Jan. 1, 2025
STUDENT CLUBS ESSSAY PRACTİCE
STUDENT CLUBS
People need a good carrier for sustaining their lives. They go to university or start to work at their early ages. People who go to university want to build a good carrier to reach their dream lives. Some students prefer attending student clubs for some reasons. I think that attending a studdent club for students is esseantials for some reasons such as being enabled to have a strength network and expanding their knowledges.
Firstly, student clubs enable students to meet a lot of people who have different worldviews. İf students have a stron network that contain differrent peoplefrom different areas, it means that this student can reach almost all these people whenever he or she needs. According the needings, student with good network can easily find someone who can help herself/himself. Also network provides you some otherperspectives. You have a chance to listen, understand and accept others’s opinins. It expands your perspective. You can look at and evaluate problems from different perspectives. All of these makes students preferable people for companies. So, students can have better jobs.
Secondly, students clubs have some educations and bootcamps for students’ improvements. For exapmle if you have attended a software club, this club enables you to have some lessons about a computer language. Sometimes students look for someeducations online or face to face, but educations like this example can be expensive for students. Nevertheless,student clubs contribute improving skills educationsfor free or cheaper prices. Moreover, people have a tendency to learn easily and more conveniently when they join in a group has the same motivation. İn student clubs, there are many people who have some education. İt motivates students because they do not walk alona on this way.
On the other hand, thereare some people who think that student clubs are the waste of time. because student clubs expect students to spend their times for club activities. They think it takes a lot of time from students while students need time for studying their lessons. They might have a point. However, they should think about the opportunies that are given by these clubs. Yes, students need to spend their time for clubs but the spending time is for valuable experiences. If they know the worth things for their future from clubs, that is not a waste of time.
İn conclusion, whereas some people think that students club is spend a lot of time, clubs is very essential for students improvements. Clubs enable students to have an opportunity to meet new people and expand their network and also expand their knowledge about their interest. For all these reaosons, students should join one or more student clubs to build better carrier life.
STUDENT CLUBS
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People need a good carrieer for sustaining their lives.
Carrier = "something that carries" (e.g. a basket or a transportation company)
Career = your job
They go to university or start to working at their earlya young ages.
Grammatically it's "at young ages" or "at a young age". Of these "at a young age" sounds much more natural.
People who go to university want to build a good carrieer to reach their dream lives.
I think that attending a studdent club for students is esseantials for some reasons such as being enabled to have a streongth network and expanding theiyour knowledges.
"a student club for students" doesn't need students twice.
"knowledge" is not a countable verb, so stays as "knowledge" rather than becomes "knowledges"
"strength" is a noun, "strong" is the adjective
İf a students have a strong network that contain differrent people from different areas, it means that this student can reach almost all these people whenever he or she needs.
You're talking about a single student later on, so should start with "a student" rather than "students"
AccordingDepending on what they needings,, a student with good network can easily find someone who can help herself/himself.
"Needings" is not a word
Also a wide network provides you some other perspectives.
You have a chance to listen, understand and accept others’s' opinions.
All of these makes these students preferable peopmore desirable for companies.
Secondly, students clubs have some educations and bootcamps for students’ improvements.
For exapmple if you have attended a software club, this club enables you to havmight provide some lessons about a computerprogramming language.
Sometimes students look for some educations online or face to face, but educations like this example can be expensive for students.
Countable "educations" is a very niche word, generally uncountable "education" is used instead.
Nevertheless, student clubs contribute to improving skills and educations for free or cheaper prices.
İt motivates students because they do not walk alona on this way.e
On the other hand, there are some people who think that student clubs are the waste of time.
However, they should think about the opportunities that are given by these clubs.
Yes, students need to spend their time for clubs but the spending time is spent for valuable experiences.
If they know the worthwhile things for their future from clubs, that is not a waste of time.
"worth" isn't an adjective, "worthwhile" is the adjective you're looking for here
İn conclusion, whereas some people think that students club is spendwastes a lot of time, clubs isare very essential for students improvements.
"Spend" is neutral here, but since you're trying to use contrast with the latter sentence, you should use a more negative action, like "wastes"
"is" is for singular noun, "clubs" are plural so should use "are".
For all these reaosons, students should join one or more student clubs to build a better carriereer and life.
STUDENT CLUBS ESSSAY PRACTİCE
STUDENT CLUBS
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People need a good carrier for sustaining their lives.
I think you mean career, not carrier. Carrier is something you use to carry something else--like when you take a pet to the veterinarian. You put the pet in a pet carrier.
They go to university or start to work at their early ages.
This is grammatically correct, but not a normal way of saying when someone is young. You might say, "They go to university or start to work when they are young."
People who go to university want to build a good carrieer to reach their dream lives.
