Feb. 14, 2024
Streak 2: Clothes
I've never been that interested in looking good or even just having nice clothes. For me being comfortable and "clean" was enough or it felt like enough. However, now my mother tells me regularly that I have to take more care of how I look to other people and I don't think she's wrong. Nowadays the image we proyect affect us, people treat us for how we look, sadly or not. So right now I'm looking to look better, yes, but also that the clothes I wear tell something about who I am, show some identity. The tomboy style is the one that I like the most but some misconceptions from my parents lead to some discussions about what I should wear as a woman. I have many thoughts about this honestly, and I'm trying to figure it out what to think and do.
That's all, thanks for reading!
I've never been that interested in looking good or even just having nice clothes.
For me being comfortable and "clean" was enough or it felt like enough.
However, now my mother tells me regularly tells me that I have to take more care of how I look to other people and I don't think she's wrong.
I moved "to other people" to the next sentence.
Nowadays the image we proyject to others affects us, p. People treat us for how we look, sadly or notdifferently based on how we look.
the image: singular --> the image... affects us
So right now I'm looktrying to look better, yes, but alsoimprove my appearance, yes, and make sure that the clothes I wear tell people something about who I am, to show some identity.
The tomboy style is the one that I like the most but some misconceptions from my parents lead to some discussions about what I should wear as a woman.
the past tense of lead is led
Honestly, I have many thoughts about this honestly, and I'm trying to figure it out what to think and what to do.
That's all, thanks for reading!
Feedback
Very well written, como siempre. :-)
Streak 2: Clothes
I've never been that interested in looking good or even just having nice clothes.
For me being comfortable and "clean" was enough or it felt like enough.
However, now my mother tells me regularly tells me that I have to takepay more care ofattention to how I look to other people and I don't think she's wrong.
Nowadays the image we proyject affects us; sadly, people treat us for how we look, sadly or notdifferently based on how we look.
So right now I'm looktrying to look better, yes, but I also thawant the clothes I wear to tell people something about who I am, and to show some identity.
The tomboy style is the one that I like the most but some misconceptions from my parents lead to some discussions about what I should wear as a woman.
I have many thoughts about this honestly, and I'm trying to figure it out what to think and do.
That's all, thanks for reading!
Feedback
Nicely written! Good luck with finding your style :)
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