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SummerTeaWater

March 2, 2022

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Streak for Making Habits

In my opinion, there are four streak points for making a new habit.

As you may know, it is very hard to keep doing new things more than 3 days.

If it is possible to keep doing it for 21 days, the obstacle in my mind vanishes.

This is the first goal of the streak.

For doing it automatically, I think it is necessary to keep doing it for more than 100 days.

If you don't do it, it gets awkward.

I can do it without conscious if I can keep doing it for 1 year streak..

It finally becomes a habit after 1000 day streak.

Overall, it is very hard to make a habit.

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In my opinion, there are four streak points forthings you need to do to makinge a new habit.

Changed "streak points for making" to "things you need to do to make" to sound more natural in English.

As you may know, it is very hard to keep doing new things more than 3 days.

If it is possible toI can keep doing itsomething for 21 days straight, the obstacle in my mind vanishes.

Edited to sound more natural.

This is the first goal of the streak.

For doing itTo do something automatically, I think it is necessary to keepcontinue doing it for more than 100 days.

If you don't do it, it gets awkwardmore difficult to do.

I don't think "awkward" is the right word here, so I edited this sentence.

I can do it without unconsciously if I can keep doing it for 1 year streak.a streak for over 1 year.

It finally becomes a habit after 1000 day streak.

Overall, it is very hard to make a habit.

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잘 쓰셨습니다!

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SummerTeaWater

March 3, 2022

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고맙습니다! ㅎㅎ

In my opinion, there are four streakkey points for makto forming a new habit.

As you may know, it is very hard to keep doing new things for more than 3 days.

If it is possible to keep doing it for 21 days, the obstacle in my mind vanishes.

This is the first goal of the streak.

ForTo eventually end up doing it automatically, I think it is necessary to keep doing it for more than 100 days.

If you don't do it, it gets awkwarddifficult.

I can do it without consciousthinking if I can keep doing it for 1one year streak.aight.

It finally becomes a habit after a 1000 day streak.

Overall, it is very hard to makcreate a habit.

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You have an awesome writing streak! Great work! :)

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SummerTeaWater

March 3, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Streak fors and Making Habits

In my opinion, there are four streak pokey thintgs forto makinge a new habit.

As you may know, it is very hard to keep doing new things more than 3 days.

If it is possible to keep doing it for 21 days, the obstacle in my mind vanishes.

This is the first goal of the streak.

Not sure how to rephrase it but to me, it does not sound "correct". maybe something like "This is the first way to maintain a streak"

For doingTo (be able to) do it automatically, I think it is necessary to keep doing it for more than 100 days.

If you don't do it, it gets awkwardmore difficult.

Not sure how to rephrase this one.

I can do it without consciousautomatically if I can keep doing it for 1 year streak..

It finally becomes a habit after 1000 day streaks.

Overall, it is very hard to make a habit.

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A very good piece of writing, it is true what you say, keep up your writing! :)

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SummerTeaWater

March 3, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Streak fors and Making Habits

In my opinion, there are four streak pointmilestones for making a new habit.

As you may know, it is very hard to keep doing new things more than 3 days.

If it is possible to keep doing it for 21 days, the obstacle in my mind vanishes.

This is the first goal of the streak.

ForTo get to the point of doing it automatically, I think it is necessary to keep doing it for more than 100 days.

If you don't do it, it gets awkwardbecomes hard to keep the streak going.

'Awkward' is not the right word here, but I'm unsure what you could replace it with. You could say what I replaced it with, but I'm not sure how to preserve your intended meaning fully.

I can do it without unconsciously if I can keep doing it forup a 1 year streak..

Use an adverb here.

It finally becomes a habit after 1000 day streak.

Overall, it is very hard to make a habit.

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Very well written and interesting to read. If I were you, I would try thinking about what I want to say in English first before writing it. It sounds to me like you're thinking about what you want to say and phrasing it in your native language, and that's not translating well over into English (like with the word 'awkward'). It's a good piece of writing overall I reckon.

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SummerTeaWater

March 2, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Streak for Making Habits


Streak fors and Making Habits

Streak fors and Making Habits

In my opinion, there are four streak points for making a new habit.


In my opinion, there are four streak pointmilestones for making a new habit.

In my opinion, there are four streak pokey thintgs forto makinge a new habit.

In my opinion, there are four streakkey points for makto forming a new habit.

In my opinion, there are four streak points forthings you need to do to makinge a new habit.

Changed "streak points for making" to "things you need to do to make" to sound more natural in English.

As you may know, it is very hard to keep doing new things more than 3 days.


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As you may know, it is very hard to keep doing new things for more than 3 days.

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If it is possible to keep doing it for 21 days, the obstacle in my mind vanishes.


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If it is possible toI can keep doing itsomething for 21 days straight, the obstacle in my mind vanishes.

Edited to sound more natural.

This is the first goal of the streak.


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This is the first goal of the streak.

Not sure how to rephrase it but to me, it does not sound "correct". maybe something like "This is the first way to maintain a streak"

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For doing it automatically, I think it is necessary to keep doing it for more than 100 days.


ForTo get to the point of doing it automatically, I think it is necessary to keep doing it for more than 100 days.

For doingTo (be able to) do it automatically, I think it is necessary to keep doing it for more than 100 days.

ForTo eventually end up doing it automatically, I think it is necessary to keep doing it for more than 100 days.

For doing itTo do something automatically, I think it is necessary to keepcontinue doing it for more than 100 days.

If you don't do it, it gets awkward.


If you don't do it, it gets awkwardbecomes hard to keep the streak going.

'Awkward' is not the right word here, but I'm unsure what you could replace it with. You could say what I replaced it with, but I'm not sure how to preserve your intended meaning fully.

If you don't do it, it gets awkwardmore difficult.

Not sure how to rephrase this one.

If you don't do it, it gets awkwarddifficult.

If you don't do it, it gets awkwardmore difficult to do.

I don't think "awkward" is the right word here, so I edited this sentence.

I can do it without conscious if I can keep doing it for 1 year streak..


I can do it without unconsciously if I can keep doing it forup a 1 year streak..

Use an adverb here.

I can do it without consciousautomatically if I can keep doing it for 1 year streak..

I can do it without consciousthinking if I can keep doing it for 1one year streak.aight.

I can do it without unconsciously if I can keep doing it for 1 year streak.a streak for over 1 year.

It finally becomes a habit after 1000 day streak.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It finally becomes a habit after 1000 day streaks.

It finally becomes a habit after a 1000 day streak.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Overall, it is very hard to make a habit.


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Overall, it is very hard to makcreate a habit.

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