Some students prefer attending student clubs for some reasons.
Your meaning is not clear. Yes, some students like participating in student clubs.
I think that attending a studdent club for students is esseantials for some reasons such as being enabled to have a strength network and expanding their knowledges.
You used too many words to express your thought here. Maybe say, "I think participating in student clubs helps strengthen the student's network and expands their knowledge."
STUDENT CLUBS
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People need a good carrieer forto sustaining their lives.
Carrier is a thing that carries. A career is a job. Infinitive of sustain works fine. There isn't a subject to conjugate (I, you, she, etc)
They go to university or start to work at their early agesyoung.
People, who go to university, want to build a good carrieer to reachieve their dream lives.
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People want a good career so they go to university.
People go to university because they want a good career.
Dream lives=good career
I think that attending a studdent club for students is esseantials for some reasons such as being because it enableds to have a streongth network and expanding their knowledges.
"because" is fine
Firstly, sStudent clubs enable students to meet a lot of people who have different worldviews.
İf students have a strong network that contain differrent people from different areas, then it means that this student can reach almost all these people whenever he or sthey needs.
If... then statement
According theo their needings, students with good a network can easily find someone who can help therself/himselfm.
Someone can help himself but not me
Also networking provides you some other perspectives.
You have athe chance to listen, understand and accept others’s opinions.
It expands your perspective.
You can look at and evaluate problems from different perspectives.
All of these makes students preferable people for companies.
So, students can have better jobs.
Sentence repeats the same idea as the previous one, not necessary
Secondly, students clubs have some educationclasses and bootcamps for students’ improvements.
For exapmple, if you have attended a software club, then thise club enables youthem to have some lessons about a computer language.
Sometimes students look for someeducation classes online or face to face, but educations like this examplclasses like these can be expensive for students.
Nevertheless, student clubs contribute improving skills educationsclasses for free or cheaper prices.
Moreover, people have a tendency to learn easily and more conveniently when they join in a group that has the same motivation.
İIt motivates students because they do not walk alonae on this way.
On the other hand, there are some people who think that student clubs are the waste of time.
Comma splice connect the two sentences
because student clubs expect students to spend their times for club activities.
Plural of "time" is "time" singular and plural are same
Yes, students need to spend their time for clubs but the spending time is for valuable experiences.
İn conclusion, whereas some people think that students club is spend a lot of time, clubs is very essential for students improvements.
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STUDENT CLUBS
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People need a good carrieer for sustaining their lives.
They go to university or start to work at theiran early ages.
People who go to university want to build a good carrieer to reach their dream lives.
I think that attending a studdent club for students is esseantials for someeveral reasons such as being enabled to have a streongth network and expanding their knowledges.
İf students have a strong network that contains differrent people from different areas, it means that this student can reach almost all these people whenever he or she needs.
According the needings, student with good network can easily find someone who can help herself/himself.
Not quite sure what "according the needings" is supposed to mean.
Also a network provides you some other perspectives.
Secondly, students clubs have some educations and bootcamps for students’ improvements.
For exapmple if you have attended a software club, this club enables you to have some lessons about a computer language.
Sometimes students look for some educations online or face to face, but educations like this example can be expensive for students.
Nevertheless, student clubs contribute to improving skills and educations for free or cheaper prices.
Moreover, people have a tendency to learn easily and more conveniently when they join in a group that has the same motivation.
İt motivates students because they do not walk alonae on thise way.
On the other hand, thereare some people who think that student clubs are thea waste of time.
Yes, students need to spend their time for clubs but the spending timetime spent is for valuable experiences.
If they know thelearn worthy things for their future from clubs, that is not a waste of time.
İn conclusion, whereas some people think that students club is spendwaste a lot of time, in clubs is, clubs are very essential for students' improvements.
For all these reaosons, students should join one or more student clubs to build better a carrieer life.
Feedback
Good job! There are some problems with a/the and plural/singular, but those are some of the trickiest parts of the English language to master if they aren't the same in your native language.
