving their goals, as there arewill not be enough time to prepare them properly.
Therefore, communication and creativity will be indispensable between the different participants.
All in all, the most remarkable and useful learning after this activity will be, by far, the social habilities, which are required in a teamwork, not to mention in other contexts of our life.
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Student trip project Student Capital letters for important words in title |
Currently, people live in a technology overdependent world, specially youth and teenage. Currently |
They do not actually even know how to do certain tasks, in other historical moment, it woud be taken for granted, such as, prepare fire, food and more importantly, work in a team. They do not |
That is the main reason behind the project it will described below. That is the main reason behind the project |
There are two principal aims in this project, that is, encouraging student to be more self-sufficient and make them realise how important is to participate in a group to achieve a common goal. There are two principal aims in this project |
According to the first topic, students will have to be able to set a fire, search for food and find the most appropiate materials to build a basic refugee to spend the night in.
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Those activities are interesting in order to improve their self-confidende and manual skills without using any kind of technology. Those activities are |
Nonetheless, in this sense, the experience will not be reminded by the students in a different way than they would do having a trip in a natural park.
Not sure what the original sentence is trying to say. |
Most noticeable will be the social and cooperative skills they will gain, since these are useful towards their future, particularly, to work in group. Most |
They need to learn to communicate with different people and deal with misunderstandings. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Otherwise, they will not be capable of achieving their goals, as there are not enough time to prepare them properly. Otherwise, they will not be capable of achieving their goals, as there |
Therefore communication and creativity will be indispensable between the different participants. Therefore, communication and creativity will be indispensable between the different participants. |
All in all, the most remarkable and useful learning after this activity will be, by far, social habilities, which are required in a teamwork, not to mention in other contexts of our life. All in all, the most remarkable and useful learning |
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