May 16, 2022
Stress among young people
Theme: Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. In today's modern world, so many things can be stressors for teenagers. Currently, the development of technology is significantly fast and because of that, some people have trouble with adapting new kind of lifestyle.
Some teenagers strongly addicted by the internet, for instance. I, myself, addicted by YouTube and watching YouTube in the middle of the night always makes me stay up late.
Furthermore, as a student, internet addiction can be an obstacle of study. In that kind of way, due to the development of new technology, teenagers can get stressed.
However, from my perspective, today's teenagers have less stress level compared to the previous generations. I guess it depends on the definition of previous, but in general, stress level has a lot to do with economics, not only for adults but also for teenagers, as economical wealth can affect great deal of things for teenagers like parents' jobs, demands for a part-time job, price of comodity and so on. In that sense, most countries has grew in economically compared to 1900s. It means today's teenagers have more options for their job, enable to get money easily, able to go to the private university, etc.
In conclusion, new technology like SNS can have a bad influence on teenagers. But I would like to mention that today's teenagers have more happy lives than previous generations and it can be explained by the economic growth, in my opinion.
Stress among young people
Theme: Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than (the) previous generations.
To introduce sth. new
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that today's teenagers have more stressful lives than (the) previous generations.
In today's modern world, so many things can be stressors for teenagers/there are many factors that causes stress to teenagers.
Repetition, today and modern mean the same thing.
More natural
Currently/Nowadays, the development of technology is significantly fast and because of that, some people have trouble with adapting new kinds of lifestyles.
Some teenagers are strongly addicted byto the internet, for instance.
"by the internet" means the internet is forcing/making you to be addicted to it
I, myself, is addicted byto YouTube and watching YouTube in the middle of the night always makes me stay up late.
Furthermore, as a student, internet addiction can be an obstacle ofor study.
In that kind of way, due to the development of new technology, teenagers can get stressed.
However, from my perspective, today's teenagers have less stress level compared to the previous generations.
I guess it depends on the definition of previous, but in general, stress level has a lot to do with economics, not only for adults but also for teenagers, a. As economical wealth can affect great dealvariety of things for teenagers like parents' jobs, demands for a part-time job, price of commodity and so on.
In that sense, most countries hasve grew in economically compared to 1900s.
s.-v. agr.
It means today's teenagers have more options for their job, enable them to get money easily, able to go to the private university, etc.
In conclusion, new technology like SNS can have a bad influence on teenagers.
But I would like to mention that today's teenagers have more happy lives than previous generations and. For example, it can be explained by the economic growth, in my opinion.
In my opinion is always put in the beginning of a sentence
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Theme: Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Theme: Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than (the) previous generations. To introduce sth. new |
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Discuss this view and give your own opinion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some people argue that today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Some people argue that today's teenagers have more stressful lives than (the) previous generations. |
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In today's modern world, so many things can be stressors for teenagers. In today's Repetition, today and modern mean the same thing. More natural |
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Currently, the development of technology is significantly fast and because of that, some people have trouble with adapting new kind of lifestyle. Currently/Nowadays, the development of technology is significantly fast and because of that, some people have trouble with adapting new kinds of lifestyles. |
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Some teenagers strongly addicted by the internet, for instance. Some teenagers are strongly addicted "by the internet" means the internet is forcing/making you to be addicted to it |
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I, myself, addicted by YouTube and watching YouTube in the middle of the night always makes me stay up late. I, myself, is addicted |
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Furthermore, as a student, internet addiction can be an obstacle of study. Furthermore, as a student, internet addiction can be an obstacle |
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In that kind of way, due to the development of new technology, teenagers can get stressed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, from my perspective, today's teenagers have less stress level compared to the previous generations. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I guess it depends on the definition of previous, but in general, stress level has a lot to do with economics, not only for adults but also for teenagers, as economical wealth can affect great deal of things for teenagers like parents' jobs, demands for a part-time job, price of comodity and so on. I guess it depends on the definition of previous, but in general, stress level has a lot to do with economics, not only for adults but also for teenagers |
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In that sense, most countries has grew in economically compared to 1900s. In that sense, most countries ha s.-v. agr. |
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It means today's teenagers have more options for their job, enable to get money easily, able to go to the private university, etc. It means today's teenagers have more options for their job, enable them to get money easily, |
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In conclusion, new technology like SNS can have a bad influence on teenagers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I would like to mention that today's teenagers have more happy lives than previous generations and it can be explained by the economic growth, in my opinion. But I would like to mention that today's teenagers have more happy lives than previous generations In my opinion is always put in the beginning of a sentence |
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