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STUDENT CLUBS People need a good carrier for sustaining their lives. STUDENT CLUBS STUDENT CLUBS Carrier is a thing that carries. A career is a job. Infinitive of sustain works fine. There isn't a subject to conjugate (I, you, she, etc) STUDENT CLUBS I think you mean career, not carrier. Carrier is something you use to carry something else--like when you take a pet to the veterinarian. You put the pet in a pet carrier. STUDENT CLUBS Carrier = "something that carries" (e.g. a basket or a transportation company) Career = your job |
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They go to university or start to work at their early ages. They go to university or start to work at They go to university or start to work They go to university or start to work at their early ages. This is grammatically correct, but not a normal way of saying when someone is young. You might say, "They go to university or start to work when they are young." They go to university or start Grammatically it's "at young ages" or "at a young age". Of these "at a young age" sounds much more natural. |
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People who go to university want to build a good carrier to reach their dream lives. People who go to university want to build a good car People, who go to university, want to build a good car Or People want a good career so they go to university. People go to university because they want a good career. Dream lives=good career People who go to university want to build a good car People who go to university want to build a good car |
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Some students prefer attending student clubs for some reasons. Some students prefer attending student clubs for some reasons. Your meaning is not clear. Yes, some students like participating in student clubs. |
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I think that attending a studdent club for students is esseantials for some reasons such as being enabled to have a strength network and expanding their knowledges. I think that attending a stud I think that attending a stud "because" is fine I think that attending a stud You used too many words to express your thought here. Maybe say, "I think participating in student clubs helps strengthen the student's network and expands their knowledge." I think that attending a stud "a student club for students" doesn't need students twice. "knowledge" is not a countable verb, so stays as "knowledge" rather than becomes "knowledges" "strength" is a noun, "strong" is the adjective |
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Firstly, student clubs enable students to meet a lot of people who have different worldviews.
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İf students have a stron network that contain differrent peoplefrom different areas, it means that this student can reach almost all these people whenever he or she needs. İf students have a strong network that contains differ İf students have a strong network that contain differ If... then statement İf a student You're talking about a single student later on, so should start with "a student" rather than "students" |
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Also network provides you some otherperspectives. Also a network provides you some other perspectives. Also networking provides you some other perspectives. Also a wide network provides you some other perspectives. |
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All of these makes students preferable people for companies. All of these makes students preferable All of these makes these students |
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So, students can have better jobs.
Sentence repeats the same idea as the previous one, not necessary |
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Secondly, students clubs have some educations and bootcamps for students’ improvements. Secondly, students clubs have some education S Secondly, student |
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For exapmle if you have attended a software club, this club enables you to have some lessons about a computer language. For exa For exa For exa |
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Sometimes students look for someeducations online or face to face, but educations like this example can be expensive for students. Sometimes students look for some education Sometimes students look for some Sometimes students look for some education Countable "educations" is a very niche word, generally uncountable "education" is used instead. |
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Nevertheless,student clubs contribute improving skills educationsfor free or cheaper prices. Nevertheless, student clubs contribute to improving skills and education Nevertheless, student clubs contribute improving skills Nevertheless, student clubs contribute to improving skills and education |
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Moreover, people have a tendency to learn easily and more conveniently when they join in a group has the same motivation. Moreover, people have a tendency to learn easily and more conveniently when they join in a group that has the same motivation. Moreover, people have a tendency to learn easily |
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İn student clubs, there are many people who have some education. |
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İt motivates students because they do not walk alona on this way. İt motivates students because they do not walk alon
İt motivates students because they do not walk alon |
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On the other hand, thereare some people who think that student clubs are the waste of time. On the other hand, thereare some people who think that student clubs are On the other hand, there are some people who think that student clubs are the waste of time Comma splice connect the two sentences On the other hand, there are some people who think that student clubs are the waste of time. |
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because student clubs expect students to spend their times for club activities. because student clubs expect students to spend their time Plural of "time" is "time" singular and plural are same |
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They think it takes a lot of time from students while students need time for studying their lessons. |
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They might have a point. |
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However, they should think about the opportunies that are given by these clubs. However, they should think about the opportunities that are given by these clubs. |
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Yes, students need to spend their time for clubs but the spending time is for valuable experiences. Yes, students need to spend their time for clubs but the Yes, students need to spend their time for clubs Yes, students need to spend their time for clubs but the |
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If they know the worth things for their future from clubs, that is not a waste of time. If they If they know "worth" isn't an adjective, "worthwhile" is the adjective you're looking for here |
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İn conclusion, whereas some people think that students club is spend a lot of time, clubs is very essential for students improvements. İn conclusion, whereas some people think that students İn conclusion, İn conclusion, whereas some people think that students club "Spend" is neutral here, but since you're trying to use contrast with the latter sentence, you should use a more negative action, like "wastes" "is" is for singular noun, "clubs" are plural so should use "are". |
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Clubs enable students to have an opportunity to meet new people and expand their network and also expand their knowledge about their interest. |
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For all these reaosons, students should join one or more student clubs to build better carrier life. For all these rea For all these rea |
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According the needings, student with good network can easily find someone who can help herself/himself. A Not quite sure what "according the needings" is supposed to mean. According t Someone can help himself but not me
"Needings" is not a word |
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You have a chance to listen, understand and accept others’s opinins. You have You have a chance to listen, understand and accept others |
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It expands your perspective. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can look at and evaluate problems from different perspectives. You can |
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